Talk:Ben Affleck/GA1
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GA Review
"Benjamin Géza Affleck-Boldt;[1] August" → "Benjamin Géza Affleck-Boldt[1] on August"- Done. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 20:42, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
References should be formatted according to WP:CITE/ES; I suggest using {{cite web}}. Unformatted references include 2 and 3.- Done. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 20:42, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
"Noble events" actually only discusses about one event; it can be merged into "Personal life"- Done.
The lead has three, fairly short paragraphs. Either expand the third one or cut it down to two paragraphs, since the article as a whole is not long enough that it necessarily requires three lead paragraphs.- Have been combined. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 20:49, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
"He quit smoking" paragraph can probably be merged with the previous paragraph about his tattoos, as they are somewhat related and both paragraphs are extremely short.- Done. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 20:49, 26 June 2008 (UTC)
"During the final" can also be merged with the previous paragraph as they are related and the previous paragraph is really short- Done. -- ThinkBlue (Hit BLUE) 20:51, 26 June 2008 (UTC)