Talk:Human rights in South Sudan

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SPLA, SPLA/M

This article uses the terms "SPLA" and "SPLA/M" but never defines what they actually mean. JIP | Talk 10:36, 19 March 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Proposed Revisions

Hello! I am an undergraduate student at Rice University who will be working on this article as part of a course assignment. I would add to add more information about South Sudan's political system and constitution to provide more of a background on the difference between what is stated and what is actually protected. I would also like to more fully describe civil liberties and freedoms in South Sudan, including women's, children's, ethnic minority, and religious rights. I would appreciate any advice or comments that you have. Jwang19 (talk) 01:40, 12 February 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

This page is very well organized, and I like what has been added. However, here could be more viewpoints on the topics presented, and I would love to see more on Human Rights and not solely the lack thereof! Great work! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Gilperkins (talkcontribs) 22:58, 7 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Hi Jwang19! I really enjoyed reading your article and learned a lot from it. I especially appreciate how comprehensive you have made the article, covering many topics within the issue of human rights in South Sudan. There are just a few small things I’d suggest editing to perfect your article. First, I’d suggest adding a citation after each sentence, in case someone changes around the order of your article in the future. Next, being consistent with things like “%” and “percent” and making sure to explain acronyms like SPLA the first time you use them will increase the readability of your article. Finally, a few more images will make it more visually appealing. Great work!! Athomas1995 (talk) 21:59, 28 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

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