Talk:Hurricane Alice (June 1954)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 00:22, 29 August 2011 (UTC)

I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 00:22, 29 August 2011 (UTC)

Here are the issues I found:

• "The floodwaters destroyed bridges and dikes and flooding many cities along the inner reaches of the river." and flooded many
• "Although later there severe flooding further inland," there was severe
• The external link is dead, so it might as well be removed (archive.org doesn't show the images making the link pointless).

I'll put the article on hold and pass when it's fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 00:34, 29 August 2011 (UTC)

Alright, while I was in hurricane-mode, User:Buggie111 kindly addressed these issues :) ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 13:13, 29 August 2011 (UTC)

Looks good, article passed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 16:10, 29 August 2011 (UTC)