Talk:Statue of William Francis Bartlett

Statue of William Francis Bartlett has been listed as one of the Art and architecture good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: June 15, 2021. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Statue of William Francis Bartlett/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Card Carrying Parrot (talk · contribs) 02:27, 15 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I will begin reviewing the article. Give me a good 3-5 days. Card Carrying Parrot (talk) 02:27, 15 June 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Comments

Lead

Add the materiel it is made of directly in the first sentence (eg. 'A bronze statue of William Francis Barnett...')
Replace 'who had served as a general in the Union Army' with 'a general in the Union Army'
That aside, lead is excellent

MOS compliance

Per MOS:OL, United States and Massachusetts should not be in the lead (keep Boston)

Brevity/Writing

WP:MOS/Accessibility, add an alternative caption to the image in the infobox
Replace 'decided that the' with 'decided the' (outside of this I can spot no errors, including weasel words, etc)

Sourcing

Excellent sourcing (both sources are WP:RS)
'The State House: Boston Massachusetts' should have an ISBN (I found one online - it is unfortunately not on the Google Books page)
I would ideally also want more than two sources, although this is certainly enough
No original research is present

Broadness

The article goes into quite a bit of detail (eg. giving a nice background section which introduces Bartlett, how it bears a green patina, the celebration, and even the music played at the celebration - this seems almost WP:FA level comprehensiveness)
I quite like how the article is both comparatively comprehensive, yet also well written

Neutrality

No issues here

Stability

No issues here

Images

Illustrated with an image
If possible, find photos/paintings/images of the unveiling (probably don't exist unfortunately), or add a picture/photo/painting of Bartlett

Aside from extremely minor 'issues,' this article is certainly a good article. Great job working on it.

Talk:Statue of William Francis Bartlett

GA Review

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