Talk:Banded bullfrog/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: GhostRiver (talk · contribs) 21:33, 31 January 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Hello! I'll be taking a look at this article for the January 2022 GAN backlog drive. If you haven't already signed up, please feel free to join in! Although QPQ is not required, if you're feeling generous, I also have a list of GA nominations of my own right here.

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()

3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()

Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Infobox and lede

No comma needed after "dark brown back" Y
"low altitudes" Y
Where is it a potential invasive species? Y

Taxonomy and etymology

Good

Description

Why are the gram weights not converted into imperial units, but all the length measurements are? Y

Distribution and habitat

Good

As an invasive species

Both the invasive population is under control and no established invasive population has been found need "as of" qualifiers, as those statements are liable to change. Y
Working on this one a bit more – a helpful IP editor has actioned the other suggestions so far. Thanks for the initial comments! DanCherek (talk) 23:30, 11 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
Alright, added another source for the Florida part, and "as of" has been added! DanCherek (talk) 00:36, 12 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Behaviour and ecology

as soon as rain falls I'd go with either "immediately after rainfall" or "soon after rainfall" depending on what's more consistent with the source; sounds a little more encyclopedic
Changed to "soon after rainfall" based on the source. DanCherek (talk) 17:58, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
No comma needed after "walking and burrowing"
Removed. DanCherek (talk) 17:58, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
where they can remain for a long time How long?
Edited to read "where they can remain for the duration of the dry season", with an additional source. DanCherek (talk) 18:04, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"daytime" or "daylight hours"
Changed to "daylight hours". DanCherek (talk) 17:58, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Diet, predators, and parasites

No parentheses around from opening of the mouth to closing
Removed. DanCherek (talk) 17:58, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Pet trade

Most of the first para feels a little trivia/WikiHow-y, save for the sentence about the peat-soil mixes
Rewrote the paragraph, culling some of the instructional text and adding a sentence about diet. Let me know what you think! DanCherek (talk) 18:45, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"3 to 4 times" → "three to four times" per MOS:NUMERAL
Done. DanCherek (talk) 17:58, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"attributed to its muted colours" → "attributed to the bullfrog's muted colours"
Done. DanCherek (talk) 17:58, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Status and threats

Switch the two sentences and take out "therefore" in the IUCN sentence
Done. DanCherek (talk) 17:58, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

References

Looks good

General comments

Images are properly licensed and obviously relevant
No stability concerns in revision history
Earwig score looks good

Thank you for your patience; I have been working through several health issues both physical and mental. Putting on hold now. — Ghost River 17:44, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks GhostRiver, and no problem at all. I hope you feel better on all fronts soon. Responded to each point above, let me know if you see any other issues! DanCherek (talk) 18:45, 18 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for making those changes, happy to pass! — Ghost River 16:36, 25 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]