Talk:2011 Leopard Trek season

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August 11, 2012Good article nomineeListed

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Reviewer: GreatOrangePumpkin (talk · contribs) 10:22, 26 July 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
    File:Daniele Bennati-Vuelta a España 2011.jpg was nominated for deletion
    Deletion discussions in Commons are often extremely long, so I just hided it. As the article is very long, it may take some days to fully review it. Regards.--Kürbis (✔) 13:51, 5 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    Surely you're not saying you're waiting for that deletion discussion to finish. I have replaced the image in the article. It's no longer relevant. Green-eyed girl (Talk · Contribs) 19:34, 6 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    I did not say that I will wait until the discussion will be closed.--Kürbis (✔) 17:58, 7 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
  • Genesis of the new team
  • Spring classics:
    • One minor point: I would remove "itself" in "The second group on the road gradually whittled itself down to a select group of top favorites. "--Kürbis (✔) 08:40, 7 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Fall races:
    • Define "neo-pro" in "In August, Nizzolo continued his strong neo-pro season with a fifth place ride at the GP Ouest-France, ..."
    • I don't understand this sentence: "Zaugg then showed a portend of his coming late-season form at the Giro dell'Emilia,"
    • Repetition of "behind"; suggest rewording: "eventually finishing the day in 7th place behind 21 seconds behind the winner Filippo Pozzato.[77] "
      • Doesn't need to be reworded at all; taking out the first behind and adding a comma makes the sentence flow better. Craig(talk) 11:20, 11 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
    • Forgot signing--Kürbis (✔) 11:14, 7 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Stage races:
    • There is a typo at the end: "The elder Schleck brother held his advantage through the flat stage and individual time trial on day two of the three-staage race," --Kürbis (✔) 17:34, 7 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]
  • Giro d'Italia
    • Looks good.
  • Death of Wouter Weylandt
    • "Race doctor Giovanni Tredici, and the doctor for the Garmin-Cervélo team " - I would remove the comma
  • Tour de France
    • Looks good.
  • Vuelta a España
  • rest:


Looks like Craig got the remarks taken care of. I found a few other small errors (typos mostly). Green-eyed girl (Talk · Contribs) 18:32, 11 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Pass Good work and a shame that it was so long in the queue. Regards.--Kürbis (✔) 20:04, 11 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

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