Talk:Lactarius alnicola/GA1

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Reviewer: Ucucha 18:25, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

• Can you make the etymology a little more explicit? (I.e., say that Alnus = alder and cola = inhabitant).

• Done. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

• "Cap martin (edge of the cap)"—is the gloss necessary?

• Probably not, but I was asked to gloss it once before, and have been glossing ever since. I'll try unglossing for this one and see what happens. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

• "with matted fibrils beneath the gluten near the margin"—please explain

• Done. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

• "central and Californian population"—don't you mean "central Californian"?

• central and southern, fixed. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

• "slowly stains pale yellow"—when? Does it become yellow in maturity or when you do something to the fungus?

• CLarified. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

• "nominate subspecies"—wouldn't that be the nominate variety?

• Yup. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

• So how can we distinguish it from Catharellus cibarius?

• Added. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

• Baja California is not in the United States (I corrected this).

• My last geography class was in grade 8. It's obvious sometimes. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

• Should the lead mention that it may also form associations with non-conifers, like oaks and alders?

• Done. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

• India is a big place, so I think you should mention the state. Are there no data on ecological associations there?

• Added state, no other data at this time. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

Is this useful: Title: Russulaceous ectomycorrhizae of Abies lasiocarpa and Picea engelmannii Author(s): Kernaghan, G; Currah, RS; Bayer, RJ Source: CANADIAN JOURNAL OF BOTANY-REVUE CANADIENNE DE BOTANIQUE Volume: 75 Issue: 11 Pages: 1843-1850 Published: NOV 1997

Title: Additional new records on Lactarius from Mexico Author(s): Montoya, L; Bandala, VM Source: MYCOTAXON Volume: 57 Pages: 425-450 Published: JAN-MAR 1996

• Both useful and added. Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

Ucucha 18:25, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

• Thanks for the excellent comments and quick review! Sasata (talk) 22:09, 14 July 2010 (UTC)

Thanks; I'm now passing the article. Ucucha 06:12, 15 July 2010 (UTC)