Talk:R. K. Joshi

Cleanup

Need to:

• Remove peacock terms like "legendary", "vivid", "passion" and other content that is not neutral in tone
• Remove pointless bolding of many phrases
• Remove non-RS sourced being used as references (I see at least one blog there)
• Tidy up those refs that are just floating in the references section. Are these needed?
• Add his full name and dates of birth and death

--DanielRigal (talk) 10:40, 12 October 2010 (UTC)

I have done the first couple of paragraphs and removed the worst of the peacock stuff. The rest still needs to be cleaned up and better referenced. --DanielRigal (talk) 11:09, 12 October 2010 (UTC)