Talk:Behavior informatics

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Contested deletion

This page should not be speedy deleted as an unambiguous copyright infringement, because... (the contents have been edited to avoid direct copy from that reference and copyright violation) --Lbcao (talk) 11:25, 23 April 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Wiki Education assignment: Psychology Capstone

This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 23 August 2022 and 7 December 2022. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Srivera6 (article contribs). Peer reviewers: Mpatel48, Kayoff, Psychcap, Gsch23, Tolber2K.

— Assignment last updated by Rahneli (talk) 16:30, 9 October 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Article Evaluation

Lead Section

  • I think that the lead section in this article is ok, but not great. It introduces some ideas about the topic of behavior informatics, but does so in a way that if a reader would have to have some background knowledge on the topic to really learn anything from the lead section. For example, the first sentence alone includes the words behavior 3 times and the word informatics twice. I think the rest of the lead section does a better part of summing up an overview about what behavior informatics is. At the lead section does not include a brief description of what will come later in the article. The lead includes very little information, and is too concise. It introduces a few ideas, but they are not elaborated on later in the article.

Srivera6 (talk) 15:46, 3 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]