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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 02:01, 30 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments later in the week. Some Dude From North Carolinawanna talk? 02:01, 30 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

  • Editor Mary Jo Markey is credited first in the poster so they should be credited first in the infobox.
 Done Chompy Ace 06:33, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is the mention of the $258.6 million net budget necessary?
 Done removed Chompy Ace 06:33, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 06:33, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Fix the following redirect: "[[List of highest-grossing films in Canada and the United States|highest-grossing film in North America]]" → ""[[List of highest-grossing films in the United States and Canada|highest-grossing film in North America]]""
 Done, also changed wording per WP:FILMBOXOFFICE Chompy Ace 06:33, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "third-highest-grossing film at the time of the release" → "third-highest-grossing film at the time of its release"
 Done Chompy Ace 06:33, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The film received five nominations" → "The film received numerous accolades, including five nominations"
 Done Chompy Ace 06:33, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Plot

  • This section is 679 words, so there's no problems with WP:FILMPLOT.
 Already done Chompy Ace 07:13, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Cast

  • This archive does not mention any description of any character.
 Done relocated as in Avengers: Endgame#Cast Chompy Ace 06:39, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "don't change…" isn't working.
 Fixed now marked as dead Chompy Ace 06:39, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Try changing all uses of "..." in this section and in others to "[...]" as it's more visually pleasing.
 Done Chompy Ace 09:25, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
This hasn't been changed.
 Done all uses now [...] Chompy Ace 20:38, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Han does not" → "[Han] does not"
 Done Chompy Ace 06:45, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Some things don't change…" → "Some things don't change."
 Done Chompy Ace 06:45, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "a fairy tale…" → "a fairy tale."
 Done Chompy Ace 06:45, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "more broken hearted" isn't working.
 Fixed now marked as dead Chompy Ace 06:54, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "He's been taught about [Luke]" → "He's been taught about Luke Skywalker"
 Done Chompy Ace 06:46, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "suggest things" isn't working.
 Fixed now marked as dead Chompy Ace 06:54, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Any reason why the description for Lor San Tekka isn't formatted the same way as the other characters?
 Already done per consistency with MCU films to have their formatting, in that case do not have quotations or notes. Examples are Black Widow (2021 film)#Cast and Shang-Chi and the Legend of the Ten Rings#Cast. Chompy Ace 06:41, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done removed Chompy Ace 06:58, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "Vocal Consultants" isn't working.
 Fixed now marked as dead Chompy Ace 06:58, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "Statura, an admiral in the Resistance" isn't working.
 Fixed now marked as dead Chompy Ace 06:58, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The second reference after "dealer on Jakku" isn't working.
 Fixed now marked as dead Chompy Ace 06:59, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Kiran Shah isn't mentioned in this citation.
 Done added reference pre-existed from the BFI Chompy Ace 07:00, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Move the references after "Thomas Brodie-Sangster and Kate Fleetwood" to the end of the sentence they're in.
 Done Chompy Ace 07:08, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 07:05, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The second reference after "cameo as stormtroopers" isn't working.
 Fixed now marked as dead Chompy Ace 07:05, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "Resistance officer" isn't working.
 Fixed now marked as dead Chompy Ace 07:05, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "Captain Cypress" isn't working.
 Fixed now marked as dead Chompy Ace 07:05, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Additionally, minor roles appear in the film including: Crystal Clarke, Pip Andersen,[1] Christina Chong,[1] Miltos Yerolemou,[1] Amybeth Hargreaves,[1] Leanne Best,[1] Judah Friedlander,[1] and Kevin Smith.[1]" → "Additionally, Crystal Clarke, Pip Andersen,[1] Christina Chong,[1] Miltos Yerolemou,[1] Amybeth Hargreaves,[1] Leanne Best,[1] Judah Friedlander,[1] and Kevin Smith appear in minor roles.[1]"
 Done Chompy Ace 07:11, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "and musicians" isn't working.
 Already done removed per Special:Diff/1003881307 Chompy Ace 07:12, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Production

Development

  • Are the four references after "The Force Awakens' first screenplay was written by Michael Arndt" all needed? Seems like it falls under WP:OVERLINK.
 Done now 1 reference Chompy Ace 02:17, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • It feels like there's a rough transition between George Lucas and Luke Skywalker, so I would link Luke Skywalker and put his name in full the first time he's mentioned.
 Done Chompy Ace 02:24, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Original Trilogy" → "original trilogy"
 Done Chompy Ace 02:24, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done removed Chompy Ace 02:17, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • J. J. Abrams didn't say he "[returned] to the roots of the first Star Wars film", he said he went back to the roots of the first films". Not the first film, the first films.
 Done Chompy Ace 02:24, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "studying languages such as Hindi and Gujarati" → "studying various languages, such as Hindi and Gujarati".
 Done Chompy Ace 02:24, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 23:42, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Pre-production

