Talk:Grevillea juniperina/GA1
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 09:48, 27 March 2015 (UTC)
More than pleased to take up this review. Of course, you have improved the article awesomely, but I have a few suggestions:
- Robert Brown once linked in the lead need not be linked again afterwards. Same for inflorescence
- Perhaps Grevillea juniperina can be abbreviated as G. juniperina at some places.
- In Description, ...though occasionally arise... --> ...though they occasionally arise...
- The spider-like flowers are red, pink, orange, yellow or greenish, and are mostly terminal—arising on the ends of stems—though occasionally arise from axillary buds. They are 2.5–3.5 cm (1–1 3⁄8 in) long. The spider-flower arrangement of the inflorescence has several individual flowers emerging from a central rounded flower head—reminiscent of the legs of a spider. Perhaps the latter sentence should precede the former one, the reader would primarily like to know why they are called d spider-like.
- ...and releases 1–2 seeds when ripe... According to MOS,one to two seeds would read better.
- Conversion templates required towards the end of "Description".
- Who is Don MacGillivray? Provide a link or give their identity.
- G. juniperina subsp. allojohnsonii According to what I have seen elsewhere, may be you could also write G. j. allojohnsonii? See for instances throughout the text. Not sure if it applies to plant species.
- A better way of presentation: G. juniperina subsp. fortis Makinson --> G. j. fortis Makinson ; G. juniperina subsp. sulphurea (A.Cunn.) Makinson (formerly var. trinervata) -->G. juniperina subsp. sulphurea (A.Cunn.) Makinson (formerly var. trinervata) Can you also add the years in which they were named?
- Link alluvial, eucalypt, woodland, hybrid
- Intervals of 10 to 15 years between fires are thought to be... sounds a bit vague.
- ...negatively impact on its growth... remove "on"
- Could you explain more on the negative impact boxthorn has on the juniper?
Cheers! Sainsf <^>Talk all words 09:48, 27 March 2015 (UTC)
- I feel all the issues have been resolved. This is quite ready for the GA status. Congrats! Sainsf <^>Talk all words 16:18, 27 March 2015 (UTC)
The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.