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This page holds approved nominations that are waiting to appear in the "Did you know" section on the Main Page. Following DYK approval, nominations are processed and moved into a Prep area, and from there, prep sets are promoted to a queue, and then to the main page.

To create a new nomination or to see those that are yet to be approved, see Template talk:Did you know. For the discussion page see WT:DYK. Click on the link to go directly to the Special occasion holding area.

  If some of the nominations are not showing up properly at the bottom of the page, these alternative pages can be used to view a subset of the most recent nominations.
Count of DYK Hooks
Section # of Hooks # Verified
May 12 1
May 14 1 1
May 16 1
May 17 2 1
May 20 2
May 21 2
May 22 2
May 26 1
May 27 2
May 28 1 1
May 29 1
May 30 2
June 2 1
June 3 2
June 6 1
June 7 2
June 8 1
June 9 3
June 11 1
June 12 4 3
June 13 5 4
June 14 2
June 15 4 3
June 16 2 2
June 17 6 4
June 18 7 7
June 19 4 2
June 20 4 3
June 21 6 4
June 22 10 7
June 23 13 8
June 24 7 3
June 25 10 8
June 26 10 5
June 27 5 4
June 28 9 5
June 29 6 4
June 30 9 5
July 1 12 5
July 2 5 3
July 3 14 6
July 4 10 3
July 5 10 5
July 6 14 4
July 7 9 5
July 8 8 2
July 9 8
July 10 4 1
Total 246 118
Last updated 14:48, 10 July 2024 UTC
Current time is 14:52, 10 July 2024 UTC [refresh]

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Where is my hook?

If you can't find the nomination you submitted to the nominations page, and it also isn't on this page, in most cases it means your article has been approved and is either in one of the prep areas, has been promoted from prep to a queue, or is on the main page.

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  • See Wikipedia:Did you know/Preparation areas for full instructions.
  • In one window, open the DYK nomination subpage of the hook you would like to promote.
  • In another window, open the prep set you intend to add the hook to.
  • In the prep set...
    • Paste the hook into the hook area (be sure to not paste in that that)
    • Paste the credit information ({{DYKmake}} and/or {{DYKnom}}) into the credits area.
    • Add an edit summary, e.g., "Promoted [[Jane Fonda]]", preview, and save
  • Back on DYK nomination page...
    • change {{DYKsubpage to {{subst:DYKsubpage
    • change |passed= to |passed=yes
    • Add an edit summary, e.g., "Promoted original hook to Prep 3", preview, and save

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  • Edit the prep area or queue where the hook is and remove the hook and the credits associated with it.
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Nominations

Special occasion holding area

Non-Olympics requests

July 17

Pure Japanese

  • Source: The movie's trailer and poster
Improved to Good Article status by Murasakihitsuji (talk). Nominated by Nineteen Ninety-Four guy (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 6 past nominations.

Nineteen Ninety-Four guy (talk) 08:21, 27 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: GA DYK on approval day, satisfactory GAR, enough said. I prefer ALT0. BTW ALT2 and ALT3 aren't written in compliance with WP:DYKFICTION; ALT2 should clarify it is part of the production process, not the plot, and ALT3 is part of the plot. ミラP@Miraclepine 02:09, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

July 25

Twice a Man (film)

Created by Hinnk (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 40 past nominations.

hinnk (talk) 07:15, 2 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Hi hinnk, review follows: article created 2 July and exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to what look to be reliable sources for the subject; that it was Dukakis's first film is mentioned in the article and checks out to the source cited; that it was an avant-garde film is mentioned in the article but not explicitly cited, I am happy with this given the sources used ("Home Movies of the Avant-Garde" "...The American Avant-Garde"); I don't have access to the offline sources but found no issues with overly close paraphrasing from the online sources. Just awaiting a QPQ and I think this will be good to go - Dumelow (talk) 08:17, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    QPQ at Template:Did you know nominations/Lady Tacos de Canasta. Agree that it's unlikely anyone would suggest Twice a Man isn't an experimental film, but to be on the safe side, Sitney's Visionary Film: The American Avant-Garde, 1943–2000 does explicitly make that connection (it's the last sentence in the Themes section). hinnk (talk) 19:43, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, hinnk. Looks good to me - Dumelow (talk) 15:18, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

July 26

Kubrick stare

An example of a Kubrick stare
An example of a Kubrick stare
Created by Bremps (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.

Bremps... 10:05, 4 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

Summer Olympics, July 26 through August 11

Please see Wikipedia talk:Did you know#Olympic hooks table for potential timing changes.

July 21 (pre-Olympics hook)

2024 European Athletics Championships – Women's 400 metres hurdles

  • Source: source ("1 1906 BOL Femke Netherlands NED 23 FEB 2000 6 0.180 52.49 CR")
Improved to Good Article status by Editør (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

Editør (talk) 16:28, 22 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Comment – I have also expanded the article 2022 European Athletics Championships – Women's 400 metres hurdles five times, so maybe it could be included in an alternative hook, but I haven't figured out how to do this or what that hook should be. – Editør (talk) 23:27, 22 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Well, if you can come up with a hook that covers both topics, we can simply add this. I can do the mechanics for you, just give me a ping. However, I struggle to think of a good hook for such a double-nomination. If you can't think of something suitable, simply nominate this as a separate listing. Also, please see Wikipedia talk:Did you know#Olympic hooks table for your info. Schwede66 04:51, 23 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you for offering your help. I was also struggling with the hook, the ones I can think of lose focus, so I will just leave it like this. The first round heats of the women's 400 m hurdles at the 2024 Summer Olympics are on 5 August, according to this schedule, so maybe this hook could be added on that day? – Editør (talk) 08:17, 23 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Schwede66: I have nominated the second article for another DYK, you could also use that one for the Olympic theme, let me know if you require me to do anything for this. – Editør (talk) 11:11, 23 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I've uploaded a cropped version and replaced the original image. Schwede66 04:31, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks! I've also used the cropped version in the article. – Editør (talk) 07:18, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Ok, I shall review this. Schwede66 21:38, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • This is a new GA, nominated the day it passed. Plenty long enough. Everything is sourced. The article is neutral and Earwig didn't bring up anything. The hook is interesting and referenced. The image license is fine and whilst not the highest resolution, the photo would be fine on the main page. QPQ has been done. The one suggestion for potential improvement that I can offer, and I note that this won't hold up the DYK, is that I wouldn't start this sentence with a time as, in my view, it violates (at least in spirit) MOS:NUMNOTES: 1.74 seconds after Bol, Louise Maraval of France finished second in 54.23 seconds.... Instead, you could consider: Louise Maraval of France finished second in 54.23 seconds, 1.74 seconds after Bol.... Good work! Schwede66 22:29, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you for your review. I've changed the sentence to "Louise Maraval of France finished in second place 1.74 seconds after Bol, setting a new personal best (PB) of 54.23 seconds, ...". – Editør (talk) 11:00, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area

July 23 (pre-Olympics hook)

René Heyde

  • Source: Contemporary reporting in The Press: "The outcome of those trials — and even though Heyde crashed — was that four “certainties” and himself were named to compete finally at Wanganui. As five were to be nominated for Munich, it seemed certain Heyde would go on that trip. But as it happened, and because Heyde had crashed, N. R. Lyster was asked at the last minute to attend the Wanganui trials. Without riding, he was given the fifth place ahead of Heyde."
5x expanded by Schwede66 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 147 past nominations.

Schwede66 10:14, 4 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Everything looks good. Hook is interesting, sourced, and article passes copyvio checks. Hey man im josh (talk) 15:40, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area


July 24 (pre-Olympics hook)

Toby Olubi, Can't Touch This (game show)

5x expanded by Launchballer (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 231 past nominations.

Launchballer 13:13, 1 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

@48JCL: Which article are you referring to? This is a double nomination.--Launchballer 14:42, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Launchballer: Both. 48JCLTALK 15:23, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I personally like ALT1 or ALT0, but ALT1 my preference. 48JCLTALK 15:28, 3 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]


July 27

Fathimath Dheema Ali

Created by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 192 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:33, 20 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

QPQ: No - Not done
Overall: Created seven days before nom and prose is 2909 B. BeanieFan11, do the QPQ and fix the sourcing issue, and you're good to go. ミラP@Miraclepine 01:16, 21 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Can I please suggest that we run this hook on 27 July, which is when the single women's table tennis preliminary round starts? See Wikipedia talk:Did you know#Olympic hooks table for background. Schwede66 04:44, 23 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Evann Girault

  • Source: L'Autre Republicain (translated: "He made a firm commitment to qualify Niger for the first time at the Olympic Games in Fencing.") / L'Autre Republicain (translated: "Evann Abba Girault, qualified for the Olympic Games in Paris")
Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 197 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:25, 27 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: French-language sources were checked for close paraphrasing; no issues arose. Waiting on the QPQ. Yue🌙 03:56, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area


July 28

Lorrane Oliveira

Oliveira in 2018
Oliveira in 2018
  • ... that Brazilian Olympic gymnast Lorrane Oliveira (pictured) trained for the circus before starting gymnastics?
5x expanded by Riley1012 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 32 past nominations.

Riley1012 (talk) 01:50, 8 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Looks good. Pending QPQ. @Schwede66: Alerting you to this Olympics hook. BeanieFan11 (talk) 02:03, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@BeanieFan11: I've completed the QPQ. -Riley1012 (talk) 20:35, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:52, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area


July 30

Alyssa Mendoza

  • Source: USA Boxing ("It wasn’t until Golden Gloves in 2022 that she realized her skill and that the Olympics was a possibility. She fought five times in six days and won the event but also won best female boxer of the tournament. 'I fought on my birthday during the Golden Gloves, and I remember winning and going straight to my room and praying.' A passionate Mendoza stated. 'I felt like fighting on my birthday was a sign to me that I was born to do this and to be here in the spot I am today.'"
Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 194 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:05, 21 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Comment – I will review this nomination. – Editør (talk) 11:35, 23 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Review – The article is new enough (created/moved to mainspace on 14 June 2024), long enough (1600+ characters of prose), has no copyright issues (using Earwig tool and two spot checks), and is presentable (based on a readthrough). The hook is cited, but from the source, I cannot make out whether this Golden Gloves was a single-day tournament that was held on her birthday or that it was a multiple-day tournament and that she merely won a single fight on her birthday. If it is the former, the hook is interesting enough, but if it is the latter, the hook is not interesting enough in my opinion. Could this be clarified with a source or can you suggest an alternative hook? The QPQ is not yet done. – Editør (talk) 11:55, 23 June 2024‎ (UTC)[reply]
    @BeanieFan11: Please address the above. Z1720 (talk) 16:00, 27 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @BeanieFan11: The QPQ is now done, but the other issue is still open. – Editør (talk) 12:49, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Sorry, I guess I did the QPQ but forgot to respond. @Editør: It seems to have been a multi-day tournament, but I can't tell if she won the tournament on her birthday or just a match. An ALT would be: ALT1 ... that Alyssa Mendoza won a Golden Gloves fight on her birthday? If you don't think that's interesting enough, I could try to develop a different hook. Thoughts? BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:22, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you for clarifying. It looks like the DYK could be featured during the Olympics, so perhaps a hook about her Olympic qualification? There is already something about that in the article. – Editør (talk) 16:17, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Editør: The best I could think of would be: ALT2 ... that Alyssa Mendoza is Idaho's first Olympic boxer? Idaho Press Does that work? BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:24, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I don't think that hook is supported by this source. Maybe change it into ALT3 instead? – Editør (talk) 16:37, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    ALT3 ... that Alyssa Mendoza was the first sportsperson from Idaho who qualified for the 2024 Summer Olympics?
    The article should probably be changed accordingly. – Editør (talk) 16:38, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    (edit conflict) I kind of like ALT2 better (but could live with ALT3 being promoted if ALT2 doesn't work) – the source does seem to support it: Mendoza, who attended Middleton High, is set to become the first Olympic boxer from the Gem State. Thoughts? BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:40, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The source is geoblocked from my location. I visited the page via a proxy, but it contained only two full sentences and not your green quote. But if that's in there ALT2 is alright with me.
    pass ALT2 – Editør (talk) 16:56, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]


Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area


July 31

Dylan Travis

  • ... that in nine years, basketball player Dylan Travis played for nine head coaches?
  • Source: USA Basketball ("In nine years of playing basketball beyond the high school level, he played for nine different coaches.")
Created by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 191 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:34, 18 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Hi BeanieFan11, review follows: article moved to mainspace on 11 June and exceeds minimum length; article is generally well written (I couldn't parse "was named first-team All-State, All-Metro and to the Lincoln Journal Star's Super-State Team" but might just be my ignorance of basketball?); sources cited look to be reliable enough, though I am not familiar with them; I didn't pick up any issues with overly close paraphrasing from a spot check; hook fact is interesting enough for me, mentioned in the article and checks out to the source cited. My first review for a good few months but looks fine to me except that a QPQ is awaited - Dumelow (talk) 15:19, 20 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@BeanieFan11: Following up on the QPQ. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:20, 24 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Dumelow: QPQ done; sorry for the delay. (Also, in the sentence you mention, those things mentioned are different all-star teams.) BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:51, 24 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks, looks good to me - Dumelow (talk) 16:06, 24 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]


August 2

American Samoa at the 2020 Summer Olympics

Improved to Good Article status by Arconning (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 6 past nominations.

Arconning (talk) 15:50, 3 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Bolded article is newly promoted to GA, article has decent coverage about American Samoa's participation at the games, with citations to reliable sources. Said hook is also fine – cited to a local source reliable for this topic, and the main proposed hook is also more interesting than the alt. QPQ done. No other issues.--ZKang123 (talk) 01:34, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area

August 3

Philippines at the 1924 Summer Olympics

The Philippine delegate holding the two flags for the opening ceremony
The Philippine delegate holding the two flags for the opening ceremony
5x expanded by Arconning (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

Arconning (talk) 16:03, 28 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

Image eligibility:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: I prefer ALT 1 TheNuggeteer (talk) 04:57, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area

August 4

2022 European Athletics Championships – Women's 400 metres, 2022 European Athletics Championships – Women's 400 metres hurdles

400 metres hurdles final
400 metres hurdles final
2022 European Athletics Championships
  • Source: Dutch source "Missie geslaagd. Femke Bol heeft vrijdagavond in München voor een unieke dubbelslag op een groot titeltoernooi in de atletiekwereld gezorgd. Het 22-jarige supertalent liep naar de Europese titel op de 400 meter horden. Twee dagen eerder was ze al Europees kampioene op de 400 meter zonder hindernissen geworden. Geen enkele vrouw deed dat eerder." English source alternative
5x expanded by Editør (talk). Number of QPQs required: 2. Nominator has 12 past nominations.

Editør (talk) 10:59, 23 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

Image eligibility:

  • Freely licensed: Yes
  • Used in article: Yes
  • Clear at 100px: No - Personally I feel at 100px the current image is too wide to be useful for this nomination. I would suggest changing it for either the Brossier/Bol photo from the 400m semi or the Lehikoinen/Bol photo from the 400m hurdles final, but I will also leave this up to the promoter if they feel differently.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Both articles' prose meets 5x expansion. Readable prose on both also surpasses the target. Generally well sourced and well written, hook is also cited and interesting. Images are free, however some issues regarding the selected image (see above). 2 QPQs done to match the double bold articles. Besides potentially swapping the image out for another I'm happy to pass the DYK for these articles. Great job! Sims2aholic8 (talk) 09:56, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for your review. I would prefer the Lehikoinen/Bol photo as alternative. – Editør (talk) 10:27, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Or a cropped version of the originally proposed photo if that is an option (cropped to a square, centered on Bol). – Editør (talk) 10:34, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've added a crop of the above. Not a square; this looks better (I looked at a square crop first). Schwede66 02:51, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you, I'd prefer your crop. I think the hook and image caption should be changed to:
Femke Bol in the 400 metres hurdles final
Femke Bol in the 400 metres hurdles final
... that Femke Bol (pictured) won the women's 400 metres and 400 metres hurdles in an unprecedented double victory at the 2022 European Athletics Championships?
– Editør (talk) 08:06, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area

August 5

August 8

Emmanuella Atora

  • Source: Gabon Media Time ("« Je tape les gens pour vivre », c’est en ces termes qu’Emmanuella Atora Eyeghe a décidé de célébrer sa qualification directe le plus grand rendez-vous d’athlétisme au monde." translated "'I hit people for a living', these are the words that Emmanuella Atora Eyeghe decided to celebrate her direct qualification for the biggest athletics event in the world.")
Created by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 198 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:32, 27 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: I prefer ALT1 but it may be too vague when placed alongside the other Olympic hooks, although that's probably the point and that's why I like it. I'll leave it to the promoter's discretion, as both hooks essentially say the same thing. French-language sources were checked for close paraphrasing; no issues arose. Waiting on the QPQ. Yue🌙 03:55, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area


August 9

Manizha Talash

Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 193 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:44, 20 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • New enough and long enough. QPQ has since been supplied. All hook facts check out and are interesting in various ways, especially ALT0/ALT1. Dunno if we need quotes on the quote from the headline. No textual or other issues. Fine for the 9 August Olympic suggestion. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 02:29, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]


August 10

Alasan Ann

  • ... that taekwondo practitioner Alasan Ann was injured by a gunshot four months prior to the Olympic qualification tournament, but recovered in time and won the competition?
Moved to mainspace by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 201 past nominations.

BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:28, 7 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • The article is newly created and is sourced properly along with the hook. No copyright violations but I do wonder if it's possible (if source exists), to add information on how he got the gunshot wound. Regardless, I think the article is overall good to go. But waiting for QPQ and then once that's done, the hook should be ready go. - Toadboy123 (talk) 14:29, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • @Toadboy123: QPQ done. As for how he was shot, all the source says is: Alasan Ann was hanging out with friends in Minneapolis when he heard gunshots and screams. Scared for his life, his first instinct was to run, as fast as he could. “Not now, not ever,” the 23-year-old athlete thought to himself. “[We] started running to our car. And while we were running, I got hit in my leg, but I didn’t stop,” he told Olympics.com, his voice trailing off. Is there anything you think I should add from that? BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:08, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area


Approved nominations

Articles created/expanded on May 14

Saleh Manaf

Created by Jeromi Mikhael (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 64 past nominations.

Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 12:00, 14 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

New reviewer required. Z1720 (talk) 17:24, 10 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]


General: Article is new enough and long enough

Policy compliance:

Hook eligibility:

  • Cited: Yes
  • Interesting: Yes
  • Other problems: Yes
QPQ: Done.

Overall: As noted above, the lede should be beefed up before this hits the main page. Also, given the recent RFC, I'm not sure focusing on the negative aspects of this BLP (i.e., the goat head protest), is going to fly on the main page. It's a very interesting fact, and supported by Liputan6, but something else may work better in the current climate.  — Chris Woodrich (talk) 14:16, 12 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Crisco 1492: I've expanded the lede of the article, but I might need some help finding interesting part of the article other than the BLPed hook. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 12:32, 13 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Unpromoted per WT:DYK. New review needed for ALT2. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 22:58, 26 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@Jeromi Mikhael: Where is it in the article?--Launchballer 17:50, 27 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Launchballer: It was not mentioned explicitly previously, but there was a discussion regarding this in here. I've copyedited the article to make the fact in the hook more explicit. Regards, Jeromi Mikhael 18:00, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
That is not what an underdog is (someone expected to lose), and in either case you'd need an end-of-sentence citation for it.--Launchballer 18:37, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Launchballer: Alright then, change of hook. ALT4: "... that the regent of Bekasi, Saleh Manaf, was protested by his own local environment service?" quote from: this one, ref no. 14 Beberapa waktu yang lalu, Dinas Kebersihan Kabupaten Bekasi sebenarnya sudah mengirimkan surat protes kepada Bupati Bekasi, meminta pertanggung-jawaban bupati terhadap dampak lingkungan dan akibat sampah yang dibuang truk pengangkut sampah. (Some time ago, the Bekasi Regency Environment Service actually sent a letter of protest to the Regent of Bekasi, asking the regent to be responsible for the environmental impact and consequences of the waste thrown by the waste trucks.)
Looks good to me.--Launchballer 06:10, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
"was protested" seems clunky, but I can't quite think of a better phrasing. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 16:11, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I'll take a look at this when I get back. My initial gambit is ALT4a: ... that Bekasi's local environment service protested its own regent?--Launchballer 16:17, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on May 17

South by South Lawn

  • Source: "It was the first – and you have to presume the last – South By South Lawn. Modeled upon and organized together with the original Austin, Texas, interactive festival South By Southwest, it brought a riot of color to the usually sedate seat of the US presidency." The Guardian
  • ALT0a: ... that the South by South Lawn festival was modelled after and "organized together with" the South by Southwest festival?
  • ALT1: ... that the South by South Lawn festival sign was programmed by Adam Savage and a team from Baltimore to illuminate every time someone made a social media post with the hashtag #sxsl? Source: "MythBusters’ Adam Savage and a team of makers from Baltimore made the giant letters “SXSL” that lit up every time someone posted to social media using the hasthag #sxsl. Artist Nathan Sawaya brought his Park People, sculptures of people made entirely of Legos." Smithsonian Magazine
  • ALT2: ... that the 2016 festival South by South Lawn was literally one of a kind? Source: One-off event. The Guardian
  • ALT3: ... that the 2016 festival South by South Lawn included a panel discussion on climate change led by President Obama and featuring actor Leonardo DiCaprio and Canadian climate scientist Katharine Hayhoe? Source: "The main event was a conversation, led by President Obama, on climate change with Leonardo DiCaprio and climate scientist Katharine Hayhoe. When talking about leaders taking on climate change, DiCaprio said, “I'm so very honored and pleased to be joined onstage with one of those leaders—a President who has done more to create solutions for the climate change crisis than any other in history—President Barack Obama.” Immediately following the discussion was the domestic premiere of DiCaprio’s new climate documentary, Before the Flood." Smithsonian Magazine
  • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Wan Abubakar
Created by TheSandDoctor (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 17 past nominations.

TheSandDoctor Talk 00:46, 24 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Hiya. The article was new enough at time of nomination (DYK nomination on 24 May, having been moved to the mainspace on the same day, and has not appeared on the Main Page) and is long enough (1737 characters of readable prose and is not a stub). ALTs 0, 1, and 3 are interesting, sourced, and formatted properly, though I would have reduced some of the detail (such as the dates) to increase intrigue. It is up to you if you want to retain the current level of detail (the character lengths are currently 154, 180, and 198 respectively, which are within policy but are pushing its boundaries). I am not approving ALT2: "one of a kind" is too broad and implies that there is something unique about the event, not that it occurred as a one-off.
    As the listed quid pro quo was used in a previous nomination, I believe that a new one is needed – my interpretation of you must complete a full review of one other nomination (unrelated to you) for every subsequent article you nominate‍ ... A review does not need to be successful to count as a QPQ is that they cannot be reused even if the nomination is unsuccessful (maybe seek clarification at WT:DYK). Please also note that full reviews are needed to count as QPQs.
    With regards to core content policies such as copyright, neutrality, and BLP, I did not detect any violations (there is some close paraphrasing, such as the first sentence of the second paragraph of "Background", but there is a limited number of ways to say the same thing). However, there are some verifiability issues with the article:
    • I think that the basis for initiated by the Obama administration in that White House source is a little shaky; while it is probably true, it doesn't seem to be explicitly supported.
    • Is there a better source than that Forbes profile for Futurism helping to organise?
    • More than 20,000 attendees were invited in the article ≠ More than 20,000 were nominated in the source.
    • General comment about the article (expressly not a DYK issue, more a bugbear): I don't really understand the citation structure – the frequency is very dense when it doesn't need to be (eg technology and music[1] festival[2], one-day event[7] hosted on the White House South Lawn[8], and climate[12] documentary Before the Flood.[13]). You're free to ignore this comment if you wish.
    • Another general comment: if you want, there are some nice public-domain photos here that you can add.
  • As DYK eligibility requires additional work, I am marking the nomination with . Please address these issues before I can approve this nomination. Sdrqaz (talk) 04:04, 20 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • @Sdrqaz: I never got a notification on my talk page from the usual bot about there being a problem here. Weird. The sub-heading of this White House page says that it is "A White House Festival of Ideas, Art, and Action". Does that help any? The Forbes entry is staff written, as are the Forbes 30 Under 30 picks, therefore falling under WP:FORBES rather than WP:FORBESCON. They're not explicitly mentioned in this staff article but if you follow the "media" link for that category of the 2017 30U30 present in the article, the profile is half way down the linked page. I don't think that that source should be a problem there. I have adjusted the 20,000 attendees line. Thanks for the link on public domain pics! I will go through those when I have some more time and add a few. --TheSandDoctor Talk 15:55, 20 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @TheSandDoctor: I don't think that there is a bot that notifies you if there are issues – it is up to the reviewer to leave such notices if they wish. I'll ping you to comments I make here instead, if that's okay. I did see that for the Obama administration issue; maybe I'm being too picky, so I'll leave it. I'll give you some time to find a full QPQ (see my comments at the start) or find clarification at WT:QPQ WT:DYK if you disagree. Would also like to hear your thoughts on the hooks. Sdrqaz (talk) 22:38, 20 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Sdrqaz: Swapped out to Template:Did you know nominations/Wan Abubakar. My mistake re the bot -- I thought that there was one but clearly I'm mistaken. Pings are just fine! For ALT0 would that the South by South Lawn festival was modelled after and "organized together with" the South by Southwest festival? work? Would you suggest any detail reduction for ALT1? Curious what you had in mind for shortening ALT3; I think it is interesting enough as is but I feel creating a sense of intrigue could be improved, just not sure how. (Silly me thought I'd saved this comment last night but apparently not...) --TheSandDoctor Talk 14:53, 21 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @TheSandDoctor: That is an improved ALT0, in my opinion . Take what I say with a grain of salt as hook-writing is not a precise science, but I would advise thinking about the purpose behind every included detail. As the author, it depends on what you want to highlight about the article. I would caution against writing hooks like sentences in normal articles: too much detail may not leave the reader wanting to know more.
    Part of the appeal for ALT1 as written is to attract readers who have heard of Adam Savage or MythBusters. However, there's also the risk that people get distracted by the link and click on him instead to find out more. The team from Baltimore may be extraneous detail if you take a more ruthless approach. For ALT3, the same consideration applies: if you wish to highlight the climate change element of it or Katherine Hayhoe's work, then inclusion of her article is a respectable decision. However, as above, it may lead to distraction: as DiCaprio and Obama are much more well-known, then it may not be necessary to have detail about her. Other ways to make it shorter could simply be just removing "actor" or "Canadian" etc.
    I will emphasise that these are just things to think about and you are absolutely free to disregard them as I will be approving the nomination either way. Sdrqaz (talk) 03:55, 23 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @TheSandDoctor and Sdrqaz: What is the status of this nomination? (For my money, ALT0 does not meet WP:DYKINT, ALT1 could drop 'was programmed by Adam Savage and a team from Baltimore' per WP:DYKTRIM, and ALT3's also cruising for a pruning, probably at 'Obama'.)--Launchballer 09:31, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Mainly waiting for TheSandDoctor's thoughts on the hooks. I don't disagree with you regarding ALT1 and ALT3, Launchballer, but am willing to defer to TSD if the purpose is to bring readers in through highlighting different information (see 2nd paragraph of 23 June comment). Sdrqaz (talk) 01:40, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Sdrqaz and Launchballer: I will get back to this and am not intending to abandon or drop the ball here, but I have had a lot going on in the real world since then that I would rather not get into and won't be available until next week (so a few more days) most likely. Sorry. Just leaving this quick comment to make my intentions clear. I haven't forgotten, I am just at capacity in other areas right now that are eating up my time "irl"... --TheSandDoctor Talk 13:18, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Sdrqaz and Launchballer: My apologies for the delay. I cannot go into it here per se but it was unforeseeable circumstance wise. I would think that a good alt0 replacement would be "that the South by South Lawn festival was modelled after and "organized together with" the South by Southwest festival?", for alt1 I do think there is a strong appeal tying Adam Savage to it but he didn't do it alone so there is a valid point with just not including who did it at all. I concur that we can trim down to just Obama for ALT3. Thoughts? --TheSandDoctor Talk 04:05, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I still don't think ALT0 meets WP:DYKINT. It's not unusual for an event to be organised by multiple entities and even less unusual for it to be modelled after something. I haven't 'verified' either of the other hooks, but if you're asserting they're okay, then this can be ticked off. For pshaw, these are ALT1a: ... that the South by South Lawn festival sign was programmed to illuminate every time someone made a social media post with the hashtag #sxsl? and ALT3a: ... that the 2016 festival South by South Lawn included a panel discussion on climate change led by President Obama? (I do note that last month's most successful hook did not begin with 'that', so we could go with ALT1b: ... what the South by South Lawn festival sign did every time someone made a social media post with the hashtag #sxsl?)--Launchballer 07:32, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Please see MOS:INDENTMIX. TheSandDoctor, I hope that things get better for you in the real world . Note for promoter: my hook recommendations for TSD were optional, and apart from ALT2, they are within policy. Therefore, while I personally prefer shorter hooks, I can still see the appeal of the other unstruck ones and they are all acceptable (ALT0a, ALT1, ALT1a, ALT1b, ALT3, ALT3a). Approved, Sdrqaz (talk) 04:32, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on May 28

List of historic places in Kaikōura District

  • ... that carpenter Cumming "Cum" Haswell erected a historic villa, later described as "modestly-scaled but ornamental"?
Created by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 51 past nominations.

Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 22:43, 28 May 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

Hook eligibility:

QPQ: Done.

Overall: Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:17, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

All good now. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 00:18, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on June 12

J. D. Arteaga

  • Reviewed:
Created by TarheelBornBred (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

TarheelBornBred (talk) 16:34, 12 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • @TarheelBornBred: Article is long enough and created same day as DYK nomination. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and copy-vio free. No QPQ needed. Hook-wise, I prefer ALT0, although I would edit it for contextual sake, and to better reflect the article's content:
ALT2: ... that J. D. Arteaga, a close friend of MLB All-Star Alex Rodriguez, did not foresee Rodriguez's talent?
Please let me know your thoughts. Kimikel (talk) 03:00, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
  • Your version of the hook sounds fine to me; I'm more than willing to submit the article under your revised hook. TarheelBornBred (talk) 01:53, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Approving ALT2. All good to go, thank you TarheelBornBred! Kimikel (talk) 14:48, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      • Sticking my nose in while looking through the approved noms. The hook is barely about the subject, and not knowing someone else would become really talented is...in my view, not that interesting. Is there nothing else to be said that actually focuses on Arteaga? ♠PMC(talk) 06:16, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      • I understand where you're coming from. Maybe to add more context about Arteaga, the hook could become ALT 3: ...that despite being a baseball coach, J. D. Arteaga, close friend of MLB All-Star Alex Rodriguez, did not foresee Rodriguez's talent? This way there is more context concering who Arteaga is and why it is more interesting that he couldn't forsee Rodriguez's talent. Furthemore, considering that Rodriguez is recognized as one of the best baseball players of all time, Arteaga being a close friend of his also is interesting. TarheelBornBred (talk) 05:56, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Music Sounds Better with You

Improved to Good Article status by LunaEclipse (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

lunaeclipse (talk) 21:33, 14 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Since I am a relatively new user (est Dec2023), I am not sure if ALT0 violates NPOV. But regardless, I prefer ALT1 JuniperChill (talk) 22:08, 18 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Tobie Goedewaagen

Tobie Goedewaagen
Tobie Goedewaagen
  • Source: "Dr. T. (Tobie) Goedewaagen" (in Dutch). Parlementair Documentatie Centrum. Archived from the original on 10 January 2023. Retrieved 11 June 2024.
Created by Crisco 1492 (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 668 past nominations.

Post-promotion hook changes will be logged on the talk page; consider watching the nomination until the hook appears on the Main Page.

 — Chris Woodrich (talk) 14:19, 12 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
QPQ: Done.

Overall: I am assuming in good faith that the Dutch refs adequately support the text and that there is no plagiarism. I've done a general search myself as to the subject of the bio in English sources. There were some deletions made to the article of the word Nazi here; restoring the word would help make this properly neutral in accuracy, and I would be happy then to pass this final item of the qpq. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:FD8F:5C17:CABB:9E61 (talk) 20:25, 12 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@DYK admins: I started working on this, but my comments so far are not showing up .. am I doing something wrong in format? 2603:7000:2101:AA00:FD8F:5C17:CABB:9E61 (talk) 20:29, 12 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks. Looks good. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:900D:526B:7A29:78AD (talk) 02:06, 14 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Articles created/expanded on June 13

Harriette Cooke

  • ... that Cornell College professor Harriette Cooke started the Cornell’s Ladies Battalion in 1889, and the women held drills in skirted uniforms while using wooden wands in the place of rifles?
5x expanded by SL93 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 406 past nominations.

SL93 (talk) 09:40, 13 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Approving ALT1. Article is long enough and 5x expanded on the day of DYK submission. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and copyvio-free. QPQ done. Both hooks are interesting and sourced; however, I feel ALT0 is a little verbose and could be worded in a way that flowed better. Other than that, all good to go. Thank you for the nomination SL93! Kimikel (talk) 19:49, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Narragansett Pier Railroad

A Narragansett Pier Railroad train in 1936
A Narragansett Pier Railroad train in 1936
Improved to Good Article status by Trainsandotherthings (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 29 past nominations.

Trainsandotherthings (talk) 20:10, 17 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Approving on good faith. Article is long enough and promoted to GA four days before DYK nom. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and free from copyvio. Hook is interesting, source is acceptable on good faith. Image meets criteria. QPQ done. Nothing else to comment on from me. Thank you for your nomination Trainsandotherthings! Kimikel (talk) 03:34, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Narragansett Pier Railroad engine #1 in 1876
Narragansett Pier Railroad engine #1 in 1876

Chicken of Tomorrow Contest

A white rock chicken, the winning purebred of the contest
A white rock chicken, the winning purebred of the contest
  • Source: "rbor Acres White Rocks’ white feathered birds beat the competition in the purebred category, but Red Cornish crosses from the Vantress Hatchery definitely outperformed them. And as it happens, those two breeds would eventually be crossed and become the Arbor Acre breed – whose genetics now dominate poultry farms worldwide."

"Before long, Arbor Acre’s parent stock had supplied all the major broiler companies in America."

Modern Farmer
Created by Thriley (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 135 past nominations.

Thriley (talk) 02:54, 24 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

  • Newly created in mainspace on 13 June, the day of nomination, by moving from Draftspace.
  • Length is acceptable, at just over 2,000 bytes. Correctly rated Start-class.
  • No obvious close paraphrasing or copyvio noted in spot-checks of sources, but I tweaked a couple of phrases which could have been considered too close to the source.
  • The image is PD because copyright has expired. If used, the hook would need to have something like (White Rock chicken pictured) appended. It is used in the article, so no issues there.
  • Sourcing and referencing is fine: everything is referenced, and to decent-quality sources.
  • No issues with neutrality, POV etc.
  • The hook fact is sourced and interesting – in fact quite remarkable. Length of the hook is fine.
  • QPQ review has been done.

An interesting story. Verified and good to go. Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 19:11, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Luna (Feid and ATL Jacob song)

  • ... that the Colombian singer Feid collaborated for the second time with an American hip hop producer in "Luna", and it was called "an effort to take the genre to the global level"?
Improved to Good Article status by Pollosito (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

Santi (talk) 04:48, 13 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
QPQ: Done.

