Talk:Roy Bahat

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Updates for Roy Bahat page

Hi. My name is Angela and I work for Roy Bahat. A couple in-depth profiles have been written on Roy recently in Business Insider and Fast Company that offer more information about what he's famous for (early AI investments and speaking on organized workforces). I'd like to share a proposed draft here that adds a few sentences from these new sources (proposed additions are in bold) to add to the end of the Career section. Pinging @Cabrils:, who accepted the page at Articles for Creation back in May. Angela.Martin2023 (talk) 19:09, 15 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Angela.Martin2023, thanks for the ping.
Firstly, given your relationship with Bahat, you have a conflict of interest that you must declare on your Talk page (see the instructions on how to do this by clicking on that link). I see now that you created the page and submitted it without declaring your conflict of interest, which is of concern.
Regarding your draft additions, I think they may be OK, however I am concerned at an overall promotional feeling to the page. It tends to read too much like a CV, which Wikipedia is not.
My suggestions would be:
1. Declare your COI.
2. Review the page in light of my comments and amend it accordingly. At that point consider adding reference to the 2 new articles but I think a trimmed down version of your draft is more likely to survive review.
3. Please feel free to ping me and I would be happy to have another look.
I trust this is of help. Cabrils (talk) 00:26, 16 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Cabrils. I disclosed my conflict of interest:
Can you elaborate what you mean by saying I have not disclosed? Is there another location where I need to also disclose at? Angela.Martin2023 (talk) 21:10, 21 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Picking up on this string from ~9 months ago. I've shortened the requested additions per the editor's feedback, put the edit in a diff view below per the Edit Request instructions, and added the Edit Request template. If there is somewhere additional I need to disclose, please let me know.
1. Additions Near End of Career Section
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In 2013, Bloomberg Beta was created and Bahat was appointed head of the new entity. Bahat is a partner of Bloomberg Beta along with Karin Klein and James Cham. Bahat started teaching an MBA course on leading a unionized workforce at University of California, Berkeley.
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In 2013, Bloomberg Beta was created and Bahat was appointed head of the new entity. Bahat is a partner of Bloomberg Beta along with Karin Klein and James Cham. Bahat and the cofounders became known for their early investments in [[artificial intelligence]] companies.<ref name="Rafieyan 2023 q931">{{cite web | last=Rafieyan | first=Darius | title='The scholar, the pragmatist, and the rainmaker:' How three Bloomberg Beta VCs bet on AI before it became a buzzword | website=Business Insider | date=September 18, 2023 | url=https://www.businessinsider.com/bloomberg-beta-ai-pioneers-by-rewriting-the-vc-playbook-2023-9 | access-date=October 17, 2023}}</ref> Bahat started writing and speaking about business people collaborating with organized workforces, after doing a report for Bloomberg on future labor trends.<ref name="fastcompany">{{cite news|url=https://www.fastcompany.com/90940726/roy-bahat-vc-unions-labor|newspaper=Fast Company|date=August 31, 2023|accessdate=October 17, 2023|first=Issie|last=Lapowsky|title=This VC believes in unions. Can he convince the rest of corporate America to join him?}}</ref> For example, in 2023 he started a private roundtable with the [[Aspen Institute]] focused on organized labor.<ref name="fastcompany" /> Bahat started teaching an MBA course on leading a unionized workforce at University of California, Berkeley.

Angela.Martin2023 (talk) 15:09, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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