Talk:South Park/GA2
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I will begin to review this article shortly. See Talk:Abismo Negro/GA1 To find out what type of a review I will give. I hope the editor(s) that will hopefully resolve my concerns that I intend to post later on is an experienced one at that. Seeing as I am a fan of the show this should be interesting, but I am not involved in any project affiliated with it, so I have no idea which references are reliable, questionable, etc. So be prepared for questions regarding material of that nature.--WillC 08:40, 20 July 2009 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- a (prose): b (MoS):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- File:SP-s10e04-censor.jpg needs a fair-use rational. Per the wikipedia MoS, images should not be placed on the left directly below level three headers. The image under the "Characters and setting" section and the image in the "Music" section both violate this. Add a caption for the infobox image. Change the second image's caption from "The boys (in order from left to right): Eric Cartman, Kyle Broflovski, Stan Marsh, and Kenny McCormick." to "The main characters (in order from left to right): Eric Cartman, Kyle Broflovski, Stan Marsh, and Kenny McCormick" In the music image, remove "the late" from "Chef would often sing in a style reminiscent of that of his voice actor, the late Isaac Hayes." It is not important that he is dead, just that the character sung like his voice actor. Change "A censorship card from the second Cartoon Wars episode, amidst Controversy." to "A censorship card from the second Cartoon Wars episode was surrounded in controversy." Complete sentences need periods, but if the captions are referring to the image directly, they do not end with periods. That is apart of the MoS, I believe. I forget the link, it was something I learned a long time ago.--WillC 03:53, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
- Add alternative text as well.--WillC 04:13, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
- If a caption for the infobox identifies the main characters (gathered around the town sign) by name, then would the image under "Characters and settings" be redundant per WP:NFCC? Or should the infobox caption be along the lines of "Season 13 title card"? Also, is the image of the "censorship card" really needed? A screenshot of white words on a black screen...the text in the section seems to sufficiently describe it to the reader, no? - SoSaysChappy (talk) 15:29, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
- Remove the censorship screenshot if you wish. The less fair-use images the better. The caption for the main image I feel should be "A screenshot from the opening title sequence featuring all of the South Park characters as of ____." I don't feel it would be redundant.--WillC 02:06, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
- Done. Though someone may want to tweak the caption I added; I've been told I can be "too wordy". - SoSaysChappy (talk) 03:00, 3 August 2009 (UTC)
- Remove the censorship screenshot if you wish. The less fair-use images the better. The caption for the main image I feel should be "A screenshot from the opening title sequence featuring all of the South Park characters as of ____." I don't feel it would be redundant.--WillC 02:06, 2 August 2009 (UTC)
- If a caption for the infobox identifies the main characters (gathered around the town sign) by name, then would the image under "Characters and settings" be redundant per WP:NFCC? Or should the infobox caption be along the lines of "Season 13 title card"? Also, is the image of the "censorship card" really needed? A screenshot of white words on a black screen...the text in the section seems to sufficiently describe it to the reader, no? - SoSaysChappy (talk) 15:29, 1 August 2009 (UTC)
- Add alternative text as well.--WillC 04:13, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
- File:SP-s10e04-censor.jpg needs a fair-use rational. Per the wikipedia MoS, images should not be placed on the left directly below level three headers. The image under the "Characters and setting" section and the image in the "Music" section both violate this. Add a caption for the infobox image. Change the second image's caption from "The boys (in order from left to right): Eric Cartman, Kyle Broflovski, Stan Marsh, and Kenny McCormick." to "The main characters (in order from left to right): Eric Cartman, Kyle Broflovski, Stan Marsh, and Kenny McCormick" In the music image, remove "the late" from "Chef would often sing in a style reminiscent of that of his voice actor, the late Isaac Hayes." It is not important that he is dead, just that the character sung like his voice actor. Change "A censorship card from the second Cartoon Wars episode, amidst Controversy." to "A censorship card from the second Cartoon Wars episode was surrounded in controversy." Complete sentences need periods, but if the captions are referring to the image directly, they do not end with periods. That is apart of the MoS, I believe. I forget the link, it was something I learned a long time ago.--WillC 03:53, 29 July 2009 (UTC)
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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