Talk:Freedom (Sugababes song)

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Good articleFreedom (Sugababes song) has been listed as one of the Music good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 5, 2013Good article nomineeListed

GA Review

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 22:08, 1 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Info box
  • It says promotional single but nowhere else in the article? Was it actually released as one or confirmed somewhere? Alexandra Burke confirmed in an interview that "The Silence" was a promotional single, and even then I had a hard time proving that I was right to the reviewer.
Lead
  • Probably best to say upcoming eighth studio album, as it hasn't been released yet. How it's written implies that the album has been released.
Release and reception
  • "In July 2011, the Sugababes released a teaser of the song online.[11] The full version of "Freedom" premiered online in August 2011.[10]" could be one sentence, it's a bit jolted at the moment.
  • This could all be one paragraph really.
Music video
Status
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