Talk:Don Catlin

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PR and marketing using false dichotomy, non-encyclopedic tone.

This article reads like a biased public relations marketing piece to aid fundraising efforts for the event brands and non-profits listed. Criticism is eliminated. The basis of this article relies on false dichotomy of good vs. evil, clean vs. dirty, honest vs. cheat. These Cartesian dualisms are skillfully utilized to fundraise for the business entities that financially benefit Don Catlin. The entry is skewed towards slandering athletes while glorifying event brands and their testing contractors, such as Don Catlin. Baudrillard6969 (talk) 18:23, 25 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

This article follows the tone of the cited sources, and is written in plain english. Your revisions made the article much less readable. We need to produce text that is comprehensible to the average person. MrOllie (talk) 18:25, 25 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Reads like a fan page with cut and paste text from press releases. Non-objective language reads like an advertisement or brochure. There’s no critical information. No critical press is cited, this is just a fan page moderated by fans. Baudrillard6969 (talk) 20:08, 25 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Wikipedia isn't a place to right great wrongs. We do not go looking for negative press to strike a false balance. If you have some kind of issue with drug testing, we cannot help you change the world here. - MrOllie (talk) 21:24, 25 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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