Talk:Mediterranean flour moth
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I am working on this page for my Behavioral Ecology class. I have made several major edits, including adding sections and entirely rewriting what was written because it was either plagiarized or not cited. I also added a table of contents and multiple sources. --Mnoronha456 (talk) 06:16, 25 October 2017 (UTC)
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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Mnoronha456. Peer reviewers: BoozalisHannah, Lily1004.
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Hello, I am a peer editor for Mnoronha. Overall, I found that the article was good, besides some clunky wording and a few sentences that seemed out of order, especially in the lead section. I went ahead and fixed those issues. Otherwise, great job! Let me know if you have any questions Lily1004 (talk) 05:11, 29 October 2017 (UTC)
Hi! Though short, this article was incredibly thorough and well-written. I added a bit of information to the Description and Life cycle sections that I found in one of your cited articles. I suggest adding descriptions of female calling and male courtship behaviors if you can find them. (Although I can see how this might be difficult as I had trouble finding and accessing articles!) Overall, well done. BoozalisHannah (talk) 23:17, 31 October 2017 (UTC)
Hi! I am also a peer editor for this page. Like my classmates, I found this article to be well-written, and it contains a good deal of information on this species. I added a new source and additional content to the Mating section of the page. I also made some general edits in terms of grammar and sentence structure, and additional images could help to elevate this article even further. Overall, nice job! LucasKat (talk) 02:54, 1 November 2017 (UTC)
peer comment: great article, the only thing I could use more information on would be the courtship behavior. You mention female calling and male courtship behaviors but I'd like to know what these behaviors look like specifically. I am not familiar with female calling in butterflies.