Talk:BMPT Terminator/GA1
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 10:27, 11 December 2014 (UTC)
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1. Well-written: | ||
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1a. the prose is clear, concise, and understandable to an appropriately broad audience; spelling and grammar are correct. |
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1b. it complies with the Manual of Style guidelines for lead sections, layout, words to watch, fiction, and list incorporation. |
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2. Verifiable with no original research: | ||
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2a. it contains a list of all references (sources of information), presented in accordance with the layout style guideline. |
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2b. reliable sources are cited inline. All content that could reasonably be challenged, except for plot summaries and that which summarizes cited content elsewhere in the article, must be cited no later than the end of the paragraph (or line if the content is not in prose). |
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2c. it contains no original research. |
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3. Broad in its coverage: | ||
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3a. it addresses the main aspects of the topic. |
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3b. it stays focused on the topic without going into unnecessary detail (see summary style). |
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4. Neutral: it represents viewpoints fairly and without editorial bias, giving due weight to each. |
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5. Stable: it does not change significantly from day to day because of an ongoing edit war or content dispute. | |
6. Illustrated, if possible, by media such as images, video, or audio: | ||
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6a. media are tagged with their copyright statuses, and valid non-free use rationales are provided for non-free content. |
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6b. media are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions. | |
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7. Overall assessment. | Given the prose issues, some indications of plagiarism, and poor reliability of a considerable proportion of the sources, this article does not meet GA criteria at present. I am happy to look at the article again once all the above issues have been addressed, but it will need to be re-nominated. |
Comments from the nominator
- 1a. Understood. I will be sure to change all of that.
- 1b. That will be fixed when the first round of the review is over.
- 2c. I will be sure to comply with the above. I tried my best to keep OR out of all this.
- 3a. The BMPT was never used in combat. A small number were fielded in a school district around 2005. The only operator is Kazakhstan who haven't fought any wars.
- 4. It's a vehicle that never saw combat and was never adopted by Russia, its lack of negativity isn't unusual. I only found one negative press release about it. I will add it after you finish going through all the major points in the criteria.