Mammamia (Måneskin song) was a Music good articles nominee, but did not meet the good article criteria at the time. There may be suggestions below for improving the article. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
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I will get on with this article today! --K. Peake 07:44, 15 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Infobox and lead
I think c. 24–25 May 2021 would be more appropriate as merely May 2021 in the infobox
The recording year is not sourced; only writing is mentioned as having happened in 2021
Removed; I added it, since it's just logical.
The capitalisation stylization is not sourced
I've never seen in any article reference supporting how the song is stylised. Neither in "ARTPOP" nor in "willow". But I can add release ref here if it is so neccessary.
I have written this out in the body for you using that ref, re-wording some nearby content in the process. --K. Peake 07:56, 16 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
The composed/production/writing and comp/lyrics are out of order; the first three should be in a sentence before release and the second two should be the sentence after release
"by the group's frontman" → "by the band's frontman"
"the lyrics depicts a person" → "the lyrics depict a person"
"to the group's previous single," → "to Måneskin's previous single,"
"within the top ten of" → "within the top 10 of" per MOS:NUM
"and has been certified gold in Italy." → "and has been certified platinum in Italy by the Federazione Industria Musicale Italiana (FIMI)." with the wikilink
"Rei Nadal-directed music video premiered" → "An accompanying Rei Nadal-directed music video premiered" with the wikilink
"is seen driving back from" → "is seen coming back from"
"The single has been performed by band on" → "The song has been performed by Måneskin on"
Y All done (in some cases slightly modified, but still). infsai (talkie? UwU) 07:00, 16 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Background and release
"Big Artists" is not sourced as being the award name anywhere
In the following week, I'll find a better source. Took this one from "Zitti e buoni" article where it refers to the same information, so...
"The band has won" → "Two months later, the band won" to be specific
Y All done, besides noted. Plus, there is one important feature that I forgotten about to add to this section (about listening parties), I'll (try to) add it next week. infsai (talkie? UwU) 07:00, 16 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Music and lyrics
"has pop rockmix and," → "has a pop rock mix and," per that not being the meaning of mix here
"pointed out that it resembles the group's" → "pointed out the resemblance to Måneskin's"
"is seen in a bloody imagery," → "is seen in bloody imagery," with the wikilink
Where is the tape sourced as being a cassette?
Y All done, except noted. Also, not reffed sentences (knife, cassette) will be reffed properly or removed next week. infsai (talkie? UwU) 07:00, 16 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Live performances
Make this the third para of the above section
"the group debuted on the US late night television," → "Måneskin debuted on US late night television,"
WP:OVERLINK of Billboard on ref 62 and fix date mis-formatting
Remove the publisher from ref 63
Y All done, besides noted. infsai (talkie? UwU) 07:00, 16 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
External links
Why is the lyric video not mentioned anywhere in prose?
No refs found - but I'll look for them next week. infsai (talkie? UwU) 07:00, 16 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
A mention of the lyric video in promotion does not require excessive information; you could just add the release date and use the video as a ref. --K. Peake 07:56, 16 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Final comments and verdict
On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this didn't take too long! --K. Peake 10:07, 15 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Kyle Peake! Nice to work with you again! Now I've fixed most of the issues you pointed out here, besides those noted ones. I'll try to work on the article more next week, since there are some missing important informations (listening parties, lyric video), and then I'll also try to eliminate last remaining issues. infsai (talkie? UwU) 07:00, 16 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Infsai Thanks for the response and I understand that you need to look into certain issues, though the music video and promotion section can be created now since all that needs to be done for that is to merge the live performances with the above section. --K. Peake 07:56, 16 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake Yep, I'm aware that merging to sections is just few clicks away, but I need to think about certain things. Like I said, I'll try to cover the remaining issues in the next week-presumably on Tuesday/Wendsday, since then I won't be working. infsai (talkie? UwU) 08:07, 16 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Infsai It has been two weeks now, any further updates on this? --K. Peake 09:17, 29 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake Yes. Sorry that it takes me so long to update the article, but unfortunetly recently I don't have much time to spend on computer + my phone broke, so there is simply no way for me for now to do any outlandish edits for at least next two weeks. I'm sorry that I couldn't keep up with the promise and I kept you waiting.~I guess we can just redraw nomination, and I will re-nominate the article on a later date, when I'll add everything I wanted. infsai (talkie? UwU) 05:26, 31 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Infsai About withdrawing the nomination, it depends if you will be able to fix all of these suggestions once you have a properly working device and I can keep on hold until then if so? --K. Peake 07:56, 31 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Kyle Peake Of course, my intention is to finish this article properly, but simply I'm not sure in what time of August I'd have a proper device. infsai (talkie? UwU) 08:18, 31 July 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Infsai Any updates on this by the end of August now? --K. Peake 07:25, 29 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Hey Kyle Peake, I guess I'm giving up for now with this one. I thought that after one month without laptop I'll be motivated enough to finish this article, but I simply do not for now. Sorry that it went like this, but I need to refresh a little. infsai (talkie? UwU) 18:50, 29 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]
✗ Fail now, per the nominator's comments. --K. Peake 07:50, 30 August 2022 (UTC)[reply]