Talk:Jen and Sylvia Soska

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Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment

This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Baileykeyon. Peer reviewers: Cheekoleeno, Smith1994.

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Background?

What is their ethnic background? "Soska" sounds like a Slav name, maybe Polish or what?

"Soska" in Russian means sucker or pacifier; also slang for "cheap whore specializing in fellatio". --Autismal (talk) 21:48, 10 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Sounds biased.

This article reads like a press release. It should be rewritten.

Sounds biased.

This article reads like a press release. It should be rewritten. 66.244.81.248 (talk) 18:46, 9 July 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

This is a great starting point, however I would recommend some changes to sentence structure when discussing the twins, as at times it can read rather awkward. Other individuals on your talk pages claimed this page reads a lot like a press release, I can agree with that point of view and I would suggest to perhaps try and find a critique that engages with the Soska Sisters' work and thus you would not only be presenting information that tips the scale towards bias. Cheekoleeno (talk) 14:07, 9 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Citation 15 is a link to an e-library login?

"Off campus login to access MacOdrum Library e-resources". proxy.library.carleton.ca. Retrieved 2015-10-14.  http://proxy.library.carleton.ca/login?url=http://search.ebscohost.com/login.aspx?direct=true&db=f3h&AN=103101891&site=ehost-live

^- without having a login to read the resource, this probably doesn't work as a citation, right? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 72.2.49.50 (talk) 21:07, 21 October 2015 (UTC)[reply]

Biography

In the last paragraph of the Biography section, it appears as if there is a link or citation missing. Their upcoming projects aren't linked to anything and nothing in that paragraph is cited. -ThatWriterWithBangs (talk) 04:42, 15 January 2018 (UTC)[reply]