Talk:1935 Yangtze flood

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Poorly written

The flow and wording of this article are poor. Repetitive and superfluous phrases ought to be cleaned up. Edit for readability. 47.208.0.117 (talk) 03:29, 10 January 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Constant uses of the phrase "this is because". In parts in back to back sentences. Very poorly written 2001:8003:6C15:9B00:7DC9:136:A2F3:CAD0 (talk) 06:09, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]