Overall: Nom is three days after GA promotion, passed a GA review, all good. ミラP@Miraclepine 16:33, 16 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

  • @Miraclepine: That's what I meant, only for me adding another alt and having it approved is equivalent to changing it in some way. I'm sorry for making you think I was literally going to change what's above. Well, here it goes:
    ALT1: ... that the Colombian singer Feid performed "Luna" as the only song at the 2024 Copa América opening ceremony, but there were several technical issues in the transmission? Santi (talk) 20:24, 21 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

18th Lok Sabha

  • ALT: ... that according to the Indian Women's Reservation Bill, 2023, 33% of women MPs will be required although Lok Sabha formed in 2024 has only 14%?
  • ALT1: ... that post enforcement of Women's Reservation Bill in India in the next few years, 33% of MPs will be required to be women although the new Lok Sabha has only 14%?
  • ALT2: ... that according to the Indian Women's Reservation Bill, 2023, 33% of MPs will be required to be women although the Lok Sabha formed in 2024 has only 14%?
  • 5x expanded by Dharmadhyaksha (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 66 past nominations.

    §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 03:42, 13 June 2024 (UTC). General eligibility:[reply]

    Policy compliance:

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited: Yes
    • Interesting: Yes
    • Other problems: Yes
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Approved only for ALT hook proposed by me. Mehedi Abedin (talk) 11:43, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Thanks @Willthorpe:! ALT1 & 2 have suggested now. @AirshipJungleman29:, your response is also awaited. §§Dharmadhyaksha§§ {Talk / Edits} 03:38, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    No worries Dharmadhyaksha, glad to help! Will Thorpe (talk) 03:40, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 15

    Braver Angels

    • Source: Doherty, William J., and Tai J. Mendenhall. "Braver Angels: Counteracting political polarization." In W. J. Doherty & T. J. Mendenhall, Becoming a citizen therapist: Integrating community problem-solving into your work as a healer (pp. 93–111). American Psychological Association. https://doi-org.proxy.lib.miamioh.edu/10.1037/0000378-008
    • ALT1: ... that conservative and liberal participants in Braver Angels Red/Blue depolarization workshops understand each other better if they share political views with their own group first? Source: Oliver-Blackburn, Bailey M., and April Chatham-Carpenter. "‘But I don’t know if I want to talk to you’: strategies to foster conversational receptiveness across the United States’ political divide." Journal of Applied Communication Research 51, no. 1 (2023): 55-71.
    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: June 27-29 is their national convention, so that'd be great timing for a DYK. I'm part of a WikiEdu course on 2024 US elections and I will continue improving this article over the coming week(s). I'd especially welcome advice on the ordering and naming of sections. I'm in touch with the organization and hope to get some images for Wiki Commons and the article.
    5x expanded by ProfGray (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    ProfGray (talk) 00:35, 15 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • @ProfGray: QPQ not needed. Article is long enough and recently expanded. Article is copyvio-free. ALT0 is interesting and well-sourced; I fell that ALT1 is too general. The article has one issue: there is a paragraph that lacks citations, which I tagged. Once that is fixed, the hook can be approved. Kimikel (talk) 01:55, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you, @Kimikel:, for working on this DYK. I fixed the citation and removed the tag. (The ref was actually the same as the previous sentence, must have gotten moved around during revisions, thanks for catching that.) Please let me know if any other concerns. ProfGray (talk) 20:50, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Approving ALT0. Thank you for your nomination ProfGray - Kimikel (talk) 01:30, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Joan (Alexander McQueen collection)

    • ... that the flaming finale of Joan by Alexander McQueen has been read as an image of violence, transcendence, resurrection, and resilience?
    • Source:
      • Bethune, Kate. "Encyclopedia of Collections". In Wilcox (2015), pp. 303–326. (Violence)
      • Spooner, Catherine. "A Gothic Mind". In Wilcox (2015), pp. 141–158. (Transcendence/Resurrection)
      • Fairer, Robert; Wilcox, Claire (2016). Alexander McQueen: Unseen. (Violence/Resurrection)
      • Wilson, Andrew (2015). Alexander McQueen: Blood Beneath the Skin. (Resilience)
    Created by Premeditated Chaos (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 53 past nominations.

    PMC(talk) 23:51, 15 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • The article is long enough, new enough, and neutral. The hook is directly cited. I assume good faith on the references that I cannot read. A QPQ has been completed. Ready. SL93 (talk) 00:26, 27 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      • Thanks for the review. I can send screencaps of anything if anyone does want to check the sources (GBooks has Unseen and Blood Beneath, I think). I just tweaked firery -> flaming as I think it flows more nicely. ♠PMC(talk) 00:53, 27 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Timeline of Partygate

    Boris Johnson's 56th birthday party
    Boris Johnson's 56th birthday party
    • Source: "Mr Johnson is the first serving PM to be sanctioned for breaking the law." BBC News
    Moved to mainspace by A Thousand Doors (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 25 past nominations.

    A Thousand Doors (talk | contribs) 20:44, 15 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Comment not review As this is an article featuring election candidates, it should not appear on the main page until after 4 July, see WP:DYKELECT. TSventon (talk) 21:19, 15 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • New enough and long enough. QPQ present. This is a unique contribution to DYK as it is three paragraphs and a list; even though one paragraph does not end in an inline citation, I am treating it as a lead-section paragraph. All the list bullet points contain at least one inline citation. The hook fact checks out and is included. Image is OGL-licensed and acceptable for the Main Page. Good to go after 4 July per above. Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 04:49, 20 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 16

    AppleToo

    Converted from a redirect by 74.89.25.100 (talk).
    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall: The article does not seem neutral, considering the biased words rarely use quotations, the article also does not seem plagiarism free, with 10 percent of plagiarism, Good enough for DYK. TheNuggeteer (talk) 03:49, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    TheNuggeteer a comprehensive DYK review would give more specific feedback. Which words are biased or WP:WEASEL? Can you give examples so that the nominator can make the relevant improvements? And regarding copyright violation, a percentage doesn't say much. Checking earwig, I checked several examples and determined them to be false matches, or appropriately used, e.g an attributed quote. If you have specific copyright violations in mind, please explicitly mention which ones. The tooling and percentages are meant to guide the search but are not a substitute for in-depth analysis. ~ 🦝 Shushugah (he/him • talk) 10:47, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Shushugah According to WP:CONTENTIOUS "racist" and "sexist" (and probably others: racial discrimination, ableism, assault) are words to watch, considering they are not confirmed (regarding the ongoing 2024 lawsuit). I recommend (also according to WP:ALLEGED) to add alleged and to put quotes beside the alleged words. TheNuggeteer (talk) 11:05, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Also, regarding the copyright, I've changed the checklist from blank to yes. Considering the mistake. TheNuggeteer (talk) 11:05, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    TheNuggeteer, can you check the changes? Thank you 2603:7080:AF03:34A4:3487:F0AC:7F1D:1643 (talk) 19:33, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Added alleged to spots where it was missing and reworded lawsuit to also use alleged. 24.169.15.170 (talk) 06:11, 27 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    A Stroke of the Pen: The Lost Stories

    • ... that early in his career Terry Pratchett had published short stories in newspapers, which remained unknown until they were posthumously discovered and republished in the 2023 book A Stroke of the Pen?
    Created by Al83tito (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Al83tito (talk) 04:34, 19 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article - Created 16 June, nominated 19 June: 4688 words: sources reliable, including source of hook: article is presentable. Hook - meets criteria of verifiability, interest and format. Good to go.Smerus (talk) 13:11, 19 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 17

    Frances Darlington

    Frances Darlington
    Frances Darlington
    • ... that although sculptor Frances Darlington was known for her painted relief panels, she also designed a railway poster?
    • Reviewed: Max Weil
    • Comment: Created over some months in userspace, then moved to mainspace 17 June 2024
    Created by Storye book (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 106 past nominations.

    Storye book (talk) 10:03, 19 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • New article, well written and high quality (likely suitable for a GA nomination). No copyvio issues found. Hook is interesting, cited in the article, and of appropriate length. My one concern is the licensing of the image. Without the photographer's identity and thus death date, and without proof that it was first published prior to 1929, the claimed license is not valid. PD-old-assumed would be valid given that the image is >120 years old, but an appropriate US copyright tag would still be needed. Pi.1415926535 (talk) 06:10, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Fireze by Darlington (detail)
    • Thank you for your comment. Here is the image that you requested as a second option.
    • Note: I always do my best to cooperate on DYK templates, whether as reviewer, creator or nominator. However I also claim the right to an opinion. In this case, you will see that I am doing my best to cooperate. However, in the (nearly) 20 years that I have been a WP contributor, I have never seen a 120-year-old UK photo refused at DYK on those grounds. This image was a carte de visite, as were most photographs in the UK in 1897. They were purchased in batches and used as visiting cards, and were left at the addresses of acquaintances and businesses in the way that we leave our contact details today. Unlike our contact details today, cartes de visite were expected to be shared around by those who received them, because privacy was not an issue in the way that it is today, and cartes de visite were used as a form of advertisement. If that is not a form of publication, I don't know what is. Storye book (talk) 09:03, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • @Storye book: If it's a carte de visite, then I would consider it to have been published. I do think the fireze might be more interesting as a DYK image, since there are a lot of portraits there, but either image is just fine. Great work! Pi.1415926535 (talk) 21:56, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    1969 Progressive Conservative Party of New Brunswick leadership election

    Created by B3251 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 16 past nominations.

    B3251(talk) 13:58, 17 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Approving hook. Article is long enough and created the same day as DYK nomination. Article is well-sourced, copyvio-free, and presentable. Hook is interesting and well-sourced, not sure if there's a better way to word it. QPQ done. Nothing else to comment on from me. Thank you for your nomination B3251! Kimikel (talk) 04:27, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Band of Angels (novel)

    Created by MattMauler (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    MattMauler (talk) 03:37, 17 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
    • Interesting: Yes
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall: Looks good, thanks for expanding the article! I'm partial to the initial hook, but either of the ALTs will work too. ThaesOfereode (talk) 23:12, 20 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Kho Ping Hoo

    • ... that Kho Ping Hoo, despite writing numerous stories based on wuxia, could not read Chinese?
    • Source: Sawega, Ardus M. (22 July 1994). "Asmaraman Kho Ping Hoo: "Saya Telah Iklas Pergi ..."" [Asmaraman Kho Ping Hoo: "I've Accepted My Departure ..."]. Kompas (in Indonesian). Jakarta. p. 20.
    Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 672 past nominations.

     — Chris Woodrich (talk) 19:08, 17 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 18

    Julian Lewis (American football)

    • Source: Times-Georgian (received offers in September 2021 - played high school beginning in 2022)
    Created by BeanieFan11 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 196 past nominations.

    BeanieFan11 (talk) 23:49, 26 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation

    QPQ: No - Not done
    Overall: Counting a 2 day extension, based on the request, the article is indeed new enough. All other criteria are met. Both hooks are verified and the information is included in the article. My only possible tweak would be to tweak ALT1 from "...youngest football player to be..." to "...youngest football player ever to be...", but that's just my opinion, and you have more experience at DYK than I do, so I trust your wording for the hook if you feel your current wording is better. Waiting on QPQ to mark this as approved. Hey man im josh (talk) 13:50, 27 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    @BeanieFan11: Got a QPQ to use for this yet? Hey man im josh (talk) 20:52, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Hey man im josh: Sorry for the delay! Just completed one in Template:Did you know nominations/Capital Bicycle Club. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:57, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Approved now that we got that taken care of. Hey man im josh (talk) 21:06, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Oey Kim Tiang

    Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 673 past nominations.

     — Chris Woodrich (talk) 14:13, 18 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Long enough. New enough. Inline citations throughout. AGF as the sources are not online. No copyright issues (5% to 8% similarity per Earwig). Both hooks are cited but I find ALT1 more interesting (as someone who grew up reading Burmese translations of the Condor Trilogy and many other wuxia novels and as a fan of Spaghetti Westerns.) Problem is: ALT1 is not clearly stated in the article itself. Is Oey An Siok supposed to be the second man with no name? Please clarify. Hybernator (talk) 23:57, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Hi Hybernator. The article has "[Oey Kim Tiang] used a variety of pseudonyms, with ... Boe Beng Tjoe ("the man with no name"), ... attested during this period. Footnote C adds "Oey An Siok also published several translations by himself, borrowing the pseudonym Boe Beng Tjoe". I avoided including the translation twice, but it's the same pseudonym.  — Chris Woodrich (talk) 14:04, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Traceable Radiometry Underpinning Terrestrial and Helio Studies

    • Reviewed:
    Created by Ennegma (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Ennegma (talk) 11:28, 18 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Not a review, but "that many reports and academic publications were produced by Fox and collaborators in order to obtain both scientific and financial support for truths?" would make a cracking April Fools' hook.--Launchballer 13:14, 26 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      • very clever Launchballer, that would indeed be a fun suggestion thank you! And, if we were closer to April now I would have liked to recommend it. But on balance I’d prefer to have this published sooner rather than later - this is my first proposal for a DidYouKnow after all. Ennegma (talk) 08:35, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    No worries. Full review needed.--Launchballer 08:38, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Hello user:Kimikel. I have made some minor adjustments to sections that were highlighted in the report you linked. However, there are several things that the Earwig tool highlights which are technical terms (e.g. "a primary standard cryogenic radiometer"; official names/proper nouns (e.g. "Cryogenic Solar Absolute Radiometer (CSAR)"; or direct quotes to either scientific descriptions (e.g. "constrain and improve retrieval algorithms") or important but non-encyclopedic-style phrases (e.g. "the heart of the calibration system"). Most importantly, there is a blockquote which describes the two primary objectives of the whole satellite - and because these sentences are scientifically specific, I didn't think it would be appropriate to paraphrase them or abridge them more than I already have. I note that User:CFA left a note on the article's talkpage two weeks ago that says "Note to future editors: Earwig scores high because of the large block quote in the Science section. There are no actual copyvios." I hope that is sufficient adjustment and explanation for this review process. Thank you.

    Ennegma (talk) 12:00, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Approving hook. I was aware of the block quote and scientific names contributing to the earwig, but your latest edit removed some of the phrasings that I was talking about. This article is now good to go. Thank you for you nomination Ennegma - Kimikel (talk) 12:29, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Steve Elcock

    • ... that Steve Elcock's Symphony no. 6 is dedicated to "the everlasting execration of self-serving politicians, the obscenely rich and the system that allows them to remain so"?
    • Source: Whitehouse, Richard (2021). "A Symphonic Odyssey", in Musical Opinion, issue 1528 (July-September 2021), p.8
    Created by Smerus (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 42 past nominations.

    Smerus (talk) 13:57, 18 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • @Smerus: Article is long enough and created same day as DYK nomination. Article is well-sourced and copyvio-free. The hook is interesting and sourced, although the source is inaccessible. QPQ done. There is an issue with the article; namely, the lead section is insufficient for an article of this length. Once this is fixed, the hook is approvable. Kimikel (talk) 01:28, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Helianthus devernii

    Red Rock sunflower in bloom
    Red Rock sunflower in bloom
    Created by Mezbalogh (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Classicwiki (talk) If you reply here, please ping me. 04:05, 23 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Thanks all, changes made look good. Classicwiki, I will complete the DYK review: Article created 18 June and is of good length; sources used look to be reliable for the content cited; I don't have access to all the sources but didn't find any issue with overly close paraphrasing in a spotcheck; hooks are interesting and stated in the article (I amended ALT0 to "around two desert springs" as there is a third cluster nearby), AGF on sourcing to journal I don't have access to; image is good and properly licensed; a QPQ is not required in this case. Should be good to go. I just had one remaining query on a part of the text that discusses recreational use of the area and links this to invasive weeds, which I couldn't find in the source. Once this is sorted it will be good to go - Dumelow (talk) 08:19, 27 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      • @Dumelow, I added some citations that these noxious weeds are a problem in Spring Mountains and Clark County area, where the plant is located. Tweaked the sentence. Let me know if there is anything else I need to address. Thx, --Classicwiki (talk) If you reply to me here, please ping me. 05:45, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Hi Classicwiki, I've given it a tick. I removed a bit about recreation that I couldn't find in the source, feel free to re-add if you can support it - Dumelow (talk) 07:33, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Fu Wuji

    • ... that Fu Wuji's Fuhou gujin zhu includes information on everything from astrological signs to the dimensions of imperial tombs?
    • Source: B.J. Mansvelt Beck, "The Treatises of Later Han" pp.129-130
    • Reviewed:
    Created by Kzyx (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Kzyx (talk) 21:11, 23 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
    • Interesting: Yes
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall: The article is okay, and the hook is interesting, the source is a book source but accepted. TheNuggeteer (talk) 11:21, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    WUEC

    5x expanded by Sammi Brie (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 691 past nominations.

    Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 06:45, 18 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:24, 20 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 19

    Melani Budianta

    • Source: Hartiningsih, Maria; Pambudy, Ninuk M (4 February 2006). "Persona: Melani Budianta Mendobrak Batas-batas" [People: Melani Budianta, Breaking Barriers]. Kompas (in Indonesian). p. 12.
    Created by Crisco 1492 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 674 past nominations.

     — Chris Woodrich (talk) 15:39, 19 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Approving ALT1 and ALT2 on good faith, pref. ALT2. Article is long enough and new enough. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and free from copyvio. QPQ done. Hooks are sourced; in my opinion, ALT2 is the most interesting and accessible for a casual reader. Hooks are all sourced with Indonesian sources. Overall good to go, thank you for your nomination Chris Woodrich - Kimikel (talk) 13:17, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Judy Kellogg Markowsky

    Created by SL93 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 407 past nominations.

