Talk:Isao Noda
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Reviewer notes
- The language does stray a bit into "resume" from "neutral and encyclopedic, which could be addressed in part by taking general claims (e.g., lots of awards) and making them more specific--integrating the names of (say two) the two or three most prestigious awards in the text, and including specific references for those awards. It's sort of like the common advice to writers of fiction, "show, don't tell".
- The external links should be pruned of the sources that are also used as references, no need to duplicate.
- Noda is clearly notable under WP:PROF#C1.
- Thank you! --j⚛e deckertalk 14:14, 9 June 2014 (UTC)