Talk:HMS Canopus (1897)/GA1

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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 14:35, 7 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:35, 7 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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  • No DAB links checkY
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Prose Suggestions

  • "After the war, the ship was broken up in 1920." For almost all the article, Canopus is referred to by name or as "her"; the use of "the ship" is understandable in other places except here;
  • "The ship was launched on 12 October 1897," And here.
  • " four 18-inch (460 mm) submerged torpedo tubes submerged in the hull." It seems a little redundant to say submerged twice, but it's your call if you want to remove it.
    That is all my prose suggestions; as the article meets all criteria already, I will be immediately passing it. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 14:46, 7 September 2017 (UTC)[reply]
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