    SL93 (talk) 23:34, 19 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 03:20, 22 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 20

    Third Josef Hoop cabinet

    • Source: Multiple, see inline
    Improved to Good Article status by TheBritinator (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

    TheBritinator (talk) 22:12, 21 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • @TheBritinator: Article is long enough and improved to good article a day before DYK nomination. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and free from copyvio. QPQ done. The only problem I have is the hook, which I think depends entirely on prior history knowledge, and even then is not especially eye-catching. Please let me know what you think of these alternate hooks:
    ALT1: ...that the Third Josef Hoop cabinet unsuccessfully negotiated the transfer of a mountain to Switzerland?
    ALT2: ...that the Third Josef Hoop cabinet survived an attempted coup from a domestic Nazi party?
    Kimikel (talk) 01:20, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Kimikel:, these are both hooks that have been used on their respective articles already, but I am not opposed to them if it doesn't cause any issues. If so, then I would say go with ALT2 as it is more catching, but either is good. By the way, I noticed that you did not leave me a message on my talk page with the provided template, so I didn't notice your review sooner. Please do that for future reference. Thanks. TheBritinator (talk) 14:59, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Approving ALT2: Good catch on the hook reuse, I apologize for missing that and also for not posting on your talk page. I think the Ellhorn hook is very close to that article's hook, but since the putsch DYK never ran, I don't see an issue there. Thank you for the nomination TheBritinator - Kimikel (talk) 18:29, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Oh that's right, the putsch one didn't run and was put on OTD instead. Shouldn't be an issue then. Thanks for the review. TheBritinator (talk) 20:04, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Gerhard Klingenberg

    Klingenberg in 2010
    Klingenberg in 2010
    5x expanded by Gerda Arendt (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 2109 past nominations.

    Gerda Arendt (talk) 22:09, 23 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • The article is new enough and long enough. Sourcing is proper; everything is in German so generally AGF on the sources. QPQ is still pending. I did not find any close paraphrasing. Article was on ITN's Recent Deaths section so it remains eligible for DYK. The issue is the hook: it fails WP:DYKINT as it is reliant on specialist information that general audiences may not have (a reader who doesn't know that the Burgtheater is Austria's main theater might not get the importance, and why is Camille singled out?). It's also too complicated and has too many facts; ideally it should focus on only one primary fact. There's also the issue raised by 4meter4 in the past that these "actor stepping into roles" instances are not actually that interesting or unusual as that's what understudies tend to do. Given that WT:DYK is not a fan of these "people doing their job" hooks, here are some possible alternatives; I've struck the original hook due to the issues raised above.
    ALT1 ... that Gerhard Klingenberg took on his stage name due to a prohibition on students at his school taking up acting?
    ALT2 ... that during his tenure as the manager of Austria's Burgtheater from 1971 to 1976, Gerhard Klingenberg often directed plays with analogies to a divided Europe?
    Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 13:31, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    ALT1 - in my humble opinion - is trivia which neglects his importance in the theatre world, and focuses on the Austrian bureaucracy. A you aware that this man recently died?
    ALT2 has it, but is very general in the second fact. Why not mention the precise play, which is unusual? Stepping in at 18 seems more interesting to me than the analogies, and more interesting than taking on a stage name.
    I hate to name a play in English that was played in German, but for our crowd's sake:
    ALT0a: ... that Gerhard Klingenberg (pictured), who stepped in at Vienna's Burgtheater at age 18 to play Camille in Büchner's Danton's Death, managed the theatre from 1971 to 1976? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 20:10, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The issue with ALT0 isn't whether or not the play's title is in German or English, but rather the nature of the hook itself. Multiple editors within the DYK community have objected to these "performer plays role" hooks as they're basically about these people doing their job, which isn't what DYK is looking for. ALT0/ALT0a, as mentioned earlier, also fails WP:DYKINT because, again, the hook is heavily reliant on specialist information or context and thus general readers won't get it. I have struck ALT0a as well for the same reasons. You need to propose a completely different angle here, or agree to ALT1/ALT2, because otherwise the nomination will be failed for lack of a suitable hook. To answer your question about Klingenberg's death, him dying recently does not change the issues with the proposal. Just because he died recently doesn't mean a hook about him should be exempt from DYKINT. Is there a problem if ALT1 is "trivia"? Because when you think about it, DYK hooks are supposed to be trivia: that's why they're called hooks. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 23:09, 28 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    We will have to disagree. ALT1 boils down to "he took a stage name" which is trivial and nothing personal, no achievement. Better no DYK than that. I learned "only good about the dead", and I understand that it is "Did you know ...? interested in passing knowledge. I also claim that a play title such as "Dantons Death" is interesting, and that ALT0b is less interesting.
    ALT0b: ... that Gerhard Klingenberg (pictured), who stepped in at Vienna's Burgtheater at age 18, managed the theatre from 1971 to 1976? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 19:40, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    There seems to be a fundamental disagreement about DYK's purpose because how DYK hooks are meant to be written, per DYKINT, is if they are interesting to a broad audience. That is, if they are likely to be perceived as interesting by non-specialist readers. Highlighting a person or subject's achievements or even claim to fame is at best a secondary reason but not a primary one and definitely not something that is explicitly or even implicitly suggested by the guidelines. The opposition to "trivia" here is surprising considering that, in practice, DYK is intended to promote "trivia". That's why there's so much emphasis on highlighting unusual or eye-catching facts, even if that isn't what the subject is best known for. There is a reason why DYK nominators and reviewers generally prefer hooks that go "DYK that Winston Churchill was an amateur bricklayer?" and not "DYK that Winston Churchill was a British Prime Minister?"
    In any case, ALT0c is rejected for the same reason as ALT0a and ALT0b: it is reliant on specialist knowledge and the average readership will not get why it is unusual or interesting ("why is it important that Klingenberg managed the Burgtheater for five years?", "how is his tenure significant or unusual in any way?", "what's the Burgtheater and why is it important?", "what does "step in at age 18 mean?", or "is stepping in at age 18 even unusual or interesting?") If you would prefer the nomination fail rather than agree to a hook that targets general readership then that's your prerogative but ALT0's hook fact by itself simply does not meet DYKINT and thus cannot be used. If you cannot propose a completely different angle from ALT0 and/or accept ALT1/ALT2, then the nomination will be marked for closure. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:23, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Before having read your replay I asked an independent user t look into this. I have no time today, travelling. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 06:16, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    After reading AirshipJungleman29's talk page, maybe an alternate wording of ALT2 could work as well. At the very least I'm certain it will attract more attention to the article than any hook involving him stepping in for a role or any hook about any of his specific roles. Such an angle could work given that the context involved (history) is a lot more accessible than European theatre. If the goal is to promote Klingenberg and allow more readers to click on the article, this angle might do the trick:
    ALT3 ... that Gerhard Klingenberg, who decided to leave East Germany following the construction of the Berlin Wall, directed plays with analogies to a divided Europe?
    It does lose the mention of the Burgtheater but that is to prevent information overload and allow a direct focus on the main point; I could propose a slight revision that includes it if you wish. I really don't think the "stepped in" angle is going to withstand scrutiny given how WT:DYK has often raised complaints about role hooks. My main concern with this angle is the context of "analogies to a divided Europe"; the wording is rather vague if the plays themselves were the ones that had analogies, or he directed them in such a way that he incorporated said analogies, but I guess that can be worked out in the article itself. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 11:56, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thank you for the offer, but the greater miracle in his career was that Brecht made this Austrian come to East Berlin, and on that background, the way back seems less dramatic, just a way home more or less, not - as the hook would make me believe - as an East German dissident. I am also not sure that he directed these plays, - he was great - as almost all obituaries say in other words - in attracting the most wanted European directors of the time to do the actual directing job. I see coming that you say that our readers don't know these directors, if you think that they don't know the most important drama house for the German language, and would not be willing to look it up.
    ALT4: ... that after a career as actor and director at Austrian theatres, Gerhard Klingenberg (pictured) followed Bertolt Brecht's invitation to work for his Berliner Ensemble in East Berlin? --Gerda Arendt (talk) 12:24, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The issue here again is always the reliance on specialist information. Most readers do not know who Brecht or the Berliner Ensemble are and thus would not have the required context to appreciate the hook. It's been repeated to you many many many times already, but what keeps happening is that you insist on hooks that primarily appeal to you and not to the general public. You are an expert in European classical music and theatre and most readers are not, so the goal is to appeal to the lowest-common denominator and target the widest audience, not the smallest. ALT3 is probably not the ideal option (I actually somewhat prefer ALT1 myself), but it would almost certainly get more attention than ALT4. I understand you deeply care about these people and their circumstances, but the way things are going, you are really just writing hooks for yourself and not for others, something that AirshipJungleman29 noted in your discussion with him. In any case, I have struck ALT4 for failing to meet WP:DYKINT as relying too much on knowledge or context that the vast majority of readers do not have. Again, I get your goal is to educate readers about these subjects, but again, that's the goal of the article, not the hook. The hook's goal is to attract readers to read the article, and then they will learn. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:35, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @AirshipJungleman29: Pinging again due to a typo. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 12:37, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Well of coure ALT3 is more interesting. If Gerda really wants, she can post ALT3 and ALT4 at WT:DYK and ask which one is more interesting, but like with Anna Nekhames we all know how that will go, for probably the thirtieth time at this point. ~~ AirshipJungleman29 (talk) 12:48, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I have come in to bang heads together, as usual (that expression means making two children shake hands and make friends), and to support one of the hooks.
    Firstly, Narutolovehinata5 and Gerda Arendt: the DYK hook process, as you know, is primarily about truth, then about appropriateness as a hook, and then about compromise. Most of what you both say, here, is about a reluctance to compromise. Compromise takes two to tango. You are as bad as each other. Everyone has to compromise, not just the other guy.
    So I suggest ALT2, (with picture if promoter agrees) because (1) Narutolovehinata5 proposed it, and (2) Gerda Arendt accepted its truth, and did not totally dispute it. Also, to move this nom on, I offer one of my spare reviews: Jake Bates. Storye book (talk) 15:18, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Storye book, I understand your intentions and want to help Gerda as much as possible. However, you tend to comment on her nominations whenever they encounter issues and particularly after Gerda messages you (see for example her message inviting you to this nomination). This can give an impression, whether fairly or unfairly, of canvassing to other editors, especially when it is known around DYK circles that you are the editor closest and most sympathetic to Gerda. My suggestion would be that, to avoid concerns about canvassing, you avoid commenting on her nominations if Gerda specifically asked you to do so; however, it might be safer for you to do so out of your own volition, as in commenting on her noms independently of any ping or message. To Gerda, I would also suggest avoiding messaging Storye book specifically regarding your nominations, again to avoid concerns about canvassing. Asking for a second opinion from other editors is not inherently problematic, but when it's usually the same editor, and one known to be sympathetic towards you, that could give others the impression of canvassing, which we'd really want to avoid.
    In addition, the QPQ donation is appreciated, but I would advise refraining from doing so in the future except as a last resort. As Gerda is DYK's most prolific editor, she should be very much aware that DYK requires a QPQ within a week of the nomination and a message about it. She should be allowed to fulfill the request on her own, and donating QPQs whenever she forgets to do so could be seen as unfair to other nominators whose nominations get stuck or rejected due to a lack of QPQ. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 15:37, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Please note that I said "just look" in my last message to Storye book. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:51, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The comment wasn't about just this nomination but rather the general pattern. Over the years it has been common for you to message Storye book in particular whenever other editors have concerns regarding your nominations and hooks. If it was just a one-time instance, it probably would have been okay, but it wasn't just a one-time thing, and it's a pattern that it's Storye book specifically that you message rather than messaging no editor in particular or even messaging a variety of editors. I understand both of you have good intentions and Gerda wants help from someone knowledgeable, but the focus on Storye book specifically can lead to the impression, whether fair or not, that canvassing is involved. This is especially considering Storye book tends to be more sympathetic towards Gerda's hooks and nominations compared to other DYK regulars.
    To be on the safe side, my suggestion for Gerda would be that, whenever you want a second opinion or help, you message multiple editors or at least a variety of them rather than just Storye book (the earlier ping to B was a good start, but B may not have been the best option given he is not a DYK regular and has been largely inactive lately). For Storye book, again my suggestion would be to avoid whenever possible commenting on a Gerda nom if she specifically asked you to do so; it might be safer to comment on them independently regardless of any pings or message if desired. Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 16:06, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    We had an edit conflict, and I have no time to read your last comment, sorry. There's real life. - What I wrote:
    I reviewed Template:Did you know nominations/Soldiers' and Sailors' Arch. - Klingenberg, an article nominated for deletion after he died (!), found some interest already, and it was perhaps crazy of me to hope for a bit more interest via DYK. RD has a way of review (by multiple people, looking for referencing and facts) that works better for me. Today is Kafka's birthday. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:15, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Approving ALT2 (with image if promoter agrees).Storye book (talk) 17:38, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Narutolovehinata5: Your above long and detailed comment is wholly inappropriate. As you have yourself acknowledged, I have not responded in this instance on Gerda's behalf. It was your ALT2 which I chose, and I recommended it as it stood, unaltered. So, how dare you ask me to get off Gerda's nominations? In no way have I on this occasion sided with her. It was quite clear that I asked you both, equally, to compromise. We are all here to move these nominations along. That is what I was trying to do, for the sake of WP, and that is what you should be doing, instead of attacking other people and pretending that people are ganging up on different sides. What on earth is wrong with ALT2? You wrote it. I have approved it. Why not accept it, and move on to another nom. Storye book (talk) 17:15, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Dorothy Dworkin

    Dorothy Dworkin
    Dorothy Dworkin
    • Source: Lesley Barsky, From Generation to Generation: A History of Toronto's Mount Sinai Hospital pages 9–10: "The first nurse in charge of the dispensary was Dora "Dorothy" Goldstick, who was to become a driving force behind Mount Sinai Hospital. Born in Windau, Latvia, in 1890, Goldstick had gone ... to train in midwifery. After receiving her diploma from the Medical State Board of Ohio in 1909, she returned to Toronto" and page 131 "with the assembly of hospital matriarch Dorothy Dworkin and a group of escorts"
    Improved to Good Article status by Reidgreg (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 22 past nominations.

    Reidgreg (talk) 13:24, 20 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Comment I will review this nomination. – Editør (talk) 14:36, 22 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Review – The article is new enough (promoted to GA on 20 June 2024), is long enough (8000+ characters of prose), has no copyright issues, and is presentable (both per Talk:Dorothy Dworkin/GA1). The hook is cited and interesting. Although the linked source is not available without an account, I was able to confirm the information by other sources [14] [15], so I don't see an issue here. The image is properly licensed, clear in a smaller size, and used in the article. I thought the most remarkable fact from the article are the thousands of people that she helped immigrate from Europe to Canada to escape the Holocaust, did you consider this for the hook? – Editør (talk) 16:02, 22 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      • I did, but I wasn't sure that 'helped' was strong enough for a good hook. (Her husband and brother-in-law also participated with the travel business, though she is usually singled out as the "rainmaker" who 'made things happen'). Anyways, I thought someone might have a problem with independent sources being a little weak on the specifics. Following is one I'd considered (using 'hundreds' for the 1930s, probably needs some rephrasing). – Reidgreg (talk) 23:19, 24 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      • ALT1: ... that during the 1930s, immigrant midwife Dorothy Dworkin (pictured) ran a labour hall, raised funds for a hospital expansion, published a newspaper, and helped hundreds of European Jews escape the Holocaust?
        I see, thanks. I think ALT1 lacks focus, so I prefer the original hook.
        pass the original hook – Editør (talk) 00:00, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 21

    Union for Democracy and Social Progress (Democratic Republic of the Congo)

    • Source: Burke, Jason (11 January 2019). "Why Kabila may be real victor of DRC's contested election". The Guardian. Retrieved 21 June 2024. Tshisekedi is the leader of the Union for Democracy and Social Progress (UDPS), DRC's oldest and largest opposition party. Critics say he is unproven, inexperienced and lacks the charisma of his father. 'His father was a man of the country. The son is very limited,' Valentin Mubake, former secretary-general of Tshisekedi's party told the Guardian last month.
    Created by Yue (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 8 past nominations.

    Yue🌙 22:12, 21 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Vanderwaalforces (talk) 20:55, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    • @Vanderwaalforces: Thank you for taking the time to do this review! I will note that I did have to do a QPQ, which I did. You can double check and, if you see no issues, please modify your review to reflect this. Cheers. Yue🌙 21:08, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    185 Montague Street

    185 Montague Street
    185 Montague Street
    Created by Epicgenius (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 659 past nominations.

    Epicgenius (talk) 15:49, 21 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Good work overall. Of these hooks, I prefer ALT3 (the contrast of being nearly full in a high-vacancy area stands out) and ALT1 (the connection may be clearer with an explicit mention of Art Deco style). Epicgenius, did you still want to propose additional hooks for consideration? Complex/Rational 15:36, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    @ComplexRational: Thanks for the review. On further thought, I don't think I have any other hooks in mind. Epicgenius (talk) 15:41, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    181 Montague Street

    181 Montague Street
    181 Montague Street
    Created by Epicgenius (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 658 past nominations.

    Epicgenius (talk) 15:43, 21 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: TheNuggeteer (talk) 12:06, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    • Source: "The book stuck with Smith, a local dentist, for so long that a few weeks ago, at age 62, he climbed the Matterhorn himself." [16]
    • ALT1: ... that Banner in the Sky was inspired by the first ascent of the Matterhorn? Source: "In 1865, an Englishman by the name of Edward Whymper became the first man to climb the ... Matterhorn. ... Ullman took inspiration from this real-life account when ... [writing] Banner in the Sky." [17]
    • ALT2: ... that before writing Banner in the Sky Ullman climbed the Matterhorn with his son? Source: "Ullman has come up with a superb mountain-climbing story for young readers. The author and his son recently climbed the Matterhorn" [18]
    • Reviewed:
    Converted from a redirect by Andrewa (talk) and TipsyElephant (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    TipsyElephant (talk) 12:10, 22 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
    • Interesting: Yes
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall: The source stated at both the dyk and the article needs a specific login to a school/institution. This is my third review, so take my opinion with a grain of salt. TheNuggeteer (talk) 03:32, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 22

    Asphendou Cave petroglyphs

    Created by Chipmunkdavis (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 38 past nominations.

