Talk:Hello Nico

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Subjective word choices

I just edited the original English presentation of this page -- but much of the page still reads like a promotional push by the band's record label. A lot of highly subjective word choices throughout such as: "the distinctive female voice..." or "With mature arrangements and talented composition...". I did what I could to eliminate some, but as I am not generally an editor, I leave it to someone better than myself to fully fix. 36.237.120.76 (talk) 00:54, 22 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]