Talk:Las Reinas del Pueblo/GA1

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Reviewer: Eurohunter (talk · contribs) 19:25, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

@AJona1992: I started review. Comments will be below. Review within 2023 GAN Backlog Drives. Eurohunter (talk) 19:25, 2 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

  1. "The recording peaked at number 147 on the American Billboard 200 chart and at number ten on the Spanish albums chart." - it's worth to add it was 15 years later. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Background

  1. "Moreover, her album, Amor Prohibido, experienced a meteoric rise from the fourth to the first position on the Top Latin Albums chart." - I'm not sure if "meteoric" is an encyclopedic word. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  1. "This phenomenon ignited a fervent acquisition of Latin music across international markets, including Japan, Germany, and China." - which China they mean? Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Music

  1. "a commercially and critically acclaimed piece widely regarded as Selena's signature song and her "trademark", "Como la Flor" has become a posthumous epithet and swan song," - I think it's worth to change word "trademark". Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Other

  1. There is no introduction to previous and next compilation album of Selena and Graciela Beltrán. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Replace parameter "Work" or "Publisher" with "Website" in references. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  1. Add links to archived versions in references. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • I believe all of them, that are archived, have links to the archived version. 16:48, 24 August 2023 (UTC)
  1. There is no link to Billboard etc. in references. Eurohunter (talk) 20:42, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  1. I did minor fixes. Eurohunter (talk) 20:44, 16 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
I did everything he had asked, just been waiting for a response, but I believe the article's GA nomination was updated for a second opinion, along with "Besitos". – jona ✉ 21:07, 7 November 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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