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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

• "Vision then reverts Abilash back to Norm." – 'revert' and 'back' are the same thing; reword.
• "the entire decade of 1980s sitcoms were" → "the entire decade of 1980s sitcoms was" (American English)
• "it show's Vision's vulnerability" – typo?
• "Olsen's "unrestrained '80s curls" in the episode was" → "Olsen's "unrestrained '80s curls" in the episode were" (American English)
• Remove the comma after "struggled to not make it too slow" since the sentence is quite short.
• "said unlike" sounds off. Maybe add a "that" between or rephrase.
• "less jokes" → "fewer jokes"
• Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
• Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
• Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:16, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
  • @Some Dude From North Carolina: all points have been addressed. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 16:25, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

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