Talk:Sheltered workshop
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Although the subject is notable, this article has multiple problems.
Everything after the first paragraph reads like an advertisement for a single agency, Cumberland Industries Ltd. (apparently an Australian agency).
The text also reflects a bias in favor of "sheltered workshops" as opposed to "mainstream employment" or "open employment" for persons with disabilities -- an issue that, as the article itself acknowledges, is subject to much debate in the disability community.
The first paragraph originally cited two sources. However, the link to the first source was dead. I deleted references to that source.
When that source is eliminated, the only source for the first paragraph is a single research report, prepared for the Churchill Trust of Australia, entitled "Models of vocational employment for ‘people with a disability’ in Sweden, The Netherlands, United Kingdom and the United States of America."
The Churchill Trust report has two problems:
- It is clearly original research: On the cover page of the report, the author "warrant[s]" that the report "is original."
- It reflects a decided bias in favor of "sheltered workshops." See, e.g., paragraphs 1.3 and 1.4 on pages 4 and 5 of the report.
The article cites only one additional reference, the website of Greenelight Workforce. However, that website provides information about a specific organization in Ohio that offers sheltered workshops. The site contains no discussion of, and no information about, the general topic of sheltered workshops.
I don't know enough about the sheltered workshops-vs.-open employment debate to be able to review the first paragraph to see whether it reflects a bias in favor of sheltered workshops. It would help if an expert in this area would review the paragraph and correct it if necessary.
Languorous Lass (talk) 19:40, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
More on the missing source
I found a cached version of the source that I deleted from the article. The source is an article entitled "The Character And Function Of Sheltered Workshops." Here's a link to the cached version: http://74.125.93.132/search?q=cache:NGIHAVOd6QAJ:www.blind.net/g3800001.htm+sheltered+workshop&cd=59&hl=en&ct=clnk&gl=us Although the source article's copyright is 1995, internal references indicate that it was written in 1960. See, e.g., second paragraph, last line. The source article's argument is based on a number of US statutes (laws) that were in place in 1960, and on a National Labor Relations Board (NLRB) ruling that was handed down in March 1960. At that time, the national minimum wage, according to the source article, was $1.00 per hour for industrial labor. The source article is so old that, in my view, it would not serve as a valid source even if a current working link to it could be found.
Languorous Lass (talk) 20:49, 22 June 2009 (UTC)
Reliable sources and open employment
The one citation in the article is no longer active, and I could not find anything to replace it. As was noted by Languorous above, there is no links that actually explain what a sheltered workshop is. I added a link from an organization that believes that open employment is preferable for the disabled, and when I have time, will add some text to the article. I also deleted reference to other groups of people, because I could find no reference to them. Perhaps there are Australian, UK or European workshops that are broader; I'm limited to the US. Until this article is better sourced, much of the existing text should likely be removed. What do other editors think? Moon Rising (talk) 01:05, 4 August 2010 (UTC)
removing POV tag with no active discussion per Template:POV
I've removed an old neutrality tag from this page that appears to have no active discussion per the instructions at Template:POV:
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Since there's no evidence of ongoing discussion, I'm removing the tag for now. If discussion is continuing and I've failed to see it, however, please feel free to restore the template and continue to address the issues. Thanks to everybody working on this one! -- Khazar2 (talk) 03:50, 27 June 2013 (UTC)