Talk:Pansori

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 6 September 2021 and 22 December 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Tommytz. Peer reviewers: Skylercafferata, Rsinthespace.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 08:41, 18 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Translation improvement

The article in English is in dire need of improvement: it sounds very unnatural to an English speaker and is unclear. Furthermore I would argue that Pansori#The meaning of Pansori in Korean life can be left out entirely or reworked to fit elsewhere. Veroberry (talk) 18:56, 15 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Agreed... I've taken a stab at improving it but it's still in a rough shape toobigtokale (talk) 09:37, 10 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

section and grammar improvement

I'm planning to improve some sections, mostly the "introduction" and "description" sections, by combining and reworking the information included to make it more cohesive and less convoluted. Additionally I plan to work on fixing some grammar issues. May5620 (talk) 21:19, 1 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]