Talk:García de Nodal expedition

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Cleanup

Tagged for cleanup. Run-on sentences; awkward wording; inconsistent capitalization; needs more references. --TRosenbaum 15:04, 30 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

I broke up some of the longer sentances and reworded some awkward sentances. The capitalization of directions looks fine to me - it is common to uncapitalize directions such as "north" or "southwest" and capitalize directions in names, such as "South America". The page still needs more referances.--Hoovooloo 00:31, 19 February 2007 (UTC)[reply]