Talk:Harvey Littleton/GA2

GA Review

• Just two comments:

• What is "filial piety"? Can that be changed to something easier to understand?
• The lead could probably be split into two paragraphs for ease of reading.

• Otherwise, everything looks perfect. Really interesting, well-written article. In my view all the issues from the previous review have been rectified. One thing I should note is that there shouldn't be a space between periods and references. I've fixed this, but you might like to remember in the future. I assume you'll clarify the little issue I've noted above, so I'll pass the article. Great work. Naerii 12:30, 22 July 2008 (UTC)