Talk:House of Flavors/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 00:09, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 00:09, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• For the infobox, I suggest using "plainlist" instead of <br />.

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:38, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• The lead also needs to be expanded to better summarize the article.

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:38, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

History

• Add a serial comma after "buttermilk".

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• Remove the comma after "Park Dairy".

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• "to producing" → "on producing"

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• Add a comma after "different varieties".

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:45, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Operations

• "Afterwards" → "Afterward" (American English)

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:51, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• "that features" → ", which features"

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:51, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• "popular to" → "popular in"

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 20:51, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Guinness Record attempt

• " . " → ""

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• Those videos near the bottom look messy on my screen and I'm not sure if they're necessary.

•  Done Organized section for better display of picture and videos.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:03, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

References

• There are multiple references with [dead permanent link] tags, so I would find replacements.

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:30, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• Archive all archivable (either manually or with this tool).

•  Done --Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:30, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

• @Some Dude From North Carolina: All issues have been addressed. Can you take another look. Thanks.--Doug Coldwell (talk) 21:33, 26 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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