Talk:Harry Daghlian/GA1
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Reviewer: Ian Rose (talk · contribs) 09:40, 7 August 2015 (UTC)
Actually heard of this poor fella, should be able to review this w/e. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 09:40, 7 August 2015 (UTC)
Apologies for not getting to this sooner...
Toolbox checks -- no dab or EL issues.
Prose/structure/detail -- split longish first sentence, no other issues I could see.
Images -- licensing looks fine.
Referencing
- I'd have expected his birth date to mentioned/cited in the Early life section.
Done Added. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:10, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
- Would Dion really be considered an RS?
- According to source 7, he was "an adjunct professor of bioscience and biotechnology at Drexel University, Philadelphia, [who] has spent four years gathering information on early nuclear fatalities". I've replaced all the Dion footnotes with other sources, but left it as footnote 10 so readers can see images of the memorial and the ceremony. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:10, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
- Okay, checked everything added since I last looked at it and happy to pass as GA. Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 11:58, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
- According to source 7, he was "an adjunct professor of bioscience and biotechnology at Drexel University, Philadelphia, [who] has spent four years gathering information on early nuclear fatalities". I've replaced all the Dion footnotes with other sources, but left it as footnote 10 so readers can see images of the memorial and the ceremony. Hawkeye7 (talk) 10:10, 16 August 2015 (UTC)
Cheers, Ian Rose (talk) 06:39, 16 August 2015 (UTC)