    CMD (talk) 14:26, 22 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Ooh, I've never read anything about Paleolithic Crete before! I like this a lot. I like the first hook; it checks out from the source, and the article seems in good shape (eligible, long enough, no evidence of copyvio.) QPQ checks out. Seems GTG! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 19:21, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    James Alison Glover

    • Source: "his findings that ‘spacing-out’ of beds prevented military epidemics of cerebro-spinal fever " [19][20]
    Created by Whispyhistory (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 199 past nominations.

    Whispyhistory (talk) 06:03, 29 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • @Whispyhistory: QPQ done. Article is long enough and created 7 days before DYK nomination. Article is presentable and copyvio-free. Hook is interesting and well-sourced. Article has an issue with sourcing: there is an unsubstantiated claim in the lede that is not mentioned anywhere else in the article. Once this is fixed, the nomination can be approved. Kimikel (talk) 02:52, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    @Kimikel: please check now. Whispyhistory (talk) 19:04, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    WZZM

    The WZZM weatherball
    The WZZM weatherball
    5x expanded by Sammi Brie (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 693 past nominations.

    Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 02:53, 24 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
    • Interesting: Yes
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Article nominated two days after promotion to GA. Passes Copyvio check. Picture is free use. QPQ done. AGF on ALT0 offline source. I prefer ALT0, it's more interesting. Riley1012 (talk) 21:56, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Aid climbing

    • Reviewed:
    Improved to Good Article status by Aszx5000 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Aszx5000 (talk) 13:45, 23 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Approving nomination. Article is long enough and promoted to GA 1 day before DYK nom. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and copyvio-free (excluding quoted section). Hook is interesting and well-sourced. Image meets criteria. QPQ not needed. Good to go. Thank you for you nomination Aszx5000! Kimikel (talk) 02:35, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Jacob Geller

    • ... that Jewish video essayist Jacob Geller cited Jewish traditions of study and scholarship as an inspiration behind his analysis of popular culture?
    • Reviewed:
    Created by Orchastrattor (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Orchastrattor (talk) 20:53, 22 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article is long enough and published a day before DYK submission. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and copyvio-free. Hook is interesting and sourced. QPQ not needed. Good to go. Thank you for your nomination Orchastrattor! Kimikel (talk) 02:26, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Supernovae in fiction

    Artist's impression of a supernova
    Artist's impression of a supernova
    • ... that in fiction, supernovae (pictured) are induced to serve as weapons, power sources for time travel, and advertisements?
    Improved to Good Article status by TompaDompa (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 21 past nominations.

    TompaDompa (talk) 21:59, 22 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • article was recently promoted, is long enough and is within policy. Hook is short enough and interesting. QPQ is complete. « Gonzo fan2007 (talk) @ 16:49, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Georg Kareski

    Created by Buidhe (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 246 past nominations.

    (t · c) buidhe 05:54, 22 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Hi Buidhe (talk), review follows: article created 22 June; article is on the shorter side but exceeds minimum length; sources look to be reliable for the information cited; a QPQ has been carried out; hook fact is interesting and stated in the article. I don't have access to the academic sources cited but happy to assume they support the statement, the JTA contemporary source reports the fact. I didn't spot any overly close paraphrasing from the sources I could access. Looks fine to me, interesting article/subject - Dumelow (talk) 12:11, 22 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 23

    Diesel (donkey)

    • ... that after disappearing in 2019, Diesel is "living his best life" with a wild elk herd?
    Created by Gobonobo (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 121 past nominations.

    gobonobo + c 02:57, 28 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Article checks out for newness, length, and plagiarism; on the shorter side, but still long enough to be counted for DYK. Well written and well sourced. Hook is interesting and cited; I personally believe ALT1 to be the more interesting of the proposed hooks. QPQ done by editor. Overall checks out, however article is currently nominated for AfD, so until that process has been completed the review is on hold. Sims2aholic8 (talk) 09:35, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Passing this now that article has survived AfD. Sims2aholic8 (talk) 08:37, 9 July 2024 (UTC) Sims2aholic8 (talk)[reply]

    Adding an alt here:
    • ALT2: ... that the escaped donkey Diesel is "living his best life" with a wild elk herd?
    @Bremps: I really like the "living his best life" quote. Maybe there's a way to incorporate both. Something like...that an escaped donkey "living his best life" may have killed a mountain lion? I'm reluctant to go with a "may have killed" hook though, since others have pointed out that the article is already pretty heavy on speculation. For what it's worth, this reference indicates that donkeys killing mountain lions is rare, but not unheard of. Maybe Sims2aholic8 has an opinion now that the article has survived AfD. gobonobo + c 01:08, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    User:Gobonobo I get it, I also like to cleanse my DYK hooks of speculation. If you're willing to stomach the "possibly", that's not a bad hook. Bremps... 02:12, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Yeah I also really like the "living his best life" quote, so definitely keen to place that in the hook. Also completely understand the reluctance to lean on speculation here re. the mountain lion, but it is a very interesting aspect of this story. Potentially something along the lines of that an escaped donkey "living his best life" with an elk herd was reported to have killed a mountain lion? I think it's important to note why he's living his best life (i.e. with the elk herd); without that caveat I'm not sure how relevant the quote is to the hook. Sims2aholic8 (talk) 08:37, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Oliver Golden

    Created by Miraclepine (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 46 past nominations.

    ミラP@Miraclepine 02:38, 1 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article was created in draft space and moved to mainspace. I think the timing should be acceptable. It's long enough, appears to be neutrally written, and has citations throughout. The proposed hooks are interesting and cited inline. Copyright violation appears unlikely. QPQ is provided. I made one correction regarding MOS:SURVIVEDBY. – Muboshgu (talk) 00:27, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Mount Leona Fire

    Smoke from the Mount Leona Fire at sunset
    Smoke from the Mount Leona Fire at sunset
    • ... that sources have reported the Mount Leona Fire (smoke pictured) burning as little as 4,820 acres (1,950 ha) or over 6,000 acres (2,400 ha)?
    • Source:
      • "Ferry County, Washington Community Wildfire Protection Plan (CWPP) section "4.2.2.1.3 Mount Leona Fire (2001) - 4,820 acres" bottom of page 65
      • Associated Press (August 27, 2001). "Washington wildfires winding down". Ellensburg Daily Record. p. 3. gives 6,199 acres
    • ALT1: ... that the Mount Leona Fire (smoke pictured) was finally contained on the upper slopes of Profanity?
    • Source:
    • "Ferry County, Washington Community Wildfire Protection Plan (CWPP) gives 4820 section "4.2.2.1.3 Mount Leona Fire (2001) - 4,820 acres" middle of page 66
    • "Once the fire had reached higher elevations on Profanity Peak and the northerly slopes of the headwaters of Long Alec Creek, the fire behavior moderated so that hand crews and dozers were able to stop the fire"
    Moved to mainspace by Kevmin (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 352 past nominations.

    Kevmin § 23:20, 24 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Approving ALT1. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and copyvio-free. Article is long enough and moved to mainspace 1 day before DYK nom. ALT0 is lacking a verb (I think you just forgot to write "burned"); as such, I'm approving ALT1, which is intriguing and sourced here on page 73. Image meets criteria. QPQ done. Thank you for the nomination Kevmin! Kimikel (talk) 21:32, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Red (Taylor's Version)

    Taylor Swift
    Taylor Swift
    • Source: "Speaking of Taylor Swift, we must thank her for originating the season. Last November, the singer-songwriter put a name to “Sad Girl Autumn” when she released a re-recorded version of her album Red" (The Independent)
    Improved to Good Article status by Ippantekina (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.

    Ippantekina (talk) 12:20, 26 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article was promoted to GA and nominated here within the relevant window. Article is long enough and has no copyvio concerns. Hook is sourced appropriately but I would recommend removing the inline attribution to The Independent. One reason is that the article is by a writer with The Independent (rather than an editorial by The Independent). Additionally, the claim that Red (Taylor's Version) spurred "Sad Girl Autumn" is not exclusive to Meredith Clark's article in The Independent. I would recommend altering it to read "that the Taylor Swift album Red (Taylor's Version) was credited with creating the 'Sad Girl Autumn' popular culture phenomenon?" Otherwise, outstanding work. Looking forward to approving upon reply. ~ Pbritti (talk) 15:59, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Wong Sau Ying

    Wong Sau Ying wearing her hair in a bob cut
    Wong Sau Ying wearing her hair in a bob cut
    • ... that after Wong Sau Ying (pictured) attempted to assassinate a British colonial official, the police and press began to associate the bob cut with anarchism?
    Improved to Good Article status by Grnrchst (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 37 past nominations.

    Grnrchst (talk) 09:54, 24 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • @Orchastrattor: Here's a couple excerpts from the text. It goes further into this in preceding and subsequent paragraphs:

      The colonial public was chilled by her [Wong Sau Ying's] exacting premeditation. The ‘bobbed-hair woman’ had arrived in Kuala Lumpur only that morning. Some reports said that she came from Canton; others that she was from Penang, and fluent in Malay. They were, above all, obsessed by the way she looked. [...]
      The year 1925 was when the ‘Modern Girl’ became a global phenomenon, and in this the women of Asia took the lead. [...] There were stories of ‘bobbed-hair riots’ as far away as Mexico City, of rival ‘anti-bobbed-hair leagues’ and ‘bobbed-hair defence leagues’. [...]
      The ‘Modern Girl’ was increasingly linked to a dangerous, disordered modernity; to nihilism and to anarchism. As one expatriate journal put it: ‘The now notorious “bobbed-haired” lady might just as well have turned up in Venezuela or Tibet for all the relation that her “mission” had to events in Malaya... Politics virtually do not exist in this country.’ The Straits Times brayed for a system of ‘identity tickets’ to indicate who was a loyal subject of His Majesty King George V and who was not. There were suddenly other sightings of ‘strange’ young women in Kuala Lumpur. [...]
      At the root of the case was her ‘new style’.

      --Grnrchst (talk) 09:32, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    A9 dualling project

    Created by JuniperChill (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    JuniperChill (talk) 10:10, 24 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Ascension Island Marine Protected Area

    Created by Chipmunkdavis (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 39 past nominations.

    CMD (talk) 14:47, 23 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 14:49, 24 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Cobra Crack

    Climber standing at the distinctive 'Cobra' silhouette groove at the start of the Cobra Crack
    Climber standing at the distinctive 'Cobra' silhouette groove at the start of the Cobra Crack
    Improved to Good Article status by Aszx5000 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

    Aszx5000 (talk) 13:57, 23 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article has achieved Good Article status. No issues of copyvio or plagiarism. All sources appear reliable. Hook is interesting and sourced. QPQ is done. Looks ready to go. Thriley (talk) 03:01, 24 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 24

    Cyprus in the Eurovision Song Contest 2004

    • Source: "Lisa Andreas, 16 [...] was the contest's youngest competitor."BBC News
    Improved to Good Article status by Grk1011 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 6 past nominations.

    Grk1011 (talk) 13:40, 29 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: GTG! lunaeclipse (talk) 14:31, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Matahi Brightwell

    Matahi Brightwell
    Matahi Brightwell
    • Source: [21] "Mr Brightwell was made an Officer of the New Zealand Order of Merit for starting waka ama in Aotearoa, a sport he picked up – along with his name and his wife Raipoia – while he was building the ocean-going waka Hawaikinui in Tahiti."
    • ALT1: ... that Matahi Brightwell (pictured) left the eyes of Ngātoro-i-rangi blank? Source: [22] "When Mr Brightwell created Ngatoroirangi, he was so upset by the negativity that he left the sculpture's eyes blank."
    • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Sofiya Vakman
    • Comment: Welcome any suggestions for alternative hooks or improvements to the hook or article. There's also a free picture of the Ngātoro-i-rangi sculpture (currently in the article) that could be used as an alternative to the picture of Brightwell, although I'm not sure it'll show up well at 100x100.
    Created by Chocmilk03 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 29 past nominations.

    Chocmilk03 (talk) 02:28, 25 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article is long enough and created a day day before DYK nom. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and free from copyvio. QPQ done. Hooks are both interesting; personally, I think ALT0 works better from a DYK perspective as it's more accessible to someone who doesn't know what Ngatoroirangi is. Image meets criteria. Thank you for your nomination Chocmilk03! Kimikel (talk) 22:43, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Hercules (1973 ship)

    • ... that on 20 July 1982, the neutral oil tanker Hercules was scuttled after being struck by an Argentine bomb during the Falklands War?
    • Source: "June 8 .... that afternoon Hercules was attacked without warning in three different strikes by Argentine aircraft using bombs and air-to-surface missiles" from: Sohn, Louis B.; Noyes, John (25 October 2021). Cases and Materials on the Law of the Sea. BRILL. p. 82. ISBN 978-90-04-48042-1. and "20 July: The VLCC Hercules has her seacocks opened ... it had been decided that the unexploded bomb aboard was too dangerous to defuse and thus sinking was the only alternative" from:Ambrose, A. J. (1983). Jane's Merchant Shipping Review. Jane's Publishing Company. p. 17. ISBN 978-0-7106-0261-9.
    • ALT1: ... that the neutral Liberian oil tanker Hercules was attacked three times by Argentine aircraft during the Falklands War and eventually scuttled? Source: As above
    • ALT2: ... that the neutral oil tanker Hercules carried an unexploded bomb into a Brazilian port after being attacked by Argentine aircraft during the Falklands War? Source: As above
    • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/War Tank America
    • Comment: ALT0 if it can be run on 20th July, others if not.
    Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 847 past nominations.

    Dumelow (talk) 16:33, 24 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Approving all hooks on good faith. Article is long enough and was created same day as DYK nom. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and free from copyvio. Hooks are interesting and sourced; the exact pages are unavailable online. QPQ done. Thank you for your nomination Dumelow! Kimikel (talk) 22:00, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 25

    Empire of Death (Doctor Who episode)

    Moved to mainspace by OlifanofmrTennant (talk) and TheDoctorWho (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 15 past nominations.

    Questions? four Olifanofmrtennant (she/her) 01:55, 25 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article is neutral, free from copyvio, suitably referenced, and meets the length and newness criteria—moved to mainspace on 23 June, within seven days of this nomination. The hooks are succinct, neutral, interesting, and reliably sourced; I've changed "fifty years" to "up to 50 years" for clarity and concision. QPQ is done (though your reviews should be a bit more detailed). This is good to go! Rhain (he/him) 23:27, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Roscoe "Red" Jackson

    • Source: May 26, 1937. "Red" Jackson Pays for Crime on Gallows. Stone County News-Oracle. [23]
    • Reviewed:
    Created by GuyBanks (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    GuyBanks (talk) 14:29, 25 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    References

    1. ^ "Missouri Death Penalty". Death Penalty Info.

    Tim Hughes (soldier)

    Tim Hughes
    Tim Hughes
    • Source: Hall, Robert (1996). "Hughes, Timothy (1919–1976)". Australian Dictionary of Biography
    Improved to Good Article status by Peacemaker67 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 27 past nominations.

    Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 08:00, 25 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Approving both hooks. Article is long enough and promoted to GA same day as DYK nomination. Article is presentable, well-sourced, and copyvio-free. Hooks are interesting and sourced; although 2nd source is not accessible, it is acceptable on good faith. Image meets criteria, QPQ done. Good to go, thank you for your nomination Peacemaker67! Kimikel (talk) 22:11, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Peter Talbot (bishop)

    Portrait of Peter Talbot
    Portrait of Peter Talbot
    • Reviewed:
    Created by SkywalkerEccleston (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    SkywalkerEccleston (talk) 01:22, 25 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article is long enough and was promoted to GA one day before DYK nom. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and copyvio-free. Hook is interesting and sourced. No QPQ needed. Image meets criteria. Good to go, thank you for your nominiation SkywalkerEccleston - Kimikel (talk) 21:57, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Kelvite sounding machine

    • ... that the Kelvite sounding machine used a chemical reaction to determine the depth of water in which a ship was sailing?
    Created by AntientNestor (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 6 past nominations.

    AntientNestor (talk) 09:03, 25 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: AGF on the offline sources, but the sourcing frequency is adequate and the online sources are acceptable. I might add to the hook that the device was invented in 1872, and perhaps that it continued to be used through the 20th century, as I think that's an interesting detail. There's a freely-licensed diagram that could be used as a hook image, although the small text labels may be undesirable at 120px. GorillaWarfare (she/her • talk) 17:14, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Coon Rapids Dam

    Created by Darth Stabro (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 50 past nominations.

    Pbritti (talk) 04:22, 26 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough

    Policy compliance:

    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: @Darth Stabro and Pbritti: Nice work on this article. There are just a few issues that need to be fixed. Epicgenius (talk) 15:04, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    @Epicgenius: Thanks for the review! I think the issues have been addressed. ~ Pbritti (talk) 16:06, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Looks good to go now. Epicgenius (talk) 16:13, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Ashin Munindabhivamsa

    Created by Battlesnake1 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

    Htanaungg (talk) 10:08, 25 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: The article appeared in the news before, and the hook does not seem interesting because these types of killings are common. Considering the reply of the nominator. I feel life ALT2 is more interesting. TheNuggeteer (talk) 00:52, 26 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    @TheNuggeteer: Thank you for the review. Per WP:DYKNEW, I’ve mentioned in the comment that the subject is listed only in RD section of the ITN, not bold link.
    Although this type of killing may be common elsewhere, it is a rare case in the highly religious country that a prominent religious figure was shot dead by the ruling junta’s soldiers. Plus, it is very few that the junta apologized publicly; he would never show his weakness in public.
    I’d like to nominate another ALTs:
    Regards, Htanaungg (talk) 03:36, 26 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Software maintenance

    Improved to Good Article status by Buidhe (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 247 past nominations.

