Talk:Frankfurt School/Archive 19

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I've updated the "Critique of Western Civilization" heading.

Not only has there been a shift in academia - which Wikipedia seeks to reflect - away from the term "Western Civilization" (also see the fairly recent shift in naming policy on Wikipedia from Western Civilization to Western Culture), but the work mentioned as defining their "Critique on Western Civilization" - "Enlightenment as mass deception" - actually focuses on the Culture Industry and how it might damage the high arts, humanism and expressionism that's been found IN Western Civilization [1]. Their claim was modern mass media (as "mechanically reproduced" posed a risk to the traditional, expressive, crafted, humanist and more avant garde forms of art. The previous wording was unsourced, so I've updated it to a better understanding of their Marxian ethos. RecardedByzantian (talk) 03:28, 5 June 2023 (UTC)

The Verso Books quotation from Minima Moralia [2] has no references to Western Civilization, and the term is never used within that work. RecardedByzantian (talk) 04:05, 5 June 2023 (UTC)
Either capitalism or the culture Industry is narrower than the Frankfurt School's total project. They included both of those, along with fascism and Stalinism, as types of domination that they considered consequences of Enlightenment philosophy. Sennalen (talk) 13:53, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

There are few minor grammar and spelling mistakes in this article, I can't edit them due to the article being locked for me. Examples are not putting a "." after the "S" in "U.S." and no "of" in the line "the validity their views". These mistakes make the article seem unpolished and all that. Sapient-Primum (talk) 00:15, 11 June 2023 (UTC)

I'm neither an administrator nor principal for this page, but both "mistakes" by another user have been fixed. Bustamove1 (talk) 06:48, 11 June 2023 (UTC)

Neo or post-Marxist

I believe that the Frankfurt school is neo- and post- Marxist. See: [3] [4] [5] [6] [7] Andre🚐 18:10, 10 August 2023 (UTC)

What you believe is not in and of itself relevant to what this article should contain, espeically in the lead sentence. Please note the following:
  • nothing, and especially no label, should appear in the lead section that is not well-sourced in the subsequent sections of the article;
  • labels or other terms presented in wikivoice (without attribution) should represent statements on which HQRS generally agree, not controversial opinions;
  • I don't see off-hand how any of the sources you just presented support "post-Marxist", and neo-Marxist isn't one of the more common ways the Frankfurt School is designated, as far as I know.
If these sources represent a broad strand of scholarship, the approach that follows policy would be to propose well-supported text for the article body showing that this is a general view; at the moment the list looks like an arbitrary selection of sources generated by a keyword search. Newimpartial (talk) 18:22, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
I know my personal beliefs aren't relevant, but this is based on my understanding of an academic idea which I didn't think was particularly controversial (though I suppose that was naive of me), namely, that the Frankfurt school was "neo-Marxist" or "post-Marxist" thought. But let's discuss the inclusion in the body first. It is certainly not orthodox Marxist thought, so I object to the addition of the unqualified term Marxist in the lead which was recent. Starting with the first source, Garlitz, Dustin; Zompetti, Joseph (2023-01-28). "Critical theory as Post-Marxism: The Frankfurt School and beyond". Educational Philosophy and Theory. 55 (2): 141–148. doi:10.1080/00131857.2021.1876669. ISSN 0013-1857. - this is recent, but I assume it is obvious how this supports my assertion. Do you disagree? Andre🚐 18:29, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
I disagree. I don't even think that article uses "post-Marxist" in the same sense as the literature cited in the article, Post-Marxism.
However, I agree that the recent and unqualified introduction of "Marxist" into the lead sentence is not justified, so I have reverted that addition.
No, the Frankfurt School is not "orthodox" Marxism (the Marxism of Kautsky). Nor is it "Marxist-Leninism" (the Marxism of Lenin, and/or Stalin, and/or Trotsky, etc., depending on the tendency). But that doesn't necessarily make it "post-" or "neo-"Marxism, either, and the occasional random peer-reviewed article doesn't change that. Newimpartial (talk) 19:10, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
Thank you for reverting that. But wouldn't you agree that it "has been described as post- or neo- Marxist" in the sources above? Maybe not suitable for the lead, but the body. It doesn't need to be the same "sense" as the article Post-Marxism. Isn't that where you are editorializing just as you just admonished me for doing? If the sources have described it as neo- or post-Marxian, isn't that worthy of a mention somewhere? If not, what is the rationale? Because "inconsistent with another article" is not a valid one. Andre🚐 19:18, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
To answer your question, the Frankfurt School has indeed been described as Marxist, neo-Marxist and post-Marxist. It had also been described as a conspiracy to subvert Western culture, and as an objectively counter-revolutionary monument to Western empire in the form of the Enlightenment.
Deciding which of these views to represent in the article, and to what extent, is a WEIGHT issue. One thing we shouid not do, however, is to use a term in this article in a way that doesn't fit with the usual meaning of the term. Newimpartial (talk) 20:16, 10 August 2023 (UTC)