Talk:Harvey Littleton/GA1

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GA Review

Unfortunately, this article does not meet the Good Article criteria at this time. Some of the issues include:

  • The lead is too short. With such a fairly lengthy article, please expand the paragraph of the lead, and perhaps even consider adding a second paragraph to the lead.
  • Consider adding an Infobox with {{Infobox Person}}.
  • A significant amount of information goes unsourced. Examples include the paragraphs that begin with the following sentences:
    • "During summer break in 1942"
    • "He finished his degree in industrial design in 1947"
    • "Littleton’s production as a potter focused"
    • "Littleton began his teaching career"
    • "Littleton's artwork is in the collections of"
    • "Married to Bess Tamura Littleton since 1947."
  • The article also needs to be copyedited. Issues include:
    • The entire " Personal" section contains sentence fragments.

Once these issues have been resolved, feel free to return the article for a renomination. Gary King (talk) 16:24, 2 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]

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