    (t · c) buidhe 00:41, 25 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • The article is new enough (promoted to GA yesteday).
    • The article is long enough.
    • The article is well-sourced, neutral, BLP-compliant, and copyvio-free. Earwig at 4.8%, copyvio unlikely.
    • The article is presentable.
    • The hook is cited to a reliable source (I assume Ref9 in the article), the source is not linked in the DYK.
    • Images are in public domain.
    • QPQ done.

    Looks good to me. Vacant0 (talk) 11:58, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 26

    Hannibal von Degenfeld

    Hannibal von Degenfeld, engraving by Wolfgang Philipp Kilian
    Hannibal von Degenfeld, engraving by Wolfgang Philipp Kilian
    • Source: Staudinger 1904, p. 575: "der Begründer des jungen Heeres Freiherr von Degenfeld" and Wheatcroft 2009, p. 168: "...all the main players planned the decisive battle that would settle the fate of Vienna. The duke represented the Habsburg forces and the Emperor; General Hannibal von Degenfeld took the place of his master, Max Emmanuel, the Elector of Bavaria."
    Created by Cplakidas (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 144 past nominations.

    Constantine 16:24, 30 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • All the sources are offline or in German, but just about everything else is in order. Long enough and new enough. I myself prefer the first hook. A few minor quibbles: (1) A couple of sentences in the Venetian service subsection aren't sourced. (2) Is the Life section break really necessary? Clarityfiend (talk) 10:24, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Rozelle–Darling Harbour railway line

    • Reviewed:
    • Comment: Since opening this nomination, I have moved the page from Rozelle–Darling Harbour railway line to Rozelle–Darling Harbour Goods Line. The former title reflected general – but not mandatory – convention on articles for Australian railway lines, while the latter reflects the line's common name. As such, this nomination links to what is now a redirect, while the hook itself links to what is now the article's primary title. The article remains the same; it has simply been moved on relatively minor technical grounds. Will Thorpe (talk) 07:03, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Created by Willthorpe (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Will Thorpe (talk) 15:07, 2 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Launchballer The subject of the nomination is the main page, not the redirect. The title of the article (Rozelle-Darling Harbour railway line) reflects Wikipedia convention on the naming of rail lines in Australia, while the hook and article body (Rozelle-Darling Harbour Goods Line) reflects its common name. Happy to amend if necessary. Cheers, Will Thorpe (talk) 01:40, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I’ve actually now requested the article be moved to its common name, which is what is used in the nomination. Cheers, Will Thorpe (talk) 01:57, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    New enough, long enough, interesting, no copyright problems, hook cited on article, all good. The light is now green. JuniperChill (talk) 21:39, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    WIAT

    Improved to Good Article status by Sammi Brie (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 694 past nominations.

    Sammi Brie (she/her • tc) 20:21, 26 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Windy Zhan

    Zhan in 2024
    Zhan in 2024
    • Reviewed:
    Created by Will629 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Will629 (talk) 19:13, 26 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Hello, Will629. The nomination is timely and the article is long enough with no copyvios detected. Several entries in the Discography table, as well as the Awards and nominations table, appear unsourced, though. These would require references. I think it can use some tweaking for catchiness; how about this?--NØ 19:35, 26 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      • ALT1: ... that Windy Zhan (pictured) of the Hong Kong girl group After Class has been learning and practising vocal music since the age of five?
        • MaranoFan, thank you very much for your prompt review. I have corrected the issues and your question suggestion is very good, thank you! May I ask what do I need to do for using your ALT1 suggestion, as I am new for DYK in English Wikipedia. Thank you!--Will629 (talk) 19:52, 26 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
          • I have struck the first hook so ALT1 will be considered by the promotor, no further action required. Thank you for correcting the issues so quickly. Foreign-language reference accepted in good faith, this is good to go. Welcome to the English Wikipedia and best of luck here!--NØ 20:02, 26 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Ianto's Shrine

    Ianto's Shrine in 2024
    Ianto's Shrine in 2024
    • ... that a shrine (pictured) dedicated to the fictional character Ianto Jones is visited by people from around the world?
    Moved to mainspace by Suntooooth (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 8 past nominations.

    Suntooooth, it/he (talk/contribs) 02:06, 26 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Good job! TheNuggeteer (talk) 06:06, 26 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 27

    Teri Ore

    • Reviewed:
    Created by KunalAggarwal95 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 09:40, 4 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • I'll review this. RoySmith (talk) 18:13, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Long enough
    • New enough
    • Earwig is over-quota on searches, but no problems seen when run in links-only mode.
    • I don't see any problems with NPOV, BLP, etc.
    • The sources range from high-quality to meh (random entertainment industry websites) but nothing that sets off alarm bells.
    • Nom is QPQ-exempt.
    • The hook fact is in the article and cited. That being said, I don't know what "changing" means in this context
    • I don't know anything about how music videos are shot, but having it done in 6 hours does seem interesting.
    • approved, with the one proviso that maybe the word "changing" needs to be clarified in the hook. RoySmith (talk) 18:23, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    "changing dress"? KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 06:36, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Jenny Hurn

    Jenny Hurn
    Jenny Hurn
    • ... that Jenny Hurn (pictured) in Lincolnshire, England, is said to be haunted by a boggart that crosses the River Trent in a dish propelled by oars the size of teaspoons?
    • Source: "boggart-haunted Jenny Hurn Bend ... 'Jenny' was a long-lived Trentside legend, a water sprite called a 'boggart,' diminutive but dangerous, here 'described' by the pioneering folklorist Ethel Rudkin (1893-1985) .... occasionally crosses the river from the western side, embarked in a small craft resembling a large pie-dish. The pygmy propels the dish rapidly across the stream by means of a minute pair of oars, the size of teaspoons" from: Turner, Derek (7 July 2022). Edge of England: Landfall in Lincolnshire. Hurst Publishers. p. 293. ISBN 978-1-78738-887-1.
    Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 848 past nominations.

    Dumelow (talk) 12:17, 27 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Article is new enough, long enough, well sourced and neutral. It's plagiarism free (Earwig 0%) and the hook is cited and interesting. (It might be nice to hyperlink boggart, and/or perhaps add in pie before dish, but neither is neccessary.) The picture used is under free licence, it is clear. QPQ is done. Lovely article. Lajmmoore (talk) 07:04, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Buq Buq labor camp

    • Source: Roumani, Maurice M. “The Changing Fortunes of Libyan Jews under Italian Colonialism.” Jews of Libya: Coexistence, Persecution, Resettlement, Liverpool University Press, 2021, pp. 33–34. JSTOR, https://doi.org/10.2307/j.ctv3029jsr.9. Accessed 27 June 2024.
    Created by Zanahary (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

    Zanahary 12:53, 27 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
    • Interesting: Yes
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: TheNuggeteer (talk) 01:32, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    • Zanahary, you wrote "which made the ordeal easier for the Jews"--can you explain whose opinion that was or how something was easier? Without such context it's kind of an odd statement. Thanks, Drmies (talk) 12:03, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Monumite

    Monumite
    Monumite
    • Source: "Unilever, Marmite’s parent company, says the sculpture in Burton upon Trent will provide a place for fans to “congregate and worship” the salty spread" from: Baker, Rosie (19 October 2010). "Marmite unveils brand shrine". Marketing Week. Retrieved 27 June 2024.<
    Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 849 past nominations.

    Dumelow (talk) 16:34, 27 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 28

    Diamond Lake, Illinois

    5x expanded by SeymourHolcomb (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    SeymourHolcomb (talk) 19:19, 28 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall: @SeymourHolcomb: Hi Seymour, and welcome to Wikipedia and further to DYK! No need to be nervous, we're a pretty chill bunch. Offline sources are fine, as we assume good faith. Great job on inline sourcing. I fixed a minor typo in ALT2; all hooks are good (although I favor ALT0 or ALT1, as I believe they will appeal to the largest audience).

    One small thing: the infobox photo caption calls the church "Vision Church" but the prose calls it "Diamond Lake Church". A quick Google seems to favour calling it "Vision Church", so can this be changed in the body of the article?

    I really don't see any other issues with the article to get it ready for DYK, I just fixed a few minor things, so great job for your first go at it! TCMemoire 15:27, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    I changed the photo so the "Vision Church" disrepency won't be shown. The tense for "Diamond Lake Church" is ambiguous because I could not find concrete proof that Vision Church and Diamond Lake Church are the exact same, despite being Methodist churches on the exact same building. SeymourHolcomb (talk) 20:01, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I can confirm that yes, they are the same church, but without using synth (comparing the map on the "Our Gem" PDF and the location on Google Maps), but I am looking into a source to confirm the name change. SeymourHolcomb (talk) 19:22, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @SeymourHolcomb: Works for me. You're right, they probably are the same church, we just need someone to say it! Going to give this one the approval tick. I did also create a commons category for Diamond Lake, so all photos can nicely be consolidated there. TCMemoire 09:11, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Horton Davies

    Davies in 1963
    Davies in 1963
    • ... that ten years after publishing a book about Great South African Christians, Horton Davies (pictured) gave a speech criticizing South African churches for their role in Apartheid? Source: Great South African Christians, Oxford University Press, 1951 (verifying the book was published in 1951), in "Horton (Marlais) Davies", in Gale Literature: Contemporary Authors (September 28, 2005); Speaking on "The Church in South Africa: a Warning." and Clearly the churches and the synagogues must take some responsibility for the situation as they are the guardian of the nation's conscience," he said ("he" being Horton Davies, verifying his criticism of South African churches in 1961) "Church Role in S. Africa Outlined", The Morning Call, May 11, 1961, p. 10
      • ALT1: ... that during World War II, Horton Davies (pictured) was minister to a church in "Flying Bomb Alley", a part of London nicknamed for the many bombs dropped on it? Source: During the war Professor Davies underwent what he calls his "baptism of fire" while a minister in the section of London called "Flying Bomb Alley" because it received a record number of bombs per square mile, in "The Clergy in Fiction", Oklahoma City Star, October 30, 1959, p. 6.
      • ALT2: ... that Horton Davies (pictured) earned a bachelor's degree after earning a master's degree? Source: Education: University of Edinburgh, M.A., 1937, B.D., 1940, in "Horton (Marlais) Davies", in Gale Literature: Contemporary Authors (September 28, 2005)
      • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Adnan_al-Bursh
      • Comment: For clarity on ALT2, Davies probably also earned a different Bachelor's degree (a BA in English, as he's described in a source written by his wife, which I did not cite in the article as being too close to the subject, as having been an English major) before his MA; his BD, or Bachelor in Divinity, though, was earned after his MA, according to Gale Literature.
    Created by Hydrangeans (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 18 past nominations.

    Hydrangeans (she/her | talk | edits) 03:37, 28 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Approving all hooks on good faith, pref. ALT0 and ALT1. Article is long enough and created same day as DYK nom. Article is well-sourced, presentable, and free from copyvio (where possible, hits on book titles and such). Hooks are sourced, though blocked by login, and the first two hooks are interesting; ALT2 is okay but not particularly eye-catching. Image meets criteria. Thank you for your nomination Hydrangeans! Kimikel (talk) 21:45, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Cannonball (LIRR train)

    The Cannonball
    The Cannonball
    • Source: [24] The only named train operated by the L.I.R.R., the Cannonball first traveled these tracks in the 1890s as an express train between Long Island City and Southampton.
    Improved to Good Article status by ComplexRational (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 8 past nominations.

    Complex/Rational 14:29, 29 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: for ALT1 as I think folks will want to click on parlor car and it meets the criteria. For ALT0, the name bit didn't really make me want to read more into it. I'm also not convinced that the source for ALT0 fully backs up the claim, as it says it's the only one known by a name, not necessarily that it is still known by the same name. Seems a bit synthy. Grk1011 (talk) 13:46, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    @Grk1011: Thanks for the review. There are a couple of other sources throughout the article indicating other named trains no longer run, plus the 2024 timetable and press release that mention the name, but I'm cool sticking with ALT1. Complex/Rational 14:38, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Sport in Vatican City

    5x expanded by Arconning (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Arconning (talk) 09:24, 28 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited: No - See comment
    • Interesting: Yes
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall: Source 1 doesn't seem to mention the facts in the hook, and the second source seems somewhat partisan and I'm somewhat suspicious of the quality of an article starting with "Did You Know". Does the academic source mentioned in the same paragraph in this article ([30]) mention it in any way? That would be much better. Flemmish Nietzsche (talk) 06:42, 29 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

      • @Flemmish Nietzsche: Sadly, the academic source doesn't back the claim up but it does back up the claim that an area in the Vatican was once a chariot racing track. Though I'm not sure what's Wikipedia's and the DYK's policy on "possibly statements" (i.e. ...that sport in Vatican City possibly started in the 1st century, when a chariot racing track was built in what was then ancient Rome?" I suggest using ALT1 instead if that's the case. Though I can make another hook if it isn't interesting enough. Arconning (talk) 06:27, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Arconning I checked that journal I suggested, fand you're right about it not being definite that the chariot track ever actually existed there. ALT1 is not the most interesting, but I could accept it if there's nothing else better you can find. How about "... that sport in Vatican City began in the 16th century with the first ever match of calcio fiorentino, an early form of football?" This might not be the "start" of sport in the area that is now the Vatican, but it seems to be the first major event when that area was under the control of an independent Papal State, so I think it would pass. Flemmish Nietzsche (talk) 07:28, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Flemmish Nietzsche For the hook that you suggested, I'm all for it but with some minor tweaks. Since we can't really determine when sport in Vatican City really started, I think we should put something like "governed by the nation", "started by the nation", or something shorter. (i.e. ... that sport in Vatican City started by the nation began in the 16th century with the first ever match of calcio fiorentino, an early form of football?"). Arconning (talk) 07:38, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Arconning "started by the nation" seems somewhat iffy, as it could be confused with "nation" meaning a group of people sharing a common identity rather than a sovereign state; maybe "state-sponsored" or "officially" would be better? (... that state-sponsored sport in Vatican City began in the 16th century with the first ever match of calcio fiorentino, an early form of football?") Flemmish Nietzsche (talk) 07:45, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Flemmish Nietzsche "Officially" works fine with me. Arconning (talk) 07:49, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    ALT2: ... that sport in Vatican City officially began in the 16th century with the first ever match of calcio fiorentino, an early form of football?" Flemmish Nietzsche (talk) 07:59, 30 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    ABC Cinema, Brighton

    The former ABC Cinema, Brighton, in 2016
    The former ABC Cinema, Brighton, in 2016
    • Source: Allen Eyles (2003), Brighton and Hove Cinemas, p.71. "At midnight on Thursday 8 January 1948, the world premiere of Brighton Rock took place at the Savoy (no other cinema was in the running, as it was made by ABC's associated production company)." (First sentence from a full paragraph about the premiere. The Savoy was the name of the cinema at the time, as noted in the article.)
    Created by Hassocks5489 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 99 past nominations.

    Hassocks5489 (Floreat Hova!) 19:20, 28 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 29

    Doris Ilda Allen

    Doris "Lucki" Allen (center) arriving in Vietnam
    Doris "Lucki" Allen (center) arriving in Vietnam
    Created by Andrew Davidson (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 127 past nominations.

    Andrew🐉(talk) 16:23, 5 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Review
    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: KunalAggarwal95 (talk) 08:04, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    2022 Brink's theft

    • ALT1: ... that the jewelers victimized in the theft from a Brink's truck two years ago today admit they undervalued their wares but argue the company should still pay them full value because it was negligent? Source: "So two months later, Brink’s sued them in a New York federal court, in part accusing the jewelers of breach of contract and of fraud because they had allegedly undervalued their items. 'Brink’s believes that each Defendant seeks to recover more from Brink’s than is permitted under the Contract,' the company wrote in its suit ... Two weeks later, 14 of the 15 victims countersued Brink’s in Los Angeles County Superior Court, seeking $200 million in total damages. (Since then, three have settled for an undisclosed sum.) They accuse the company of negligence for putting their valuables in a lightly protected truck, especially after being warned of heightened security risk at the expo." Same source as above
    • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Barry Burton
    • Comment: As indicated I would really for this to run on July 11. I will be asking at WT:DYK for some expedited review.
    Created by Daniel Case (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 279 past nominations.

    Daniel Case (talk) 06:06, 4 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Someone else can review this, but if I promote I'll be changing 'two years ago today' to 'July 11, 2022' as hooks must not be likely to change and I'll be promoting a version of ALT0 truncated at 'truck' per WP:DYKTRIM.--Launchballer 23:12, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Review underway. I fully reviewed but the edit conflict erased my work. GRRR. Lightburst (talk) 23:33, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    General: Article is new enough and long enough

    Policy compliance:

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited: Yes
    • Interesting: Yes
    • Other problems: Yes
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Thanks for an interesting article. Note: Earwig did not work for me so I spot checked the majority of sources and found that they are accurate and not closely paraphrased. AlT0 is exactly 200 characters and ALT1 is 198 (I struck ALT1 because I do not find it WP:DYKINT. I think ALT0 is the most interesting and it is confirmed by citation in the article. The article has 13 citations cited to Bloomberg which is a cartoon-illustrated article. I do not see why it would not be reliable but it is a curious way to present a serious subject. Also:Launchballer Suggest you do not trim the hook because your suggestion would remove all interest and it is 200 characters so complies with our guidelines. Lightburst (talk) 23:43, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    I've divested the lead of extraneous content and moved the third paragraph up (it makes sense to have 'this was nicked' next to 'here's how'). Airship can adjudicate as to whether the theft of millions of dollars worth of jewelry is interesting on its own.--Launchballer 06:39, 5 July 2024 (UTC
    It is within the 200-character limit, as noted. If it were not, I would not have submitted it. Tell me, what exactly is the point of having that limit if, after taking steps to comply with it, someone nevertheless takes it upon themselves to wade into a discussion and suggest it needs to be trimmed for some reason other than being too wordy?

