Talk:Orville Hungerford/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ArnabSaha (talk · contribs) 09:32, 5 October 2020 (UTC)

Failed "good article" nomination

This article has failed its Good article nomination, as it is a long way from meeting any one of the six good article criteria.

• "Watertown is located ... " - unsourced
• "Creating such a ... " - unourced
• "There Richard joined ... " - unourced
• "Foster was chosen ... " - unourced
• "Hungerford learned a ... " - unourced
• "In their defense ... " - unourced
• "As of 2020 ... " - unourced
• A lot of portions like this don't have any citations.

Suggestions

• Request for copyediting at WP:GOCE
• Expand the lead.
• Avoid single sentence paras.

When these issues are addressed, the article can be renominated. If you feel that this review is in error, feel free to have it reassessed. Thank you for your work so far.— ❯❯❯   S A H A 09:40, 5 October 2020 (UTC)