Talk:Hialeah Gardens High School

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Article Critique

  1. Is each fact referenced with an appropriate, reliable reference?
    • No.
      • A citation can be provided where the article talks about the overcrowding in the area that caused the school's construction.
      • The founding class's graduation can include a source (school district graduation calendar) in order to demonstrate that the graduation in fact took place at Florida International University.
      • Citation can be provided to the school's website where they inform of their academic programs.
      • Facts about athletics are missing citations.
    • As an alumnus I am aware that most of the information is appropriate and reliable but could be updated.
  2. Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
    • The article provides relevant information about the school, it would be more relevant if it were updated to the school's current programs but for the most part it is relevant and accurate. No information was distracting.
  3. Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
    • The article is neutral in terms of the school's history. The article is biased in the sense that information about athletics primarily highlights a small number of students during particular school years. In order to make the information unbiased either all students who have participated in sports and gotten recognition should be mentioned in the article or no individual student should be mentioned.
  4. Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
    • Most of the information needs citations. I believe that the information is primarily based from prior students and they remained objective but the lack of citations can cause bias.
  5. Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
    • School clubs are largely underrepresented since they are not mentioned at any point of the article.
    • Athletics in general are partially underrepresented since only a few of the school's athletic teams are highlighted.
      • The teams that are highlighted are overrepresented since there is no other representation of student extracurriculars.
  6. Check a few citations. Do the links work? Is there any close paraphrasing or plagiarism in the article?
    • 2 out of the 3 citations work. There seems to be paraphrasing but it does not seem to be close paraphrasing or plagiarism. The information that is cited in the article seems to have been adapted in order to avoid plagiarism.
  7. Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?
    • Information in the article is definitely out of date.
      • School grades, academic programs, and athletics can be definitely updated.
    • Since the time this article was written the school has grown their programs and the article is not reflective about how the school has progressed.
      • School clubs can be added.
      • Student certification programs can be added.
      • School Accreditations can be added.

Critique completed by: BCeba002 (talk) 21:29, 27 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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