Talk:Pieter Nuyts/GA1

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Comments by Rubenescio

In want to address a few issues before I will review the article:

• Wasn't he also three times mayor of Hulster Ambacht? [1]
• Didn't Anna van Driel die while giving birth to their son Pieter? [2]
• Was he involved in the Siege of Hulst in 1645?
• Where did he die and where is he buried?

Rubenescio (talk) 10:11, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

• The words "imprisonment" and "house arrest" are used interchangeably, but they have a rather different connotation. Could this be clarified?

Rubenescio (talk) 11:00, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

To address your points in order:

1. You're right - added that.
2. Yes, but the article already says she "died [...] giving birth". I think it is clear already, but adding "while" would be OK too.
3. Nope, he arrived shortly afterwards - text and reference added.
4. Can't be 100% sure where he died, although I assume it was in Hulst - however, no source I have actually says that outright. He was definitely buried there though - added info and reference.
5. Clarified.

I've also done a quick style edit. Appreciate all the hard work you have put in so far, and well done on finding that Australian map. Taffy (talk) 15:03, 8 May 2009 (UTC)

Review

1. Well-written: ✓ Pass
2. Factually accurate and verifiable: ✓ Pass
3. Broad in its coverage: ✓ Pass
4. Neutral: ✓ Pass
5. Stable: ✓ Pass
6. Illustrated: ✓ Pass

Rubenescio (talk) 22:38, 8 May 2009 (UTC)