  • Since its still about the British: "the film industry" → "its film industry"
 Done Chompy Ace 02:31, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 02:31, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why is Daniel Mindel mentioned twice?
 Done reduced to last name Chompy Ace 02:31, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Casting

  • Couldn't find any mention of Ireland or a city from the country in this, this, or this.
 Done removed Ireland Chompy Ace 05:45, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is the image necessary if you can't see a single person?
 Done moved image at the Cast section (similar to Avengers: Age of Ultron#Cast) Chompy Ace 06:20, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The claim that "Casting began around August 2013" needs a reference.
 Done removed Chompy Ace 06:20, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Link and archive this reference to the citation after "the script by Kasdan and Abrams".
 Done Chompy Ace 06:20, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference after "Frida Gustavsson" is dead.
 Fixed marked as dead Chompy Ace 06:20, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "into April. In April" → "into April. That same month,"
 Done Chompy Ace 06:20, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • As he was already mentioned in this section: "Hamill, Serkis, Oscar Isaac" → "Hamill, Serkis, Isaac"
 Done Chompy Ace 06:20, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The sentence "The announcement was originally planned for May 4, but was announced early for fear of media leaks" needs a reference.
 Done removed Chompy Ace 06:20, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 06:20, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "to accommodate him" is dead.
 Fixed marked as dead Chompy Ace 06:20, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Filming

  • The reference after "65 mm IMAX format" is dead.
 Fixed marked as dead Chompy Ace 21:53, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 21:53, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Some long captions have periods, some don't. Try to be consistent here, and in the rest of the article.
 Done, as in Avengers: Age of Ultron, with every image's captions do not have a period Chompy Ace 21:53, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 21:53, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Post-production

  • Mark the reference after "Disney Research" with "|url-access=subscription"
 Done Chompy Ace 21:53, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "as 124–125 minutes" → "as 124 minutes"
 Done Chompy Ace 21:53, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "nothing to do there of value, except to be sitting around" → "nothing to do there of value [...] So we ended up leaving those things out."
 Done Chompy Ace 21:53, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Music

  • Is the entire quote after "in ways that" necessary. Try making it shorter.
 Done Chompy Ace 21:55, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 21:55, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The two references after "remainder of the recordings" mention LA, so maybe mention that in the article as well.
 Done Chompy Ace 21:55, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • A reference is needed for Williams saying recording sessions were "very luxurious".
 Done removed Chompy Ace 21:55, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The following sentences also need references for verification: "The score was recorded by the Hollywood Studio Symphony, a freelance orchestra, with sessions continuing on and off over that five-month period. The 90-piece orchestra recorded 175 minutes of music, although nearly an hour of that was discarded, modified, or rerecorded as Abrams reedited the film. Williams' theme for Snoke was recorded by a 24-voice men's chorus."
 Done for adding a reference,  Partly done for rewording a copied text within the reference Chompy Ace 21:55, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Release

  • "(such as Italy and France, releasing it on a Wednesday)" → "(such as Italy and France)"
 Done Chompy Ace 23:07, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Remove "(releasing on a Thursday)".
 Done Chompy Ace 23:07, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Fixed changed reference Chompy Ace 23:07, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Where did "4,134 theaters" come from?
 Done added reference Chompy Ace 23:07, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Why is information about the title in this section? Seems like something that would go in #Post-production.
 Done moved Chompy Ace 23:07, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Consistency: "ten thousand" → "10,000"
 Done Chompy Ace 23:07, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "In total it sold over $50 million in pre-sales breaking the record." → "In total, it sold over $50 million in pre-sales, breaking the record."
 Done Chompy Ace 23:07, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Mark the reference after "main titles" with "url-access=subscription".
 Done Chompy Ace 23:07, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • A reference is needed for the claim that "Ultimately, Disney's logo was largely absent from the film's marketing—but nonetheless, appeared on merchandise and the startup sequences of Star Wars smartphone games".
 Done removed Chompy Ace 23:07, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Marketing

  • Sort of like in The Social Network article, make this subsection its own section in between #Music and #Release.
 Done Chompy Ace 06:12, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "the significance of the new characters" is dead.
 Fixed marked as dead Chompy Ace 06:12, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 06:12, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "several characters" is dead. Additionally, the archive isn't working.
 Fixed Chompy Ace 06:12, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The second teaser being watched 88 million times broke which record?
 Done removed records Chompy Ace 06:12, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The event was broadcast live". If you are referring to the trailer just say "The trailer" or "The teaser".
 Done removed Chompy Ace 06:12, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 06:12, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • A reference is needed for the claim that the third trailer "debuted during the halftime break of Monday Night Football, before being released online".
 Done added Chompy Ace 06:12, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "since France is one of the first countries" → "since France was one of the first countries"
 Done Chompy Ace 06:12, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Tie-in literature and merchandise

