Talk:Nils Vogt (journalist)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Arsenikk (talk · contribs) 15:55, 8 December 2011 (UTC)

• "Amongst his forbears": who is "his" referring to, the on or the father?
• A lot of people are not going to know that Christiania is Oslo and that Royal Fredrick University is UiO.

I've fixed the two issues and dis some copy-editing, so I'll pass the article. Arsenikk ^(talk) 15:55, 8 December 2011 (UTC)

Thank you for your copyedit & review. --Eisfbnore ^talk 18:39, 8 December 2011 (UTC)