Talk:2010 Penang dragon boat tragedy/GA1

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 21:35, 11 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]


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GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

General

  • Should be comprising of policemen... not comprising policemen
 Done WPSamson (talk) 03:19, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Should be or get clearance
 Done WPSamson (talk) 03:19, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
  • Minor, okay if not changed: Don't have to mention parents name, can just say a parent of a deceased victim
 Done WPSamson (talk) 03:19, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
    • As well, I don't think inquired is the right word and can probably be cut out. There are also some more wording changes needed. Therefore, the sentence can read On 4 November 2010, a parent of a deceased victim revealed that the dragon boat training was unscheduled and conducted due to student requests to a new teacher already interested in joining the training session.
 Done Note that to be clear, it was revealed by the club to parent, not by parent. WPSamson (talk) 03:19, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done WPSamson (talk) 03:19, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done WPSamson (talk) 03:19, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
 Done WPSamson (talk) 03:19, 14 August 2020 (UTC)[reply]
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