    Jewel thefts are perhaps interesting on their own. Jewel thefts that occur when one of the guards is sleeping nearby and the other one is off getting fast food are even more interesting, and if we can fit that all into a coherently-written 200-character hook, we should. Daniel Case (talk) 17:42, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Newton Lower Falls Branch

    The "Ping-Pong" at Riverside station
    The "Ping-Pong" at Riverside station
    • Source: Boston Globe, April 6, 1909; Humphrey, Thomas J.; Clark, Norton D. (1986). Boston's Commuter Rail: Second Section. Boston Street Railway Association. ISBN 9780938315025.
    Improved to Good Article status by Pi.1415926535 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 60 past nominations.

    Pi.1415926535 (talk) 06:22, 29 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:51, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    National Coordination Committee Against Corruption and Crime

    Created by Vinegarymass911 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

    Mehedi Abedin 03:00, 30 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Interesting article. All parts of the article are cited with no problems with copyright. The stated hook is also mentioned in the article with proper sourcing. Good to go. Toadboy123 (talk) 14:34, 1 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on June 30

    First Bishops' War

    • ... that despite plans for multiple concentric invasions, the only fighting during the First Bishops' War was in north-east Scotland?
    • Source: Brooks 2005: "The only fighting was in northeast Scotland" and Kenyon & Ohlmeyer 1998a: "Between his allies inside Scotland and the concentric blows from outside the country, the king felt confident of victory."
    Moved to mainspace by CSJJ104 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 13 past nominations.

    CSJJ104 (talk) 21:31, 30 June 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Policy compliance:

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited: Yes
    • Interesting: Yes
    • Other problems: Yes
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: I assume good faith on the references that I can't access, and it's helpful that the nominator included the relevant text. The promoter can choose the hook. SL93 (talk) 00:25, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Anna Smith Spark

    Created by ResonantDistortion (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

    ResonantDistortion 16:27, 1 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    I shall review this. Storye book (talk) 08:23, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]


    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Thank you for this interesting article. Just one minor issue:

    • Neutrality can be a delicate thing. The "nasty, brutish and not short enough" review balances the other reviews, so the body of the article is neutral in that respect. But the header only says "critically well-received", which is not neutral, and sounds like an advertisement. So please neutralise the header?
    • I have given the article a minor copyedit, and added a missing reference. That does not affect this DYK nomination.

    When the neutrality issue is resolved, this nomination should be good to go. Storye book (talk) 09:03, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    • Thank you for the review Storye book. Fair point - as ever I have aimed for neutrality, however this was not wholly reflected in the lead. I have edited the section to try and resolve this. Furthermore your copyedit improvement is most appreciated. ResonantDistortion 22:09, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Stefano Manetti

    Bishop Stefano Manetti
    Bishop Stefano Manetti
    Moved to mainspace by Ergo Sum (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 105 past nominations.

    Ergo Sum 15:16, 1 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Can we say "co-consecrated" instead of "consecrated" in the hook to reflect the citation more accurately? Sohom (talk) 03:32, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Ok. Ergo Sum 04:32, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Sohom (talk) 03:38, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Myinsaing

    • Source: (Than Tun 1959: 122) and (Than Tun 1964: 137) provide the starting and ending dates of the siege: 25 January 1301 and 8 April 1301, respectively.
    (Harvey 1925: 77) for the amount of bribes given to the Mongols.
    Converted from a redirect by Hybernator (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 112 past nominations.

    Hybernator (talk) 00:37, 1 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article created from a redirect one day before nomination. Can't seem to notice any issues, will AGF on the inaccessible & Burmese sources for article and hook. QPQ done. Nice work. B3251(talk) 20:58, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Buangkok MRT station

    • ... that in a rare form of public protest in Singapore, eight white cardboard elephants were put up to lobby for Buangkok MRT station's opening?
    Improved to Good Article status by ZKang123 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 15 past nominations.

    ZKang123 (talk) 01:58, 5 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Policy compliance:

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited: Yes
    • Interesting: Yes
    • Other problems: Yes
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Got GA status 5 days ago, so the article and its hook is okay. I omitted the word "rare" because the sources don't exactly state that this type of protest is rare in Singapore. If the nominator can provide source for the claim then I will reverse it. Mehedi Abedin 13:45, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Well, according to Public demonstrations in Singapore, yes they are rare.--ZKang123 (talk) 14:03, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    @ZKang123: Need an inline citation, because that would be WP:OR if we accept the hook without inline citation that states it is rare or any kind of indication in the source. Mehedi Abedin 14:14, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Other sources [31], [32]--ZKang123 (talk) 03:06, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I think you don't understand. You need a source that clearly states or indicates that "the act of putting eight white cardboard elephants for Buangkok MRT station's opening is a 'rare' form of public protest in Singapore". The two sources you provided talks about rare protest in Singapore but nothing about eight white cardboard elephants for Buangkok MRT station's opening. Mehedi Abedin 05:36, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on July 1

    Tulbaghia acutiloba

    T. acutiloba in bloom
    T. acutiloba in bloom
    • Reviewed: Three Dikgosi Monument
    • Comment: Thank you in advance to the reviewer! I will be looking into completing my QPQ later today! Done!
    Created by Ornithoptera (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 34 past nominations.

    Ornithoptera (talk) 01:12, 7 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Hi Ornithoptera, review follows: article created 1 July and exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I made a small edit that moves one sentence a little away from the source, there is some similarity left but I think on the right side of acceptability given limited options for rewording; hook is interesting enough for me, mentioned in the article and checks out to source cited; image is nice and freely licensed; my only query is on your QPQ, you say you'll be doing it on 7 July but the one you've linked is from 2012 by another user? - Dumelow (talk) 14:59, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks Ornithoptera, looks good to me - Dumelow (talk) 19:18, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Soldiers' and Sailors' Arch

    The Soldiers' and Sailors' Arch
    The Soldiers' and Sailors' Arch
    5x expanded by Epicgenius (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 661 past nominations.

    Epicgenius (talk) 23:09, 1 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Substantial article on its way to higher quality, on fine sources, offline sources accepted AGF, no copyvio obvious. All hooks work, I like ALT1 best, but am told regularly that I have now idea what our readers find interesting. The image is licensed and impressive. Just waiting for qpq. --Gerda Arendt (talk) 16:03, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks for the review @Gerda Arendt and sorry for the delay. I have now done a QPQ. Epicgenius (talk) 15:22, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    thank you --Gerda Arendt (talk) 15:39, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Sophienburg Museum and Archives

    Moved to mainspace by Kimikel (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Kimikel (talk) 00:59, 1 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Article is new enough, long enough, well sourced, plagiarism free and a QPQ is done. ALT0 is cited and interesting, but (from my reading) ALT1 might not work: isn't it that the fort was named after the princess, and the museum is named after the fort? So slightly different in the hook to the article. I might be overthinking though! Lajmmoore (talk) 13:45, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    TESCREAL

    Moved to mainspace by Bluethricecreamman (talk), GorillaWarfare (talk), and JoaquimCebuano (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 21 past nominations.

    GorillaWarfare (she/her • talk) 17:16, 1 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Was a draft until today so new enough and, as I now realise, also long enough. I can't see any problems in the article around copyvio, POV or OR. Sourcing looks good overall and the hook citations appear to be sound and reliable. The hook is certainly interesting because it caught my eye immediately when I was checking my own nomination. QPQ has been done. I think this is fine and it should be promoted. PearlyGigs (talk) 21:17, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Strong Oppose this nomination: An article on this subject was deleted 7 months ago because of weak sourcing. There haven't been any new sources added other than a paper by the two proponents of this theory and lots of other really weak sources. Wikipedia's job isn't to promote anti-vaxx conspiracy theories or other conspiracy theories, of which in my and other people's opinions, this is one. The only people claiming that ANYONE adheres to these multiple philosophies is Torres and Gebru. ---Avatar317(talk) 00:56, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Original admin who closed AfD undeleted it after i proposed appropriate changes. the AfD never came to consensus of conspiracy theory (just u), and deleted it due to lack of WP:N. if u want to delete this again, use AfD again or bug the original admin.Bluethricecreamman (talk) 01:12, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Agreed that that would be a conversation for AfD, not DYK. The article is neutral and adequately sourced. GorillaWarfare (she/her • talk) 01:57, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    The LEAD is well written and neutral, thanks for that.---Avatar317(talk) 03:34, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • I was aware when I did the DYK review that the article is about ideologies, but I don't consider the article to be promoting those ideologies because it is neutral. The subject, in my opinion, is notable. I can't say I'm knowledgeable about TESCREAL but the article does appear to be adequately sourced. I've been reading it again and I still think the hook should be promoted. But, as I say, I am not an SME in this area so I will happily step aside if an SME is needed. Incidentally, the lead is the primary location of the hook material and its two sources. Thanks. PearlyGigs (talk) 09:55, 2 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • I have to second the concerns brought up above: this article was merged in November for poor sourcing and the fact that it seemed to lean very heavily into the op-ed angle of the source it did use. To be clear, I certainly have a great personal distaste for the majority of people who run the majority of software companies, and ethical objections to a good portion of the United States' GDP (I am a diehard Linux user with all of the political implications that entails). However, the implication that "global tech elites" are engaged in a deliberate scheme to carry out eugenics (as one of the sources said from the previous version of this article), based on a collection of op-eds and blog posts where people who hate them say this a bunch of times, seems to raise some rather significant BLP issues. It is somewhat concerning to vaguely imply this in wikivoice as though it's settled fact, and then the citations are to a journal of biosemiotics. jp×g🗯️ 02:17, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Posting on here same stuff as in the Talk Page section:
    A) This article was merged for lack of WP:N. If you consider it still an issue, use WP:AfD or bug the original admin who deleted, merged, than undeleted this. It isn't a valid argument to suggest that it's settled that it deserves to remerged if we've added a ton of sourcing and improved on it. Settle it by starting the process to delete it if you want.
    B) Are there reliable sources indicating that TESCREAL is a significantly derogatory epithet similar to Libtard/Chud? Marc Andreessen self-describes as TESCREAList. Many of these folks regularly ascribe to multiple of these philosophies as transhumanists, ethical altruists, long-termists, etc. Sourcing here does not necessarily imply that every TESCREAList is also a eugenicist, nor do we use WP:SYNTH to suggest that these folks are all eugenicists. There is no mention of eugenicist claims in the third section. Also, we have Big Tech as a wikipedia article along with criticism, which is also a similar "perjorative" against tech companies, and other significant "perjoratives" with negative connotations such as Democrat in Name Only and Cuckservative. These all explain what opinion writers and commentators mean, and why. This article is far more tame than many of those.
    C) That more than a dozen opinions use a term like this should be notable enough. I suspect that any sort of article about philosophies will require opinionated sources or commentaries. Effective altruism includes sourcing from Centre for Effective Altruism and by extension the Effective Altruism Forum, study centers specifically invested in effective altruism and founded by leaders, as well as many opinions.
    D) WP:OPINION applies here, especially for philosphical arguments. I looked for criticisms of TESCREAL. If more are published, we can include them. These sources are WP:SECONDARY, they contain analysis, evaluation, interpretation, or synthesis of the facts, evidence, concepts, and ideas taken from primary sources. Secondary sources are not necessarily independent sources.
    E) If you want to settle WP:BLP, please post in the section on WP:BLPN. We've already started and done this argument. There are multiple sources on WP:PUBLICFIGUREs here alleging that many of these folks use TESCREAL to justify their tech projects, and we make sure to use the word "allege" correctly, as per WP:OPINION, along with the correct sourcing
    Conclusion:) TESCREAL is unliked by some portion of folks on here for some reason. I'm happy to listen to arguments, but I want an argument about why we are suddenly so sensitive about criticism of Elon Musk/etc. for using human extinction for every time someone criticizes his behavior or cars or products. If you are just an elon musk/nick bostrum/etc. fan, than say it and stop throwing mud on an article that contains a criticism of philosophies that occurs often enough that we can gather 20+ sources, including 10 using the term in severe detail to directly dissect the argument that yelling extinction every 15 minutes doesn't mean you've justified your next mega project. Bluethricecreamman (talk) 04:39, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    information Note: In the interests of not duplicating every comment, I'll just note that there is a parallel discussion happening at Talk:TESCREAL#Neutrality (to/from which some of these comments have been copied). GorillaWarfare (she/her • talk) 12:02, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Lewis Worthington Smith

    Created by SL93 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 409 past nominations.

    SL93 (talk) 00:56, 1 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Hook is interesting and appropriately sourced. Article is both long and new enough. No copyvio concerns. QPQ done. I'd wager that The Mechanism of English Style is either suitable as a redirect or an article. Great work! ~ Pbritti (talk) 15:50, 1 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]


    Articles created/expanded on July 2

    Accessibility of transport in London

    London Taxi with wheelchair ramp
    London Taxi with wheelchair ramp
    Moved to mainspace by Turini2 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Turini2 (talk) 12:44, 2 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall: Some problems need fixing. TheNuggeteer (talk) 02:29, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    I've made changes and comments as required to the article. I think I'd like to focus on the positive hooks, with this photo instead? Turini2 (talk) 11:29, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    London bus with wheelchair ramp
    I think I found a better hook.
    I think that is more interesting as since the TfL bus fleet has been accessible for a while. but since the LU is the oldest metro systems, its partially accessible with only a third. Also with taxis, I assume you're talking about the TfL ones since other services like Uber likely don't have the accessibility scheme in place and use a normal car. I also think something that is not mostly accessible is better and more interesting that those that are fully accessible. For example, a hook stating that the Elizabeth line is fully accessible (even including the old stations) wouldn't be interesting as new(er) systems are expected to be accessible/have step free systems. JuniperChill (talk) 09:36, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Sure, I'm happy to go with that hook with a minor tweak for "step-free"- yes, I mean "London black taxi", technically Uber is not a taxi (Vehicle for hire). I didn't want to be too negative about accessibility, but the Tube one is balanced. Could use the lead photo - unsure on caption though! Turini2 (talk) 10:51, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Sorry for the late reply as I was out and about. Anyway, I don't really need to see the point of the photo if we are talking about 1/3rd of LU stations accessible since I cannot think what demonstrates it, plus its very tight for images on DYK because only one image a day (or two images a day in the event of a backlog) for the ~8 hooks. Also @TheNuggeteer:, what do you think of the new hook as you initially reviewed it? JuniperChill (talk) 16:23, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    I think "only" should be removed, but other than that, it's fine. 🍗TheNuggeteer🍗 23:38, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    All other issues with the article are now resolved (it has a more substantive lead, fixed words etc) Turini2 (talk) 09:03, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Now its time to turn the signal green now that the hook issue has been fixed. I didn't know step-free has a hyphen so I'm fine with that alongside removing the 'only'. JuniperChill (talk) 10:36, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Capital Bicycle Club

    Sketch of Capital Bicycle Club uniform, 1883
    Sketch of Capital Bicycle Club uniform, 1883
    • Source: Bloom, John (2015). "The Extraordinary History of Cycling and Bike Racing in Washington, DC". In Elzey, Chris; Wiggins, David K. (eds.). DC Sports: The Nation's Capital at Play. pages 3–5
    Created by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 57 past nominations.

    Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 19:18, 3 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
    • Interesting: Yes
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Looks good. Nice work. AGF on hook source. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:56, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Riley Gale

    Riley Gale in 2019
    Riley Gale in 2019
    • ... that a critic compared vocalist Riley Gale (pictured) to a "rabid wolf"?
    Converted from a redirect by Kimikel (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Kimikel (talk) 01:21, 3 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Kimikel Article meets DYK standards – well-sourced, neutral, and free of plagiarism (the article is a defo must-read, pretty nice writing for a short article). The source comes from a reliable source which is... the bare minimum but yeah it works! The image supplied works as well, pretty nice quality. Original alt works. Arconning (talk) 15:42, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]


    Articles created/expanded on July 3

    Pinxton Castle

    • ... that the moat around Pinxton Castle was inside the perimeter walls, rather than outside?
    • Source: [35] "The site at Pinxton is fairly unusual in that the moat is located inside a larger fortified enclosure."
    • Reviewed:
    Created by Doug Weller (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Doug Weller talk 10:19, 7 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Hi Doug Weller, nice article, review follows: article moved to mainspace on 3 July and exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't spot any overly close paraphrasing and text taken from the source has been appropriately quoted; hook fact is interesting, mentioned in the article and checks out to source cited; no QPQ required. Looks fine to me - Dumelow (talk) 11:00, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Page Ackerman

    Created by SL93 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 410 past nominations.

    SL93 (talk) 01:38, 3 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    William P. Dole

    • Source: Kelsey, Harry (1979). "William P. Dole (1861–1865)". In Kvasnicka, Robert M.; Viola, Herman J. (eds.). The Commissioners of Indian Affairs, 1824-1977. Lincoln: University of Nebraska Press. pp. 139-140
    William P. Dole, 1860s
    William P. Dole, 1860s
    Created by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 58 past nominations.

    Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 19:26, 3 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    • Cited: Yes - Offline/paywalled citation accepted in good faith
    • Interesting: Yes
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Epicgenius (talk) 15:21, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Scott Jarvis (actor)

    Created by 4meter4 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 83 past nominations.

