Talk:Direct grant grammar school/GA1

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Reviewer: Aiken 14:03, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Very nice work! Some minor points before I can promote:

Lead
  • Is there a good picture to put in the lead? There's some nice pics below, I'm assuming there must be one.
Origins
  • "Secondary schools controlled by voluntary bodies could receive grant..." Should it not be 'a grant' or 'grants'?
  • Local Education Authority or Local Authority? Capitalised or not?
  • What's a "Circular 1381"?
Direct Grant Scheme
  • What's LEA? (I know really, but the reader might not)
  • Direct grant school or direct grant grammar school?
Characteristics of the schools
  • "Their results were certainly impressive..." POV?

That's all, placing on hold. Aiken 15:09, 29 August 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks for your work on reviewing this. In response to your comments:

  • Is there a good picture to put in the lead? There's some nice pics below, I'm assuming there must be one.
    I've moved the Manchester Grammar image to the lead. It's not the prettiest, but it is the school always mentioned as an example of the type. Kanguole 23:37, 5 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Good idea. Aiken Drum 15:47, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks - this now meets criteria. Aiken Drum 15:47, 6 September 2010 (UTC)[reply]