Talk:Der Herr denket an uns, BWV 196/GA1

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Reviewer: Yash! (talk · contribs) 19:37, 18 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I will get around it ASAP. Yash! 19:37, 18 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

In the meantime, can we have a section on "Selected recordings", like there is at other articles? Yash! 19:39, 18 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I've expanded it. Nikkimaria (talk) 20:07, 18 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
I've formatted in the usual way. I have a problem to find the two required page numbers. Will try to find substitute sources. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 08:41, 20 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

  • "has been suggested" - suggested by?
  • "worked" - better if we can add what he worked as.
  • "Scholars have suggested as a possible occasion the wedding of..." - missing something? Can be better phrased.

History and words

  • Ref for the last two sentences?

Music

  • Any relevant link for "processional music"?
  • "return later" - for? If for the closing section, mention it.
  • "which is also appears" -> "which also appears"

References

  • As stated by Gerda Arendt.

That should do it. My apologies for the delay in reviewing. Yash! 12:05, 20 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I've addressed all of these. Thanks, Nikkimaria (talk) 12:59, 20 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]
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