Talk:Market Forces/GA1

GA Review

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Hello,

I am delighted to be reviewing this article. On a first reading it looks quite good; I'm looking forward to perusing it in the next few days. Best wishes, --Ktlynch (talk) 04:47, 29 August 2012 (UTC)

Reviewer: Ktlynch (talk · contribs) 04:47, 29 August 2012 (UTC)

Lead section Consists of mostly plot summary. The second paragraph, about reception and interpretation of the book, should be expanded.

• Balanced out the lead better: [1] maclean (talk) 22:19, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

Background It's initially a little confusing about whether Market Forces is a part of the trilogy. Perhaps the third installment could be named, stating that it is the Mr Morgan's fourth novel?

• How's this? [2] maclean (talk) 22:19, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

Style and themes the word "extrapolated" is repeated once too often.

• Done [3] maclean (talk) 22:19, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

The plot synopsis is a little too long.

• Reduced [4] maclean (talk) 22:19, 1 September 2012 (UTC)

The article can be considered stable. Editing history shows solid improvement by a single editor and no content disputes.

Images low resolution book cover used in the infobox is the only illustration. Meets non-free content use guidelines, licence correctly filled out.

Neutrality the article contains criticism as well as praise and analysis. Good variety of references used.

Great work. I'm delighted to promote this article to "Good Article" status. Best, --Ktlynch (talk) 02:15, 4 September 2012 (UTC)

• Thank you for reading and evaluating the article. maclean (talk) 05:21, 4 September 2012 (UTC)