Talk:Leak 04-13 (Bait Ones)/GA1
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Nominator: Joeyquism (talk · contribs) 01:32, 8 May 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Heartfox (talk · contribs) 07:01, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- "as "a catastrophe" → quotes in lead require inline citation per WP:LEADCITE
- Reworded, as I don't enjoy having to include citations in the lead.
- "was almost immediately felt" → informal
- Rephrased to "'BTSTU' also had an impact on contemporary pop music" - if a different phrasing is better here let me know
- "noted", "however" → WP:WTW
- Removed "noted", though I'm not sure of which "however" you're referring to here
- "Some publications refrained from reviewing the 2013 bootleg" , " but critics who did choose to make note of it offered mostly positive opinions" → only one publication is cited to support each of these statements, but they are written as plural?
- You're right. I've removed this sentence altogether.
- many of the genres stated in infobox are not supported in body
- Changed to just pop, R&B and electronic
- Stephen ref missing magazine name
- Fixed.
- Can you get a timestamp for the Masa interview?
- Unfortunately, I think the only audible proof that this quote is even legitimate comes from this clip on Soundcloud. I couldn't find any archives of Zane Lowe's interviews anywhere.
- Not sure where DeVille supports that the album was released by XL
- Added the Pitchfork review to supplement this.
Heartfox (talk) 07:01, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- Thank you for the review, Heartfox! This is one of the earlier works that I've done, and I'm realizing that it's in a bit of a shoddier state than I'd hoped. Looking forward to your further comments. joeyquism (talk) 13:28, 11 July 2024 (UTC)
- Hi Heartfox, is there more to come on this? joeyquism (talk) 16:32, 17 July 2024 (UTC)