Talk:Disappointed (Ivy song)/GA1
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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 11:35, 7 May 2016 (UTC)
Lead
- became available exclusively → sounds weird, try "was released exclusively" or some sort of thing
Done
- link music critics
Done
- music critics, who
Done
Background
- Songwriting and production for Long Distance took several years for Ivy to finalize → Try "It took several years for... to finalize..."
Done
- When was the album released that the songs were "several years old"?
Done
Promotion
- "In promotion for" → bizarre
Done
- The rest of the article is GA-worthy.
On hold for seven days. — Simon (talk) 09:21, 11 May 2016 (UTC)
- @HĐ: Once again, I changed the article accordingly. Thank you for the nice comments. Carbrera (talk) 03:29, 14 May 2016 (UTC)