    4meter4 (talk) 17:28, 3 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • This looks good! Long enough, eligible, no evidence of copyvio, QPQ done. Hook is cited in-article. I'll have to AGF on the source itself, but otherwise everything seems good. Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 03:25, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Doreen Lofthouse

    Fisherman's Friend lozenges
    Fisherman's Friend lozenges
    • Source: "the shape of the lozenge is based on the design of the buttons on one of the dresses Doreen Lofthouse wore to the office" from: Chrystal, Paul (30 June 2021). The History of Sweets. Pen and Sword History. pp. 63–64. ISBN 978-1-5267-7886-4.
    Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 850 past nominations.

    Dumelow (talk) 10:08, 3 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Reviewing... New enough, long enough, QPQ provided, reads well, hooks are interesting. Will complete soon Whispyhistory (talk) 10:52, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
      ... Earwig's copyvio~10%, hooks are all in the article followed by citations to references containing the relevant hooks. All 3 hooks are interesting. The image is free. Another very enjoyable work by the author, thank you. Passing proposed hook as alt1 and 2 are too long. Whispyhistory (talk) 11:14, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Cocoa production in São Tomé and Príncipe

    Cocoa harvested in São Tomé and Príncipe
    Cocoa harvested in São Tomé and Príncipe
    • Source: Drew, Keith (6 July 2023). "How the Chocolate Islands are rediscovering their roots". BBC. Retrieved 28 June 2024. The trees thrived in the rich volcanic soil, and by the early 1900s, São Tomé and Príncipe was the biggest exporter of cacao in the world, earning it the nickname of 'The Chocolate Islands'.
    • ALT1: ... that São Tomé and Príncipe was known as "the Chocolate Islands" in the early 1900s, when it was the world's top exporter of cocoa (samples pictured)? Source: Same as above.
    • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Emmanuella Atora
    • Comment: Technically, São Tomé and Príncipe is a singular country (a Portuguese colony at the time mentioned in the hook). The hook should therefore use singular conjugations of verbs, but it sounded too odd upon my initial reading. I thus changed the verbs to their plural conjugations, as if the islands themselves are being described rather than the modern country or the former colony. I have nonetheless included my original wording as ALT1, in case the reviewer or promoter wants to compare the two.
    Created by Yue (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 9 past nominations.

    Yue🌙 07:35, 3 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Hi Yue, review follows: article created 3 July and exceeds minimum length; I reworded one sentence slightly to move it further from the source, but otherwise I don't think there is an issue with overly close paraphrasing; article is cited inline throughout to what look to be reliable sources for the subject; hook fact is interesting, mentioned in the article and checks out to source cited (BBC); a QPQ has been provided; image is properly licensed and looks fine. I changed from single to double quotation marks in the hooks to match the article and, I think, our MOS. In terms of plurals I think English_plurals#Geographical_plurals_used_as_singular discusses this; either alternative sounds OK to me but British English tends to be a bit more flexible than US English on this (see eg. Wikipedia:Manual_of_Style#Plurals) - Dumelow (talk) 09:40, 3 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Dumelow: Thank you for taking the time to do this review! On second thought, maybe ALT1 is the better choice because ALT0 implies that there were two exporters instead of one. Yue🌙 02:53, 4 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on July 4

    George Hunter Cary

    Created by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 59 past nominations.

    Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 06:33, 4 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Quintus et Ultimus Watson

    • Reviewed:
    Created by Aquabluetesla (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Aquabluetesla (talk) 17:14, 4 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Review

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: None required.

    Overall: What's most interesting about this guy is his unusual name, which the article doesn't explain. Perhaps someone will figure it out when we run it. Andrew🐉(talk) 15:54, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Looking further at this, I find a source which comments on the name without really explaining it. It's The Strangest Names in American Political History and there are three of them. What a great triple hook they would have made.... Andrew🐉(talk) 21:13, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Big Duck, Domestic duck

    The Big Duck
    The Big Duck
    Improved to Good Article status by RoySmith (talk) and Chiswick Chap (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 39 past nominations.

    RoySmith (talk) 18:43, 4 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on July 5

    Clover Point

    Pedestrian view of Clover Point
    Pedestrian view of Clover Point
    • ... that untreated sewage was dumped directly into the ocean from Clover Point (pictured) until 2020?
    • Reviewed:
    Created by Clovermoss (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Clovermoss🍀 (talk) 18:45, 7 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • New article of good length. Sources look fine and I didn't find any copyright issues. The hook is interesting and short. The picture is freely licensed and works in a small format. Third nomination, so QPQ is not needed. Seems like everything is good and ready to go, well done! Ffranc (talk) 11:53, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Microhodotermes viator

    Created by Zanahary (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

    Zanahary 12:50, 5 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Looks good. Pending QPQ. BeanieFan11 (talk) 15:44, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Did the QPQ! Sorry for the wait BeanieFan11 Zanahary 04:57, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    BeanieFan11 (talk) 17:25, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    2024 Rose Bowl

    5x expanded by PCN02WPS (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 77 past nominations.

    PCN02WPS (talk | contribs) 03:09, 6 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General eligibility:

    Policy compliance:

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited: Yes
    • Interesting: Yes
    • Other problems: Yes
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Ready to go. Sahaib (talk) 15:51, 6 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Tobey (song)

    Created by Launchballer (talk) and Dxneo (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 236 past nominations.

    Launchballer 09:26, 5 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    Henry Donch

    Created by Generalissima (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 60 past nominations.

    Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 02:37, 5 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:18, 5 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on July 6

    Suriname at the 1960 Summer Olympics

    5x expanded by Arconning (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 7 past nominations.

    Arconning (talk) 15:06, 6 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General eligibility:

    Policy compliance:

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited: Yes
    • Interesting: Yes
    • Other problems: Yes
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Happy for this to be approved once ALT1 mentioned below is added :) Arcahaeoindris (talk) 07:57, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    This hook is super interesting and the article is great. I think maybe the hook needs rewording though as it's not clear that this "peace" came more than four decades later. How about "four decades after missing an event at the 1960 Summer Olympics, Suriname's sole athlete was found to have not "overslept"? I'm also waiting on the plagiarism checker to worki again. Arcahaeoindris (talk) 04:34, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Arcahaeoindris So that would be "... that four decades after missing an event at the 1960 Summer Olympics, Suriname's sole athlete was found to have not "overslept"? " Arconning (talk) 15:06, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Arconning: yes, that sounds good. Please can you add this as Alt1? Thanks! Arcahaeoindris (talk) 07:55, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Once approved, please place this nomination in the Olympics: Special occasion holding area

    Libotonius

    Libotonius pearsoni fossil
    Libotonius pearsoni fossil
    • ... that some of the first likely Libotonius (pictured) fossils collected are lost at the Smithsonian?
    • Source: Wilson 1978 doi:10.1139/e78-075 "Since then Pearson's collection was forwarded to, but never accessioned in, the Smithsonian Institution. and it cannot now be located.
      Wilson 1979 doi:10.2307/1443214 "Pearson's specimens cannot be located, but they probably included specimens of the new species described here, rather than a species of the similar Erismatopterus"
    • ALT1: ... that Libotonius (pictured) are small fish, with adults ranging between just 10.6–40.0 mm (0.42–1.57 in)? Source: Wilson 1977 Page 44 L. blakeburnensis GENERAL FEATURES Summary statistics for the species are given in Table 5. The known specimens (Fig. 13) represent only a small size range, from about 30 to possibly 40 mm
      Wilson 1979 doi:10.2307/1443214 L. pearsoni Description.-All specimens small compared with other Eocene percopsiforms, ranging from 10.6–20.8 mm (0.42–0.82 in) standard length
    Moved to mainspace by Kevmin (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 354 past nominations.

    Kevmin § 15:00, 8 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems

    Hook eligibility:

    • Cited: Yes
    • Interesting: No - ALT0 is interesting, ALT1 isn’t super thrilling for me, but I would let the readers decide.
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: I like ALT0 the best, but both are cleared awkwafaba (📥) 02:41, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    2000 Cambodian coup d'état attempt

    Created by Arcahaeoindris (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 11 past nominations.

    Arcahaeoindris (talk) 15:25, 6 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Looks good. Nice work. BeanieFan11 (talk) 20:21, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Charles Tottenham, 8th Marquess of Ely

    Created by Roc0ast3r (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

     RONIN  TALK  20:26, 6 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Hi Roc0ast3r, interesting article; review follows: article created 6 July and exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources for the subject matter; I didn't pick up any overly close paraphrasing in a spotcheck on sources; hooks are interesting, mentioned in the article and check out to the sources cited; a QPQ is not required. Looks fine to me, nice work - Dumelow (talk) 07:56, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on July 7

    Mary Jane Patterson

    • ... that Mary Jane Patterson, daughter of a slave, was the first African American woman to gain a BA degree, having taken a 'gentleman's course'?
    • Source: Blakemore, Erin (2017-05-23)' How the Daughter of a Slave Became the First African American to Earn a Bachelor's Degree.' Time
    • ALT1: ... that Mary Jane Patterson was the first Black principal of a famous high school in Washington DC? Source: Stewart, A (2013) First Class: The legacy of Dunbar, America's first Black Public School. Chicago. Ill: Lawrence Hill Books p 32
    • Reviewed:
    Improved to Good Article status by Balance person (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

    Balance person (talk) 11:52, 8 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article was promoted to Good Article within the last couple of days, is easily long enough, well written and copiously referenced. In my opinion the original hook, about being the first to get a BA degree, is best - very interesting indeed. The fact is cited immediately after it, in the lead introduction, to a page hosted on the university website. If I was being picky I'd say the info about achieving a BA degree should be included in the main body of the article too, because the lead intro is normally a summary of the main article. But the GA reviewers didn't have an issue with this, so I'm happy to say good to go to the next stage. Sionk (talk) 17:59, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Hunter River Railway Company

    • Reviewed:
    Created by Willthorpe (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 5 past nominations.

    Will Thorpe (talk) 13:00, 7 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Interesting article. Article is within policy, cited to reliable sources, and no copyright violation detected. Hook fact is verified to the cited source. However the hook statement itself is not currently explicitly stated in the article. We need the hook fact clearly presented in the article with similar language with an inline citation before this can be promoted.4meter4 (talk) 18:04, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    4meter4 I’ve reworded it, does this suffice? Will Thorpe (talk) 00:54, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @Willthorpe You misunderstood what I said. I didn't need you to change the hook fact, I needed you to add as inline citation inside the article itself (along with making the text of the hook fact appear in the article's body). We can only promote hooks where the hook content is written with similar language in the article and where that information is directly followed by an inline citation. Currently the Great Northern Railway is only mentioned in the lead and without an inline citation. We need to see the content of the hook fact in the body of the article and with an inline citation. That will require you editing the article to make it compliant with DYK's requirements. Best.4meter4 (talk) 13:55, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    @4meter4 Oh! I’m afraid you’ve missed it! It’s in the ’Legacy’ section at the end of the article. I figure that featuring citations in the lede is usually bad practice as the content is elaborated on further down, with references there. Will Thorpe (talk) 14:41, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks I see it now. Looks good. Approving the hook for promotion.4meter4 (talk) 16:55, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Frederick Perceval, 11th Earl of Egmont

    Created by Roc0ast3r (talk). Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

     RONIN  TALK  02:35, 8 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Hi Roc0ast3r, nice article on an interesting subject; review: article created 7 July and exceeds minimum length; article is well written and cited inline throughout to reliable sources; I didn't pick up any issues with overly close paraphrasing in a spotcheck; hook facts are interesting, mentioned in the article and check out to sources cited, I would be a little wary of ALT1 as the article (and source) state that he later regretted not taking up his seat, happy to leave to the discretion of the promoter; no QPQ is required. I picked up the dates of his eligibility for the Lords (stated in the infobox) are not cited, if these can be added or removed this should be good to go - Dumelow (talk) 07:39, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Thanks Roc0ast3r, all good to go - Dumelow (talk) 15:17, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Victory Vertical

    US Air Force personnel with a Victory Vertical in 1945
    US Air Force personnel with a Victory Vertical in 1945
    • ... that the Victory Vertical piano (pictured) was developed in 1942 to be parachuted to US troops?
    • Source: "The first prototype for the Victory Vertical pianos was prepared for government inspection by June 1942, after Theodore E. Steinway received a request from the U.S. government’s War Production Board for heavy-duty military pianos" from: Sparks, Alyssa (9 June 2019). "The Steinway Victory Vertical Piano Project". The Messenger. Retrieved 3 July 2024. and "Around 5,000 special models of piano called the ‘Victory Vertical’ or ‘G.I. Steinways’ were made during the Second World War; a small piano designed to be carried on ships or dropped by parachute from an airplane to bring music to the soldiers on the battlefield." from: Hall, Sophia Alexandra (5 May 2022). "During World War II Steinway pianos were parachuted onto battlefields to provide relaxation". Classic FM. Retrieved 3 July 2024.
    Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 851 past nominations.

    Dumelow (talk) 08:41, 7 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]


    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    Image: Image is freely licensed, used in the article, and clear at 100px.
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: I prefer the first hook. The issue noted above re the expansion needs to be addressed. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:1C0D:29BD:F02A:DC84 (talk) 23:47, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Hi, thanks for the review. Note that I nominated this as a new article, not an expansion. This article didn't exist in Mainspace until it was moved on 7 July; it had lingered as a draft in my userspace from 2023. This is permitted under Wikipedia:Did_you_know/Guidelines#Newness ("For DYK purposes, an article is considered new if, within the last seven days, the article has been ... moved from userspace or draftspace into mainspace") - Dumelow (talk) 08:08, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    Ah - apologies. Nicely done. Good to go. 2603:7000:2101:AA00:E9A0:8637:BE9D:BB0E (talk) 21:45, 8 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Côte d'Ivoire–Ghana Cocoa Initiative

    • ... that Ghana and Ivory Coast have been accused of setting up a cocoa cartel?
    Created by Yue (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 10 past nominations.

    Yue🌙 00:26, 7 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Love it! Great article, thorough and balanced, facially eligible, source is cited and in article. That the organization is greedy or corrupt seems a prominent enough perspective that I don’t think it’s undue for the hook.Zanahary 04:55, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    • Oh, and I made a little tweak to the hook so the link includes the grammatical article, since the article is about one supposed cartel, not cocoa cartels in general. Zanahary 04:55, 7 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on July 8

    Verna Osborne

    • ... that San Francisco voice teacher Verna Osborne retired at the age of 101?
    Created by 4meter4 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 85 past nominations.

    4meter4 (talk) 18:13, 8 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Looks mostly good. Nice work. The only issue I see, @4meter4:, is that there appears to be excessive citations in the second paragraph of the body. Is it necessary to include 16 references for the statement She had her own regular radio program on WOR, Verna Osborne, Songs, from 1933-1936? BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:03, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Yes, because each reference is just covering a single program. I provided a representative sampling across time to demonstrate that it was a recurring program. There are many more of this kind. I couldn’t find a source talking about the program in a long term way to replace these. Best.4meter4 (talk) 16:36, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]
    OK. I'm not an expert with this, so I'll let it pass. BeanieFan11 (talk) 16:42, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    National Casket Company

    Ol' Rip in his casket
    Ol' Rip in his casket
    • Source: "A wooden, hand-carved mahogany casket, model 2040, was the chosen vessel for McKinley’s ornate resting place — at least at first, Beardsley explained. The Oneida casket was apparently used for the funeral services, and later McKinley was transferred into another casket, made in Ohio, for the actual entombment. A New York Times article from September 15, 1901 reads: '[McKinley’s casket] was furnished by the National Casket Company of Oneida and is elaborate in design. It is made of solid crotched Santo Domingo mahogany. It measures 6 feet 3 inches in length, is 22 inches wide, and 20 inches deep inside.'" from: Stone, Carly (4 November 2022). "Famed casket company in Oneida recalled". Rome Sentinel. Retrieved 8 July 2024. and "Will Wood had Old Rip preserved, courtesy of the Barrow Undertaking Company. The National Casket Company provided a tiny casket" from: Newton, Teresa S. "Old Rip". Texas Parks and Wildlife. Retrieved 8 July 2024.
    Moved to mainspace by Dumelow (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 852 past nominations.

    Dumelow (talk) 20:54, 8 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    • Article is new enough and long enough. It is well-sourced, presentable, neutral, and BLP-compliant. Earwig is mostly picking up on proper nouns. The hook is cited and interesting. I would use U.S. and not US as this is an American company and maybe shorten the hook to just Ol' Rip, leaving off the Horned Toad if the image is used. QPQ has been done. The image has a free license, is used in the article, and renders well at a small size. Good job. gobonobo + c 02:02, 9 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

    Articles created/expanded on July 10

    Aoi Koga

    • ... that Aoi Koga's decision to pursue voice acting was partly inspired by a childhood desire to "become friends with dolls"? Source: [36] ("小さいとき、お人形たちと仲良しになりたいって思ったのが、こういった道に進んだきっかけでした。")
      • ALT1: ... that voice actress Aoi Koga has an interest in manhole covers? Source: [37] (私、実はマンホールが好きで、地方に行くとよく“ご当地限定マンホール”をチェックしているんですが、鎌倉ですごく可愛いマンホールを見つけたんです。大きいマンホールの真ん中に“鎌”ってデザインされているやつで、見つけた瞬間携帯のシャッターを切っちゃいました(笑)。マンホールって地方によって柄が全然違ったり、キャラクターデザインのマンホールもあったりするので、普段から見落とさないように注意深く歩いています(笑)。)
      • Reviewed: Template:Did you know nominations/Kikunosuke Toya
      • Comment: Requesting a special occasion request for August 24 (her birthday). Given that today is just outside the six-week requirement, I already requested an IAR exemption at WT:DYK.
    Improved to Good Article status by Narutolovehinata5 (talk). Number of QPQs required: 1. Nominator has 106 past nominations.

    Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contributions) 01:12, 10 July 2024 (UTC).[reply]

    General: Article is new enough and long enough
    Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
    Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
    QPQ: Done.

    Overall: Everything checks out! Skyshiftertalk 04:37, 10 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]