Talk:Run the World (Jennifer Lopez song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Lil-unique1 (talk · contribs) 00:45, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
Primary review
First Round - Completed
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Will begin review soon! — Lil_℧niquℇ №1 [talk] 00:45, 28 August 2012 (UTC)
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Secondary Review
- Introduction
- Replace "recorded with The-Dream and Stewart" with "recorded with the duo". → Tricky & The-Dream mentioned too many times in same paragraph.
- rapper Rick Ross however the → rapper Rick Ross however, the
- replace: Reason: the suggested replacement text is more encylopedic and better written
- According to Lopez, "Run the World" is about a "type of love when you come together you make each other better"[1]. She cited her relationship with then-husband Marc Anthony to be that type of love, stating that she believes that they have made each other better artists and people. with
- According to Lopez, "Run the World" is a song about the "type of love when you come together you make each other better;" noting that she shared that love with then-husband Marc Antony. Relating the song to Antony, Lopez said she believes they have made each other better artists and people.[1]
- that has been cited as bringing back the old school feel of Lopez's single → which critics compared to previous single "Jenny from the Block."
- acclaim → response acclaim generally means positive reception.
- add comment about the negative critism, e.g. although some critics criticised the mid-tempo production and reliance on auto-tune.
- Reception
- add link to Auto-tune piped as auto tune.
- Misc/other
- image and sound sample should be presented opposite to each other i.e. one to the left one to the right.
- these are the final changes really. — Lil_℧niquℇ №1 [talk] 20:54, 15 September 2012 (UTC)
All done. Zac 22:10, 15 September 2012 (UTC)