  • "with releases from multiple publishers starting in late 2015" → "with were released by multiple publishers starting in late 2015"
 Done Chompy Ace 07:37, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Mark the reference after "until January 2016" as "url-access=subscription"
 Done Chompy Ace 07:37, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 07:37, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Sorry, I suggested a sentence with a typo: "with were released by multiple publishers starting in late 2015" → "which were released by multiple publishers starting in late 2015"
 Done Chompy Ace 20:51, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Video games

  • Can this section be changed to just prose instead of a list of games? The current format seems weird compared to the rest of the article.
 Done converted to prose Chompy Ace 07:33, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Since they're short, combine both paragraphs into one.
 Done Chompy Ace 22:33, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Home media

  • The sentence "The home media release contains additional footage" seems short, and the reference being used contains more than just that.
 Done expanded Chompy Ace 07:41, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 07:38, 3 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Reception

Box office

  • The first reference being used says the film made "$936.6 million" in the US and Canada. Box Mojo is the one saying "$936.7 million", so I would just cite that.
 Done Chompy Ace 00:03, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • I couldn't find "110 million tickets" in this reference, and it's already covered at the end of the sentence with this.
 Fixed Chompy Ace 00:03, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "($128 million)" is dead.
 Fixed marked as dead Chompy Ace 00:03, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Is the claim that the film had "the most tickets sold by any film in the United States and Canada since Titanic (1997) ($128 million)" actually covered here?
 Done removed Chompy Ace 00:03, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Commercial analysis
  • No mention of "4,134 theaters" here.
 Fixed added pre-existing reference Chompy Ace 00:13, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The first and third references after "$175–250 million" are from December, so change "In November" to "Months prior to the film's release"
 Done Chompy Ace 00:16, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "that the film will be the first" → "that the film would be the first"
 Done removed Chompy Ace 00:10, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done removed Chompy Ace 00:10, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The second reference after "Avatar's global gross" is dead.
 Fixed marked as dead Chompy Ace 00:10, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I said the second one was dead, not the first.
 Fixed Chompy Ace 01:08, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "analysts feel that it lacked the novelty factor; they also cite" → "analysts felt that it lacked the novelty factor; they also cited"
 Done Chompy Ace 00:16, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "previously done. Films do not play in overseas theaters as long as they did back when Avatar was released" → "previously done, and for films not playing in overseas theaters as long as they did back when Avatar was released"
 Done Chompy Ace 01:12, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Mike Fleming of Deadline.com" → "Mike Fleming of Deadline Hollywood"
 Done Chompy Ace 00:06, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The following changes are needed because the quote is off: "the net profit to Disney an astounding $923M, and the Cash on Cash Return twice that of any other film [released in 2016], at 2.31" → "the net profit to Disney was an astounding $780.11M, and the Cash on Cash Return was twice that of any other film [released in 2016], at 2.00."
 Done Chompy Ace 01:12, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "when Avatar was released" → "when Avatar was released"
 Done Chompy Ace 01:51, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
United States and Canada
  • Couldn't find "$119.1 million" here or here, but it's probably in another source.
minus Replaced reference with Deadline Hollywood Chompy Ace 21:01, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • I also couldn't find "$62.1 million" here.
 Done removed Chompy Ace 21:06, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "$247,966,675" is really specific, and it's not in this source. "$59,982 per theater (or $17,220 per screen)" is also not there.
 Done removed "59,982 per theater (or $17,220 per screen)" claim, minus Replaced reference with The Numbers Chompy Ace 21:15, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "record holder(s)" → "record holders"
 Done Chompy Ace 20:15, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "in its original run" is dead.
 Done Chompy Ace 20:15, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Couldn't find "$190.8 million" or "$63.6 million per day" here. I also couldn't find "The opening-weekend audience was evenly split among those under and over the age of 25, with 58% of the audience male, 71% adults, 20% families, and 9% teenagers" in the reference.
 Done removed Chompy Ace 21:21, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Add a website parameter to the reference after "biggest single- and opening-day record".
 Done Chompy Ace 02:17, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Other territories
  • Add a comma after December 16, 2015.
 Done Chompy Ace 20:15, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Distribute the references after "16 other countries".
 Done Chompy Ace 02:25, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • This reference says the film made $14.4 million in the UK, not $14.3 million.
 Done Chompy Ace 02:17, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • I couldn't find "Mexico ($3.4 million)" or "Italy ($3.1 million)" here. Additionally, the reference says Japan made $3 million, not $3.1M.
 Done Chompy Ace 02:17, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Where did "72 markets" come from?
 Done removed Chompy Ace 02:17, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "United Kingdom, Ireland and Malta ($50.6 million)" → "United Kingdom ($50.6 million)" per this source.
 Done Chompy Ace 02:17, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Shouldn't the sentence that starts with "Revenues in the film's second weekend decreased by only 39.8% in the United States and Canada" be in #United_States_and_Canada?
 Done Chompy Ace 02:17, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
This wasn't done.
 Done moved Chompy Ace 21:12, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "$70 million in 10 days" → "$70 million in 11 days"
 Done Chompy Ace 02:17, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Critical response

