Talk:After-school activity

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I feel that although not well written, this article is necessary, as there is currently not page on this subject, and many schools have similar activities in which their students enroll. Chamberlian 21:08, 7 September 2007 (UTC)[reply]

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Hello, I'm a student at Rice University and am interested in revising and adding to this topic as a part of a class assignment. I've listed potential sources on my user page. Please let me know if you have any comments, critiques, or advice! Cpm5 (talk) 02:10, 24 January 2017 (UTC)[reply]

I've added a detailed plan for the edits I intend to make to this article on my user page! My main goals will be to add more scholarly sources and more information about the impact of after-school activities. I plan to restructure the article by adding two additional headings to encompass more of the currently existing headings, and I plan to add two new sections entitled "benefits of after-school activities" (where I have added some new edits, but also just moved the "filling time" heading there as a subheading) and "criticisms of after-school activities," which I will make and add to soon. Again, please let me know if you have any comments, critiques, or advice! Cpm5 (talk) 21:18, 28 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review

This article looks really great! I’m especially impressed with the way you reorganized the sections and added references to scholarly sources. Two areas that I think could use some more work are comprehensiveness and neutrality. The comprehensiveness will just come as you add more information, but I think the criticism section could use some work in looking at its neutrality. All of the sections that you wrote look great though! I look forward to seeing this article again when it’s complete. Rjpg12 (talk) 02:18, 3 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Peer Review 2

Hi Catherine! I’ve enjoyed reading your article on a topic that I never really put much thought to. After-school activities can have such a profound impact on the development and socialization of children and it was interesting reading the research in a synthesized manner. I particularly liked your section on “Closing the achievement gap” as both the content and writing itself are excellent. For future changes, I would suggest either adding more countries to your “Local regions” section or explaining the inclusion of the ones that currently are there. What makes these countries stand out in terms of after-school activity? Also, I would consider renaming this section to “Case countries.” This makes more sense as instead of “South Asia,” for example, you added specific countries. Also, I would recommend addition more to the lead section about the achievement gap and how after-school activities vary drastically throughout the world in both purpose and structure. The most important thing to be done to the article is to make what you have written and what has been added before flow well to increase the article as a whole’s comprehensiveness. Sa49 (talk) 13:07, 28 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]

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Serious encyclopedia entry?

Unless there's some joke I'm missing, an article of this title, in any form, is an embarrassment to Wikipedia. No one can take us seriously if we have articles like this. Eric talk 01:43, 20 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Are you saying you never participated in after-school activities and this article is somehow a joke to you? Zoe1013 (talk) 11:49, 24 September 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Extracurricular activity versus After-school activity

Hi,

I have a question here : Talk:Extracurricular activity#Extracurricular activity versus After-school activity Astirmays (talk) 22:01, 8 December 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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