Talk:Ediel López Falcón/GA1
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Reviewer: Vami IV (talk · contribs) 20:47, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
Opening statement
In reviews I conduct, I may make small copyedits. These will only be limited to spelling and punctuation (removal of double spaces and such). I will only make substantive edits that change the flow and structure of the prose if I previously suggested and it is necessary. For replying to Reviewer comment, please use 
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Removed, followed by any comment you'd like to make. I will be crossing out my comments as they are redressed, and only mine. A detailed, section-by-section review will follow. —♠Vami_IV†♠ 20:47, 8 April 2020 (UTC)
- @Vami IV: Thanks for the review. Please see my responses below. Cheers, MX (✉ • ✎) 23:09, 14 April 2020 (UTC)
Prose
sought for safe haven
Axe "for".
Done
The second paragraph of "Arrest and trial" should be condensed to the brass tacks.
Fixed I've trimmed down several parts from this paragraph. Let me know what you think.
How/when was López Falcón finally identified?
- Newspaper achives do not indicate when he was identified.
were the first to announce of López Falcón's conviction
Delete "of".
- Done
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