Talk:Ranger Suárez

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GA Review

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Reviewer: Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk · contribs) 14:22, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

I will be reviewing this! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 14:22, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

References

This section looks good!

Lead

I think the drug suspension should be mentioned in the lead. Maybe end the first sentence after 2012, then make it part of the sentence about the Venezuelan Summer League.
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
”2019 season, but was” – No comma needed.
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Early life

”outfield, but” – No comma needed.
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Minor leagues

No comma needed after 2012 in the first sentence.
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
”In five innings pitched, Suárez pitched” – “In five innings pitched, Suarez recorded”
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I think when “By” is used, the verb should be “had been” instead of “was.”
- Fixed — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
”a 0.65 ERA, with 20” – No comma needed.
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
Might be a day missing from the NYPL Player of the Week—26-31 is only six days.
- Fixed whoops, dyscalculia! — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
”the season, as decided” – No comma needed.
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I seem to remember from back when I studied German that “Rindfleisch” is beef (Don’t put that in the article!)
”Suárez was named to the South Atlantic League All-Star team, but could not participate in the game, and was replaced by Jordan Jess.[12] On July 4, Suárez was promoted to the Class A-Advanced Clearwater Threshers, joining a rotation of top pitching prospects that also included JoJo Romero, Sixto Sanchez, and Franklyn Kilome” – “Suárez was named to the South Atlantic League All-Star team, but Jordan Jess replaced him on the roster. This was because before the game, on July 4, Suárez was promoted to the Class A-Advanced Clearwater Threshers. He joined a rotation of top pitching prospects that also included JoJo Romero, Sixto Sanchez, and Franklyn Kilome.”
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
”Fightin Phils, as part” – No comma needed.
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Philadelphia Phillies

Put who ranked him the #10 prospect; Baseball America and MiLB.com don’t always have the same order.
- Added — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
” He played in 37 games for the Phillies in 2019, all in relief, and with eight closing appearances” – “He made 37 relief appearances for the Phillies in 2019, finishing eight games for them.” Then take out “There” at the start of the next sentence.
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
”late August, and was” – “late August before being”
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
”I’d take out the part about Lidge—not really notable for someone who only has four saves.”
- Done And added that he moved into the rotation after we acquired Kennedy — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Pitcher profile

Change the first two sentences to “Suárez spent most of his professional baseball career as a starting pitcher before being used as a long reliever and closer by the Phillies in 2021.”
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
” Suárez is also known for his fastball, which averages” – “Suárez’s fastball averages”
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
I’d take out the sentence about depth, since it’s a little too early in his career to tell.
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Personal life

”first player in MLB” – “first MLB player”
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]
”While playing in” – “While he was playing in”
- Done — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good; just minor stuff. Let me know when you’re finished, and I’ll give it another look! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 14:44, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Sanfranciscogiants17 All done! You're really making up for the Austin Nola thing, aren'tcha? ;) — Ghost River 21:40, 13 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

GhostRiver Passed. Nice job, again! Sanfranciscogiants17 (talk) 02:08, 14 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]