  • Could bullet points be added to the cite bundle after "positive reviews from critics"?
 Done Chompy Ace 21:41, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Update RT.
 Done Chompy Ace 21:41, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "women, under-25s and under-18s" → "women, and people under the ages of 25 and 18"
 Done Chompy Ace 21:43, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • In this section, try removing some quotes, paraphrasing, and better categorizing (making paragraphs that talk about the same thing) using WP:RECEPTION.
 Done Chompy Ace 02:10, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Accolades

  • The two references after "2016 Critics' Choice Awards" don't mention The Force Awakens.
minus Replaced both refs to a sole ref The Hollywood Reporter, which mentions the film Chompy Ace 21:22, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Can a reference be added for The Force Awakens being "the most nominated film in Saturn Award history"?
 Done removed claim and reworded sentence Chompy Ace 21:39, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 21:23, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 21:23, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Can a reference be added for the last part of the claim that "The Force Awakens received eleven nominations at the MTV Movie Awards, the most for the ceremony"?
minus Replaced both refs to a sole ref MTV, so it could remain the "received eleven nominations at the MTV Movie Awards" sentence;  Fixed sentence, by removing "the most for the ceremony" Chompy Ace 21:35, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sequels

The Last Jedi

 Done Chompy Ace 23:40, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "he would direct" → "he would write and direct"
 Done Chompy Ace 23:40, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Can you list the names in full, rather than just their last names?
 Done, and added links Chompy Ace 23:40, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

The Rise of Skywalker

  • "Abrams" → "J. J. Abrams"
 Done Chompy Ace 23:42, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • A reference is needed for "The Rise of Skywalker was released on December 20, 2019"
 Done Chompy Ace 23:42, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 23:45, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 23:45, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Mark Hamill and Gwendoline Christie aren't mentioned in this reference, so I suggest adding another.
 Fixed added reference for Hamill claim and Christie does not appear, which I removed her due to Phasma's death in The Last Jedi (via The Rise of Skywalker: The Visual Dictionary) Chompy Ace 23:42, 5 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

  • The archive link for the reference after "preexisting audio from The Empire Strikes Back" isn't working. Try archiving it with this.
 Done removed reference per WP:BI Chompy Ace 09:24, 31 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 23:14, 2 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Mark all references to Forbes as "url-access=limited".
 Done Chompy Ace 21:28, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Mark all references to Vulture as "url-access=limited".
 Done Chompy Ace 21:28, 4 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The following should not be in italics:
Collider
Comic Book Resources
Yahoo!
 Done for all Chompy Ace 00:16, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The following should be in italics using "|website=":
MakingStarWars.net
TheWrap
Dork Side of the Force
 Done for all Chompy Ace 00:38, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Some uses of StarWars.com are linked, in all lowercase, or in another form. Try to be consistent.
 Done all uses use StarWars.com and are all linked Chompy Ace 01:58, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 00:09, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Link Dork Side of the Force to FanSided.
 Done Chompy Ace 00:13, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 00:43, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 00:42, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 00:42, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 02:11, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 00:07, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done Chompy Ace 00:07, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The second reference after "deceased Darth Vader" is dead.
 Fixed Chompy Ace 01:58, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The second reference after "a tavern-dweller in Maz Kanata's castle" is dead.
 Fixed Chompy Ace 01:58, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The second reference after "a lieutenant in the Resistance" is dead.
 Fixed Chompy Ace 01:58, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The only reference after "Judah Friedlander" is dead.
 Fixed Chompy Ace 01:58, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • The reference after "Kevin Smith appear in minor roles" is dead.
 Fixed Chompy Ace 01:58, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Overview

GAN table

GA review
(see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references):
    b (citations to reliable sources):
    c (OR):
    d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):
    b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
    b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

Overall:
Pass/Fail:

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