Talk:Shady Glen

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Recent massive addition to the article

While it's great to see an article massively expanded, NABoudreau21, it reads like an advertisement or a biography and needs editing. Text like "Theirs was indeed a joint effort" or "Establishing an entirely new and unproved business in Manchester’s semi-rural East end in the year 1948 was quite a challenge" is opinion. Also, the text is far more verbose than the few citations bear out. Thanks, Markvs88 (talk) 11:43, 14 May 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Yup, massive fluff alert. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 63.224.43.118 (talk) 21:39, 12 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Semi-protected edit request on 12 April 2022

Please change the link for the roadfood review to https://roadfood.com/restaurants/shady-glen/ The other link is no longer working. Roadfood123 (talk) 21:20, 12 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

 Done Happy Editing--IAmChaos 03:45, 13 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]