Talk:Ko Olina Station and Center/GA1
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:10, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 06:10, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
Nice article, here are my comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:06, 20 June 2016 (UTC)
- General
- No copyvio detected.
- No dablinks detected.
- History
- being Aulani, Four Seasons' Ihilani Resort I think you should use a spaced endash instead of "being", for more clarity.
Done
- Ko Olina Center, opened in 2010 No comma needed
Done
- the center's purpose was to Should it not be "is"?
Done
- As on June 2016 I think this should be "of" and not "on".
Done
- Design
- this location influenced the overall design of the center, incorporating the "historic" feel of the railroads. Should not look unsourced.
Done I moved the source backward so it no longer looks unsourced.
- Thanks so much for the review! I believe I have fixed everything! Carbrera (talk) 03:07, 21 June 2016 (UTC)
Great, I can promote this now. Cheers, Sainsf (talk · contribs) 10:26, 21 June 2016 (UTC)